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Posted: 13 years ago

wonderful both parts 👍🏼
They didn't get any chance of romance in both parts as they get to know a shocking revealition.
Firstly Smirti n Kria removed all the differences between Rey n his mom n than it was Gautam n Smriti's turn to reveal the biggest shock.😲
Obviovsly it will take sometime to accept the truth to both n that was great that both gals have their best friends besides them.😊
But the best thing happened in second update where Sharon accepted Kria easily but she took time which is obvious n u know i expected this thing from Sharon.😛
But i like the milan of long losting sis.😊
But yaar wat was sad, how can they ignore Reyam n these guys were fuming n jealous too 😆
One more truth came out that Reyam r brothers n ab kya hoga gals ka they must b busy together.🤣
Interesting precap
update fast
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Posted: 13 years ago
PART-10




so guys im very happy i got lamba lamba cmnts...but still less...par chalo ye part specially unkeliye jinhone cmnt kiya...chalo im happy so i want to give another update...and yeah guys im very filmy...i like it that way...😉



all parents: kya????

rey : haan...

vijay : chalo ye bohut achi baat hui...toh gautum teri donon betiyan meri bahuein banenge...????😃

kriyaansh and swaron blushed while the rest gang hooted...
they all settled ...hehehe...again krisha together..and their fuming partners opposite to them...

sandy: so vijay bhai hum wait kisliye kar rahe hai... donon ki shadi eksaath karvadenge...

sh: matlab??

vijay: beta kriya ki toh rey ke saath already fixed hai toh hum soch rahe hai hi teri bhi...

sh: almost shouting...kiske saath??

sw: stood suddenly and with a crying face ...matlab.??

all saw him and laughed hard...

sh: still laughing...mera matlab...dad mujhe abhi shaadi nai karni...

K: par sharon mai chahti hun ki humari shaadi ek saath ho...

sh: sorry kriya...turning to vijay...uncle actually mai kriya ki shaadi ki saari tayyariyan apne haaton se karna chahti hun...masti...dance...aur sab se badi baat toh ise world ki sabse beautiful dulhan banaungi...aur agar mai dulhan bangayi toh mujhe sajna savarna padega...nai...chahe toh kriya ki shaadi ke agle din hi shaadi keliye tayyar hun...

all the parents thought 4r a while and agreed...and all the parents went in for a chit chat...the gang left 4r their houses...reyam still fuming.and krisha noticing it...

they decided to tease them more...sharon went to rey and kriya to swayam...

guys i will be writing rey and kriya...but assume same dialouges 4r swayam and sharon...hope u understood...

and reyam were in garden...single single...


kriya: swayam kya hu tum itna upset kyun ho...

rey: sharon tum yaha? wo actually kr...chalo chodona...

twirling her finger on swayams chest...

K: swayam..mujhe nai bataoge...

rey gave a wierd expression...

r: wo.wo actually shayad kriya mujhe pasand nai karti...

sh: rey kriya ko chodona ...mai hun na...

K: swayam sharon ka toh mujhe pata nai ...par mujhe toh tum pasand ho...

both boys...wat???

( p.s- again only kriya and rey...)

K: kyun mai tumhe pasand nai aayi?? (pouting).

r: sharon tum theek ho...

k: tumhe dekhne ke baad kaise theek hoongi??

r: sharon hosh mei toh ho...

k: tumhe dekhne ke baad hi toh poori hosh kho baiti...and gave a flying kiss...

boys were standing mouth hanged...when they came out of trance they didnt find the girls ...they took a deep breath of relief and turned but as soon as they turned they heard a music and stopped...



so lemme explain the location guys...imagine a very big garden and in middle a very big bush...min of 7-8 mtrs high circular bush with 5-6 mtrs wide...and rey and swayam are standing on either side and not visible to each other...and a narrow path in middle of the bush such that ppl at one end could see the person at other end...

so guys now strt the song and go along with the song...


in strting music boys stood at their places confused 4rm where the music was cmng... krisha were hiding ...winked at each other and (at 0:30) kriya appeared in front of swayam and sharon in front of rey...( guys imagine krisha 's dress ...same as they wore in pool scene.)

they came frward as boys walked backward and hitted the bush...



