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Purplevalley

@Ocean.eyes

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#741

Originally posted by: shaffy_arsha

n dn't take tensn meri engangment tu aisi krwa dio..lolzzz

deetha u got 1 on ur list..
Lolz

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shaffy_arsha

@shaffy_arsha

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#742

Originally posted by: Arsha1994
Wow...deetha..
I luvd it...
D sng was superb...der dance depicted d naughty rey...
Rey cares so much fr his bc..
D i luv u scene was 2gud...
Awesum engagement...
It cud hav nor been better thn dis...
..plzz update d nxt prt soon...ur makin m greedy wid ur updates...

i too agree da dance is dedicated only n only to naughty rey 😉

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shaffy_arsha

@shaffy_arsha

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#743

Originally posted by: true_ArShafan
till now i read dis 20 time rey's dialogue was awesome want more felt like i'm in dat engagement wid dem u r a super writer
update next part soon please

agree she is

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shaffy_arsha

@shaffy_arsha

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#744

Originally posted by: mEgical_arsha

Deethaaa...kaisi hai ??😉
i know u are really angry on me !
but u noe the reason.😡..actuallly not only in ur FF ...m not being able to comment on any...actually mera unread msg abhi 72 hai !!!!!😕
thinking to complete it as sooon as possible !!!
but starting frm u...😊
m reallly sry yaaar !!!😭
pls understand my condition !
i hope u do...
now coming to the updates~😃
i really luved each nd every part to the core-❤️whether it is romance,teasing,
blushing,ceremonies or any other thing !!!👏⭐️👍🏼

some lines i luved ~😳

all girls winked at each other...neha and simmi stood up...neha srtd running and simmi caught her hands 4rm back...neha blushing and trying to free herself...

neha: rey chodiye na...

simmi: chodne keliye thodi pakda hai meri jaan...

kriya looked at them with wide mouth...

simmi pulled neha towards her...

neha: rey plzz...koi dekhlega toh...

simmi forcely turned neha towards her...

simmi: dekhe toh dekhne do...ek baar toh kiss kardo...

neha pushed simmi...simmi caught neha against her with neha's wrist pinning to her back...

simmi: kya hai kriya...humesha romance ke beech mei disturb karti ho...

neha: rey...

simmi leaned in and acted as if kissing...

kriya blushed to core and looking down...all strtd laughing loud ...and making kriya blush more...

sh: kk mister flirt ab khatam hogayi toh mai jaun kriya ko neeche leke jaana hai...

r: mai lekar aaun???

she raised her eyebrow...

r: i promised sirf lekar aaunga😆

so well done and keep it up dear !!!👏
do continue sooon nd PM me !!!😊
hope tum meko maaf kr do...plsss😭

mwaaahhh !!!🤗

mee to love dis part alot

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shaffy_arsha

@shaffy_arsha

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#745

Originally posted by: --Kinjal--
jaldi kar..

yesss jaldi kr

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shaffy_arsha

@shaffy_arsha

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#746

Originally posted by: --Kinjal--
Just 1 pg remaining dear...

yeah 1 more to go

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shaffy_arsha

@shaffy_arsha

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#747

Originally posted by: luv_arsha
awesome update deetha...loved it very much
the scenes where lights were gone before gangs dance was awesome rey is soo cute he cares for kria soo much rey understands before she says any thing and the dance it was awesome loved the song and description and the way rey proposes kria in front of every one was awesome
loved it very much
continue soon waiting eagerly for next part

agree rey is dam cute

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Purplevalley

@Ocean.eyes

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#748

Loved their dance...songs were perfect...both the songs were amazing

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shaffy_arsha

@shaffy_arsha

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#749

Originally posted by: RockStarHuda
Congragulations For 100 Pages
Update Was Super Duper Awesome... i Really Liked The Dancing Section.. The Way You Described Is Awesome


This Dialogue Was Super

r: ek ladka tha...uske dost ,maa,papa,dance, parties, luxory ,paisa ...iske alawa usse kuch nai pata...actually yahi uski duniya thi...par ek din achanak se ek ladki uski zindagi mai aayi thi...unki pehli mulakaat jhagde se hua... aur wo bina use pata bataye...uski nishani uss ladke ke paas chodke chali gayi...uss ladke ne bohut mushil se uss ladki ko bhul ke jab aage bad raha tha tab wahi ladki phir se uski zindagi mai aayi...phir se jhagda...par iss baar uss ladki ne bohut beimandari se uss ladke ko usski duniya se bahar kheech ke hamesha keliya apni duniya mai khaid kar liya...jaan na chahte ho wo ladka aur ladki koun hai???? wo ladki hai...wahi jo aaj dulhan banke waha khadi hai...( guys she stood as he spoke) ...and wo ladka mai hun...another spot light roamed around the hall and fell on him...kriya strtd walking to him slowly as he spoke...kriya maine aaj tak ye baat tumse nai kaha...aur nahi tum mujhse...kyun ki hume kehne ki jaroorat nai padi...hum ek doosre ki dil ko padhpaye...par mai aaj ye baath kehna chahta hun...


