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Winz

@Winz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#171

Very well written...but seriously the end is killing...y u torturing us...pls update soon

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enrique305

@enrique305

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Posted: 13 years ago

#172

really oosum ... luved this ... n specially sharon n kriya's dance ... n the unidentified bond btw them ... n m egarly waiting 4 next update ... exited 4 the candle light dinner

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Preeti ArsHa

@preeti_kreya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#173

Supeb update bt end kiu kia :(( please jaldi update karna please please please fast..

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tejashree

@Kriyansh-love

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Posted: 13 years ago

#174

DEETHAAA kahaan hai tu ????? i wanna meet u rite nw 😃 tu mujhe sikha rahi hai ki tune kaunsa jadhu karke yeh saare ideas apne dimak mei lekar aathi hai ???? i love u yaar [ hey mai bhi swaym ki tarah STRAIGHT hun 😆😛😆 ] but teri writing kya kahuuunnn ??? UMAAA * lots & lots of kisses * [😛 😆😛behen wali feeling ke saath 😛😆😛 ]

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Nishtha

@Jade_Precious

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Posted: 13 years ago

#175

jst started readin ur stories
dey r amazin
i loved it

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Shailja

@---Shailu---

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Posted: 13 years ago

#176

awwweee Deeetha...😳

u're such an awesuuum writer dear !!!!!👏

jusst luved ur update to the very core !!!❤️

keep it up yaar !!!! 👍🏼

seriously well done !!!

i ws really awe-struck to read abt krisha !!!

uff their dance ws Fab as u wrote...👏

reallly hats off to u dear!!!!

soo continue wid ur gr8 updates...👍🏼

pls update ur next part sooon...reallly excited to noe wat happens next !😍

uff..u'll kill me wid ur updates yaar!!!😳

awwwe...really waitin fr ur next update..😍

he made all arrangements...dressed himself went to kriyas room...opened without knocking...shocked...

cause then only kriya came out of washroom after having a log shower...she looked soo hot in wet hair rey went in and slowly closed the door moved 4rward and...☺️

continue reallly veryyy sooon nd do PM me !!!!😳

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#177

Wow update...sadist or not IDK but v r on tenderhooks now...btw the krisha part was awsom ... like a dream actually...deetha u rock!!!

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Akanksha

@Effacious

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Posted: 13 years ago

#178

yesterday... a frnd of mine on facebook told me abt ur FF so i startd readin it... nd blv me... its such an amazinnnggg FF...

d way u've described evrything...by takin help of lil pics nd all... lyk.. 4 her room... nd all... it ws all amazinggg... 😃 👏

i think palki ma'am nd cv's cn use dis story if dey want 2 introduce kriya back in story... d concept is actually matchin it... a yeah leap.. nd dis happenin again... its really really nyc... 👏

m adding u... jst pm me whnevr u update d next part okay... 😊

good job... 👍🏼

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sarah

@lover_kriyansh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#179

uff itni jaldi rook diya very bad awessome update loved it a million times aur plzz update soon and pm me when update mast writer ho aur kuch hawwt scenes daalna warna gonna kill you itne dinoon se kuch hawwt scenes nahi dheke bas saddnes hui hai ...remember to pm me😉