Behke behke nain, cheenay dil ka chain: girls keep their hands on the boys chest .slide it down movin down... looked up and stood before them facing their back to the boys(hope u undertand)

Toh yeh pyaar hai: did body wave...

Koi intezaar karde bekaraar: placed their hands on their chest turned around them ending in the same place where they started...

Toh yeh pyaar hai: leaned on their shoulder and did bodywave...

Yaadein, dil ko tadpayein,Saansein, ulajti jaaye,Aankhein, sapne dikhlaye,Jab anjaane : placed their index finger on thier face sliding it up and down the cheek...

Aankhon, se tu gabhraye,Raaton, mein so na paaye,Haathon, ko malta jaaye,Tu deewane: placed the finger in their shirt and strtd twirling the shirt...

Hote hote oh yeah
Ho jaane do na pyaar: boys gave a feared look and strtd running around the bush followed by d girls...

krisha were enjoying to fullest...

Sh sh shake that booty
Till I wanna get ?summer back duty
Everybody know user queue
Everybody get little bit movie
Now your body your ?revenge got style
Tell me wonder in the about all dua
She just fuse the way that you move
She got gang she got the moves
Just bombay, just bombay
: krisha stood at either side of the path gave a thumbs up and went in front of the boys who now interchanged the places...and strtd doing sm belly moves and and moving around them...
at ( 1:49) they slowly turned as if like getting chakkar and acted as falling the boys caught them...( after all they r gentlemens😆)
and (at 1 :57) they acted as looking dreamily at boys...( note still in same pose)
Dhoondti hai nazar,:moved their fingers in front of the boys eyes...
ik haseen ko agar : moved around their face
Koi armaan leke: blushed...

on seeing this boys made them straight ...
Toh prem mein nagar
ki taraf hai safarDil ka sauda leke: placed their finger on the boys chest and moved frward as they moved backward...

Pighla sa pighla sa ho ju mann
Sundar sa sundar sa ho ju tann
Dil jo dhadakte hain shole bhadakte hain, hosh toh khota hai, pyaar jab hota hai: started dng sm girly moves in front of them ...but now reyam were at either side of the passage ...saw each other and understood ...winked and

Hote hote oh yeah
Ho jaane do na pyaar: pulled the girls towards them by waist...(ppl dnt take it other wise i wanted sm fun soo...bear me) shocking the girls...

Behke behke nain, cheenay dil ka chain
Toh yeh pyaar hai: bent 4rwaard and back making a move of circle along with the girls...
Koi intezaar karde bekaraar
Toh yeh pyaar hai
Yaadein, dil ko tadpayein
Saansein, ulajti jaaye
Aankhein, sapne dikhlaye
Jab anjaane
Aankhon, se tu gabhraye
Raaton, mein so na paaye
Haathon, ko malta jaaye
Tu deewane: did some salsa moved with the shocked girls...



Hote hote oh yeah
Ho bhi jaane do na pyaar
Hote hote oh yeah
Ho bhi jaane do na pyaar: (same dialouge 4r both boys) r: toh hum ye humara relation ek passionate kiss se strt karein??? and bent frward... girls eyes widened and strtd running around the bush...sharon and kriya at a tym entered the passage but as soon as sharon saw kriya she ran back...but bechari bumped into swayam on cmng out and both fell and rolled down...rey saw kriya and entered the passage... kriya stood burying her face into the bush ...rey slowly placed his hand on her shoulder...she jumped and turned ...she saw rey and hugged him tight...

r: kya hua kriya ??( innocently)

K: rey wo..wo: burrying her face into his chest ...

r: swayam kiss karne aayatha kya??( with an evil smile)

K: shocked ...looked up...aap ko kaise???

r: mischeiviously...tum behnein ho tho hum bhi bhai hai...