Whole Update Was Perfect

agree perfect part...

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Deetha.

@Deetha.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#750

chalo guys im back...with an ...kya padh rahe ho??? obviously update hi hoga na...ab yaha chodke neeche padho...

second step of togetherness...

****rang laye tere naam ki mehandi****

the engagement was really tyring day to every one ...the gang ,parents and especially kriyaansh...sab ke aashirwaad lena...meeting the guest (formality hoti hai guys sab ko milna...agar nai bhi hoti toh meri ff mai hoti hai...😆),taking snaps with everyone...bid bye to every one ...and last but not the least bid bye to each other...(ye sabse badi mushkil baat hai na...😛)

morning...

it was a busy hall...sharon shouting at someone as she didnt get the arrangements and decorations ri8...neha ordering servants where,what ,and how flowers should be placed and sticked(on walls) ,vishaka instructing the caterers...simmi doing some final touches of theirs.,...along with kriya's dress instructing designers how it should be ...rinni seeing all the arrangements of the mehandi...and special mehandi 4r dulhan...

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dulha

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hall was really ...quite...😆 rey's parents were out for distributing wedding cards...(same in case of kriya's n swayam's parents..) all boys on the couch... devdas mood...swayam's hand on his cheek...vicky caught his forehead...nil's hands underhis chin...amar looking down...and bharat watching all with a disgusting look...😆

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******dil se re...dil se re******

r: hello...

k: gud mrng rey...

r: good mrng baatcutter itni jaldi uth gayi????

k: jaldi??? rey aap mazak kar rahe ho...its 9:30...utho...

r: kya??? hmm...dekhona tum agar sapne mei aati ho toh tym ka pata nai chalta...

k: blushed...toh aapki sapne mei mai aayi thi kya???

r: haan...kyun tere sapne mei mai nai aaya???

k: nai...

r: kya????

he heard her chuckling...

r: acha bachu ...ab meri kaan keech rahi ho...u have to pay 4r this kriya...

k: acha ...toh batayiye kya karna hai??

r: hmmm...tumhe kuch nai karna hai...bas chup rehna padega baaki sab mai kardoonga...

k: kya???

r: luv u baatcutter ...*muah* bye...

k: rey...are kaatdiya...arghh!!!!!!!! rey aap kya baat karte ho...kuch samaj mei nahi aata...

she rushed down as she was freshened...

k: sweetu...sweetu...kaha ho???

sh: tumhare peeche...

she turned and gave a big smile...the hugged...

sh: subah subah itni khush...wah maan na padega rey ko...bas ek call se poora khush kar deta hai...

k: tumhe kaise pata ki mei rey se baat kar ke aa rahi hun.???

sh: tere cherepe likha hai...acha ye sab chodo mere saath chalo...

k: kaha???

sh: arrey chalo...

she took kriya to simmi...by now all girls gathered...

sh: kriya ye dekho aaj ki teri mehandi ki dress...simmi ne specially banwaya...

kriya was dumbstruck...she was jst able to say..."awesome"...

k: thank u simmi...she hugged her...

simmi: always welcome...

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k: (dreamily) rey ko bohut pasand aayega...

all: ooo!!!!!!!!!!!

she came back to senses and blushed...

vi: par dude aaj na ye sapna dekhna bandh karo...

ne: ha kriya...no thinking u abt rey today...

k: kyun??

ri: clapped her hands...kyun ki(excitedly)...kyun ki...(she frgt)

sh: (hit her head) coz aaj tum rey se nai milogi...

k: kya???

sh: haa kriya bhool gayi...mehandi...only girls...exclusive ...no boys...!!!!!!

simmi: and bohut saara masti...

all: (except kriya) yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!!

sh: arey kriya plzz yaar jab se rey aur tum milgaye tum toh hame bhool hi gayi...

all: haaan/...

all showed fake anger...

K: arey nahi...theek hai chalo...aaj mai sabse pehle dance karti hun...kk ...all smiled...kk girls party tym...

all: yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!

