Arnav's NAUGHTY Deeds (The CVs borrowed from this)

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Dee (Daisy)

@drdee142

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#141

Hey not fair Mary, you cannot leave us hanging, we deifnitely need a sequel to see the result of the present, you stopped just as things were getting so interesting.

So when are you writing the sequel to this 😆 and I can imagine you coming up with another interesting title to your sequel.

looking forward to reading further (trying to force you to write the sequel) 😃

Dee

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Marybarton

@Marybarton

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+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#142

Does anyone know which designer made that sari? I just love it!

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LAKSHMI

@barunslakku

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#143

its excellent...loved it...very nice writing

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Honkytonk

@Honkytonk

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#144

Totally loved Arnav's come back for Khushi!!! But was really sweet of him to do the romantic dinner and dance and staying back at the hotel for the night!!!

Many thanks for PM

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bablio09

@bablio09

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#145

nicely written mary ! loved it.

its a treat to visualise Arnav and khushi in these scenes.

and dont leave to our imagination ... continue would like to see how Arnav react's to his sexxy wife

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Marybarton

@Marybarton

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: drdee142
Hey not fair Mary, you cannot leave us hanging, we deifnitely need a sequel to see the result of the present, you stopped just as things were getting so interesting.

So when are you writing the sequel to this 😆 and I can imagine you coming up with another interesting title to your sequel.

looking forward to reading further (trying to force you to write the sequel) 😃

Dee

No worries there will be a sequel. A steamy one once I get a little chunk of time in my hands.

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mythalivasan

@myths_vaz

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#147

Just tooo good. Mary really enjoyed reading. Continue writing

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l.o.v.e.

@l.o.v.e.

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#148

awesome writing,plzzz conti. soon &plzzz... PM meee...

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Gunjan Mukherjee

@gunjanmkj

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#149

ooo...sensual n naughty ;):p asr in dis avatar will surely b a treat 4 all of us girls :p hw his evry move mks us go weak in d knees :p bechari khushi..she has to handle his hotness along wid his naughty mind :p

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#150

wow! that was simply hilarious... khushi's suspicion and wariness were bang on! what a relief to go through your humorous update... the game of upmanship is really interesting! I look forward to your story more than I do to the serial, nowadays... just hope when things get better b/w the two [in the show] we'll get such an interaction, instead of him faking his romance as he is doing now