K: toh ...??..( angrily) strtd moving away/...

rey pulled her and pinned to the bush and blocked her with his hands on either side... moving frward...

r: swayam toh kiss nai karega...par mai toh kar sakta hun...

her eyes widened and placed her hands on his chest and strtd pushing...but it was too late ...he locked his lips with hers... caught hold of her face and sucked her lips...she cant defend anymore so stood still feeling the passion ...he took her one hand and placed in his hair... without breaking the kiss and did the same with other hand...pulled her closer by her waist never disurbing their kiss...and moved his hand up and down of her back ...she tightened her grip on his hair...this drived him more crazy and nudged her mouth open her mouth open and roamed his toungue everywhere inside her mouth...she was not able to take it more her legs gave up ...she slowly moved down as he too joined her still kissing...they fell on the ground rey on top of her...she was lack of air so pushed him hard...he fell at her side... both breathed hard...he saw her and she too saw him ...he strtd cmng upon her...but she pushed him went on him...held his collar tight pulling and gave a strong kiss on his lips and got up and ran...rey was shocked...did she jst did it????? gosh... its too good... he sat up hands on his knees and watched her running...as she went out of site he fell back...amazing!!!!!!!!




guys thats it 4r now and pms later...

precap: he stood there scanning her wet body 4rm head to toe...he moved frnt as she moved back till she hit the cave and in seconds he trapped her...she could feel the heat 4rm his body...


keep thinking😳

Edited by deetha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
res
unres
OMG...OMG...OMG deetha kya likha h re
jst love it❤️
i cn't stop myself by laughing hard bt i hv to coz its nyt...hahahahahahahahahaha 🤣 🤣 🤣...krisha are too awsummm...da way dey are seducing no no no behaving wid dere bff is jst too hillarious hahahaha 🤣 🤣
n den dance to awsummm...firstly da song is too good perfect according to situation...n den gurls moves OMG . dey are tooo good...bt boyds are also smart jaldi smjh gye

hahahahaha swayam kriya ko kiss...n rey sharo ko...i mean tooo awsummm 🤣

bt den ek dam se hawttt scene ki entry...haye!!!!!!!!!!!!! dere second kisss 😍 😍 n wo bhi inti passoinate wowww yar 😳 😳...full tooo loved it

n ab bas shaadi ka wait h n thnx 4 such amazing update n pm...pls update nxt soon
Edited by shaffy_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
res
unres
Wonderful update deeta;..
quite a suprise.
didnt get ur pm this time;.
it was very cute
Edited by asmaju - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

OMg...cant wait for nxt update hey pm me dis tym yaar plz...it was an outstanding awesomeupdate...bhai n behnaien woah...it was wow...update update update update update update update..,...,
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Posted: 13 years ago
tum toh mahaan ho deetha...awesumm awesumm awesumm updt...
loved krisha 's act...
thx for the pm ...eagerly waitin for next
tinatartari thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
oops!!tat ws blazing hot!!
bt the fun ws rathr a bit 2 much fun..lolx...
i ws like :0
awesome update..u stole ma heart..lolx..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome awesome awesome!!!!
i just luved luved luved it...
krisha sisters r amazing...bechare boys...
last mai reyam wer tooo gud...
luved the kriyansh scene n precap i hope vo kriyansh hi ho...update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: lovely7010

Awesome awesome awesome!!!!
i just luved luved luved it...
krisha sisters r amazing...bechare boys...
last mai reyam wer tooo gud...
luved the kriyansh scene n precap i hope vo kriyansh hi ho...update soon


yep wo kriyaansh hi hai...i only focue on them in mah ff...and as i completed 10 chapters i thought of giving a full on HAWT and ROMANTIC update...so i planed this yesterday only...im merging the scene btw the story which i actually planned and i will try mah level best to make it hawt...so keep waiting guys and sorry may be i will update thursday ni8...u know na classes...and and and ...if i wont get many and lamba cmnts it may postpone...so choice is in ur hands guys...actually i want to give an update in 50's...not in 40's ...so i hope all will cmnt if u all really want a intense kriyaansh scene...hehehe...i told u already im a sadist ri8...😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
it was awesome plz update nxt part

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