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rey ran down the stairs with full on excitement...and hugged swayam...

r: yaar im very happy...u know baatcutter ne khud caal kiya...she is soo sweet...

sw: abe chup reh...already hum sab bohut dukhi hai...

rey looked at every one...

r: par kyun??? (confused but still happy)

all looked at him...bursted into laugh...

sw: humara yeh haal hai toh iska kya hoga???

vi: bechara mar jayega...

all hi-fived each other laughing leaving confused rey...

r: mera kya haal hoga and kyun hoga???

amar: klun ki aaj tum tele tliya konai dekh sakta...

r: kya??

nil: he means aaj tum kriya ko nai dekh sakte ho...

r: kyun???(stood up) all laughed...

vi: pulling him back to couch...kyun ki aaj mehandi hai...and no boys allowed...

r: kya???? he stood again...

sw: pulled himback...haan...

rey puoted...

r: mujhe use dekhna hai...

all: aww!!!!!!!!!!

sw: toh ek idea hai mere paas...

all: kya??

sw: simple ladkiyon ki kapde kareedo...pehno...ghuso...chup ke dekho...

r: bhai...mere bhai...(flinched on sw hugging him who fell back on couch with rey on top...) tu toh mahan hai...

sw: (whispered) sharon kibaat sach karoge kya??

rey pulled back suddenly...

r: sorry...

all: toh mission strts...get set 1 go!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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evening

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tabla music playing and smone singing...all rinning here and there...boys entered and hid themselves...they were seeing the whole hall...but none of their girls was present...suddenly they heard giggles and laughs...they saw and their jaw dropped...all the girls were looking absolutely beautiful...rey was lost in kriya...he walked dreamily 4rward...soon the boys realised and pulled him and slapped on his head...he came back to senses and they hid...

kriya sat down and the girls surrounded her

kriya pinned her chunri in this way...

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kriya excitedly 4rwarded her hand 4r mehandi...

sh: arrey apni pati naam ki mehandi lagvane ki itni kya jaldi hai???

ne: pehle apna promise rakho kriya??

all girls: haan...

k: koun sa promise...??

simmi: arrey sab se pehla dance...

k: ohh...kk...kriya went into a room...

rey was trying to find her...he was desperate to see her...

suddenly music strt playing and a wide smile spread on girls face...

kriya entered with sm back dancers and strtd dancing...

(sorry guys now i cnt explain the dance...sorry...ab itna taakat nahi hai aur bollywood...i luv it and has only heavy steps in mind...bollywood is difficult to explain...so im giving the song...u imagine)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B9NDthccv68

rey was literally drooling over her,...dance cmplted...all girls hooted...rey was abt to hoot when the boys closed his mouth and all fell down...they stood up and again saw the girls...

sh: wow kriya...ur ...ur...

simmi: very sexy!!!!

all looked at her...

simmi: aisa kya dekh rahe ho...

vi: perfect word dude...

simmi: u know kriya agar mei rey hoti aur ye dance dekhi hoti toh tumhe seedha room mei leke jaake 1st night mana chuki hoti...

kriya's mouth hanged...

all laughed ...rey laughed dreamily...boys teased him as he blushed...

sh: yeah ri8 simmi...actually u know agar mei rey nai bhi hoti na tab bhi 1st ni8 mana chuki hoti...

k: sharon...tum bhi...blushing hard...

vi: wahi nahi hum sab bhi...

kriya pouted and all laughed...

sh: chalo ab aise hi khade rahegi ya phir rey ki naam ki mehandi lagwayegi.??

kriya blushed...and sat in b/w them...

ne: rey ka naam lethe hi kriya ke gaal kaise jal rahe hai dekho...

rinni placed her hands on kriya's cheeks...all looked at her confused...

ri: par kriya ke gaal toh normal hai...

all rolled their eyes and laughed...

the professional strtd filling kriya's hand with mehandi...she made sure that not a single space is left and this would be the most beautiful design ever as sharon warned...😆

k: arrey mujhe nacha diya...aur tum log aise beitho ge??? not fair...

all girls smiled got up and dance 4r yeh raat...(not as in d3...with sm even more sexy moves...)boys drooled over them when rey drooled over smiling kriya...

finally dance ended...sab ne mehandi lagaya...sab ki mehandi sookh gayi par dulhan ki toh rang gehra chadna hai...so they applied sm solution which keeps it wet 4r a long tym...

( i dnt know agar aisa khuch hoga bhi ...par i assumed...)

all left...kriya was abt to get up when sharon pulled her back...

k: kya hua sh??

sh: kuch nai hume tumse kuch baat karni hai...

k: kya??

simmi: yahi ki humne keh toh diya hum 1st ni8 ke baare mei ...

ne: but 4rm then we all hving one doubt...

k: kya??

vi: yahi ki ...actually kuch din mei tumhari shaadi hojayegi aur...

sh: arrey yahi ki tum 1st ni8 pe kya karogi...all boys and kriya looked at them with open mouth...

boys never expected their so called shy girls will talk like this...

k: kya???

simmi: arrey sharon tum bhi na...u know aaj tak ke teri sabse stupid qsn hai ye...

all looked at simmi shocked...

simi: arey kriya kya karegi bechari...saara kaam toh rey khud karlega na...

k: aah!!!!!!!!( gasped hard) she chased simmi...all girls laughed when boys strtd tickling rey as he blushed...atlast kriya slipped and fell wher she sat...(they st on a cushion...)

sharon came upon her...

sh: shayad rey aise hi tere upar aayega...

k: aww!!!!! sweetu...

krisha straightened and all laughed when kriya blushed...

sh: shona ab jao so jao ...its too late...help chahiye kya ?? mai saath chalun??

k: no sweetu...tum so jao...i will manage...kk bye ...gudni8 girls/...

all: gud ni8...all dispersed...rey was abt to go to kriya when the boys pulled him...

sw: rey we wont let u so dnt even try...

r: guys aaj dance ke baad bi dnt u want to meet ur girls...

all looked at each other...

all: haan...

r: toh mujhe kya dekh rahe ho?? jao unke paas...

all dispersed...rey followed kriya but to his badluck door was close...he turned dissapointed...

r: idea!!!!!!!!!!!!

he slowly went up throught the pipe and peeped into the room ...she was fast asleep...but smthing made him wild...yeah...cold breeze blew her chunri up exposing her slim silky waist...his heart bet fast...

he walked to her...she had her hands streched upwards not to spoil the mehandi and her lehanga was un adjusted and exposed her left leg till the knee when on ri8 it was smwat down...he was getting mad on seeeing her...she slept innocently as she did nthing////////but she was literally driving him wild...he slowly got on bed and layed in a ri8 angle to her ...he slowly passed hei ri8 index finger 4r her left ankel to knee...she moved in sleep...she was too tired to break her beautiful sleep...but the cool wind and her slim waist was not letting him to be in his cntrl...he played with her foot with his fingers she turned to wards him...bringing her waist more close to his face...he looked at her waist ...electricity was passing through his spine...he slowly kissed her waist...she spran up and sat ...she looked at him and was abt to shout when he closed he mouth and pushed her back and fell on her ...

r: sshh!!!!!!!!!!!!

he slowly moved his hand...

k: (slowly) rey aap yaha??

r: haan tumhe dekhne aaya tha par tumhari ye patli si kamar...usne mujhe distract kar diya...

k: rey aap jao yahan se...

r: nah...itni jaldi?? nh...btw i wonder aaj tak maine tumhari ye ...wat do u cal...kamar ko kyun nai dekha??

saying this he slowly slid his hand on to her waist ...she gasped/...she was abt to push him when he stopped...

r: arrey mehandi kharab hojayegi...

she hesitantly put her hands up...he slowly went dwn and planted a kiss on her navel...she strtd breathing hard,...her waist slipped 4rm his lips frequently...he pressed more and planted wet kisses on her waist,...she moaned and arched her body up as not able to resist and trying hard to keep her hands off...he slid his tip of tongue aorund the navel...she arched more...he slid his left hand up and carressed the side of her curve...she shuddered...he moved his head to the ri8 side of her waist and slowly bit it squeezing her curve sidewards...

she moaned loud...

k: rey...

he gripped more...

she was now not able to breath properly...he moved to her left side of her waist and planted kiss and his hand still caressing her side of curve...she couldnt take it more and lifted her left knee to hit him but he slid his ri8 hand under hand and pulled her leg to the back of his neck as he bit her waist slightly...she shuddered,...

k: she let out a sigh and words slipped out her mouth...it sounde more as a moan...

k: please...

rey slowly pulled back...and saw at her ...her body swayed in and out as she breathed hard eyes closed and her hands hands up...he slowly went on her...she slowly looked at him ...he kissed her before she could actually see him clearly...he kissed her to the earnest...she pushed him with her elbow...he fell on her side...

k: rey aap jao yahan se...

r: sach mei jaun???

k: haan...(still breathing hard)

r: tum hamesha aise beech mei disturb kyun karti ho???? no problem...u have to pay 4r all this baatcutter...1st ni8 ke din u have no ri8 to stop me...

kriya looked at him...he slowly kissed her forehead and went to balcony and turned...

r: gudni8 baatcutter...and ab ye mat sochti rehna ki uss din kya hoga???? coz uss din kya hoga...u cnt even imagine...bye...he gave a flying kiss and went down...she blushed hard remembering his words...

as soon as rey reached down all boys came to him...

sw: abbey kitna tym lagata hai??? jaldi chal warna maa papa ko shk hojayega...

r: kk chalo...

boys went back and slept where kriyaaansh were lost in each others world...

hope u all liked it...like and review...luv u all ...🤗 pmz later...

❤️deetha❤️

Edited by deetha - 13 years ago