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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update as always...
confused about what the promo means.. 😕

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Posted: 13 years ago
osm... update 😊 i would have to say this...THIS IS THE BEST FF I HAVE EVER READ...jst loved it👏
Edited by Ashley007 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
PART-6



hi guys!!!!!! koi mere update keliye wait kar rahe hai kya???...i hope ur waiting...so i got tym so im updating...this is one of my worst parts i think but bare me😉



kriya slowly lifted her head and their eyes got locked...they were in the same position...it was then they came back to normal positions when they heard a *THUD* ...
any guesses????...its nil on floor...😆...vicky lifted him up...
nil: woah!!!! wat a chemistry guys...
all: haan!!!!!!!!!😲

R: baatcutter never think of quitting dance,...kk???

K: hmmm...


vicky moved frward hugged kriya as tight as he could...and
vicky: luv u dear...luv u a lot!!!!!!!!!!!!
K: mee too...

all were shocked...neha's ears are releasing gasses ...rey on full jealousy...caught vicky's collar and raised his hand as if to punch him...but soon kriya entered. and pushed rey away...

K: rey!!!!!!!! aap pagal ho?? kya kar rahe ho??? lag gayi hoti toh????

all were left mouth hanging...

K: towards vicky...are u allri8 bro???

all: bro???

( guys in mah ff kricky share a bro and sis relation...and this is the way i like them...)

K: haan bro...mai vicky ko apna bhai maanti hun...

R: fully shocked...vicky agar kriya tumhe bro bulati toh tum usse kya maante ho???

V: made a wierd face...abey!!! agar woh mujhe bhai maanti hai toh mai bhi use apni behan maanungana...yeh kounsa sawal hai???

they rey undrstd what he asked...all laughed...but suddenly vicky became serious...turned towards kriya...he spoke in normal voice but it showed how angry he was...

V: WAT THE HECK ON EARTH WAS THAT????

K: kya????

all confused...

V: i know u trust rey,...iska matlab yeh nai ki tum hamare baare me na socho...agar tumhe kuch hogaya hota toh...

Sw: are vicky kuch hua toh nai na...and it a leap of trust...she trusted rey and he reciprocated...ab chodo na...

vicky hugged kriya again...

K: sorry bro ...aap koi tense nai karna chahti...

V: its kk gudiya...(vicky's nick name 4r kriya.)

rey: gudiya...

V: haan...aur haan tereliye toh baatcutter ban gayina fir kyun jal raha hai bey???

R:...wo kuch nai...

sh: kk guys...chalo lets practise...

all stood in couples but attention guys,...they had no couple movements...its pure hip-hop

rey was luking at kriya...

simmi: rey thodi der keliye kriya se apna focus hatake dance pe rakh...all giggled...

practise strtd vicky in deewana mode...dng all wrong steps...

sh: VICKY!!!!!

V: ha...haan sharon (out of trance)

sh: come out of ur pool 4r smtym kk...focus...

and strd practicing...but now our majnu is in trance...correct but slow steps ...missing all the beats...

K: swayam...no effect...SWAYAM!!!!!!!!!!!...hehehe,,,,,,,hez bak...

sw: haan kriya kya hua...

K: yeh tumhe nai mujhe poochna chahiye...ur missing the beats...focus...

sw: kk...

rey: ( himself) aww!!!!!!! kitni cute hai meri baatcutter jab daathi hai toh iski nose kaise hilte rehta hai??? ...he forwarded his hand caught kriya's nose by two fingers and shaked it...kriya bet him hard on hand...

R: normal...kya hua...

K: rey focus...

R: kk...

sh: kk guys ready...5.6.7.8...1 2 3 4 5 6...

rey again lost in kriya now he stopped dancing totally and watching her to the earnest,...kriya was unable to see into his eyes...feeling veryuncomfortable...all girls on full angry mode went beside kriya...all boys gathered on reys side...now boys and girls facing each other...but our romeo still in trance...all boys were bitiing their lips to stop back their laugh...and thought...ab yeh gaya...

all girls except kriya...REY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! at their top voices...

R: HAAN!!!!HAAN!!!!!!! wat?? kya hua??? was abt to fall back when swayam and vicky caught and made him straight...

sh: aise kyun dekhrahe ho kriya ko as if u will eat her...bichari ko jeenedo...

Vinti: haan guys y r u boys behaving that wierd kabhi ladki nai dekhi kya????

Rinni: i think inhe teps nai aa rahe hai so bahana dhoondh rahe hai...

all girls looked at rinni in shock...

simmi: rinni u and this intelligent???

nil; wat do u mean???.

neha: dat girls are best...

now srtd the fight ...boys vs girls...finally ended in a face off deal...all srtd dancing ...girls went boys came 4r face off... but allthis tym kriya and sharon stood aside and watching...

rey: to all boys...who were in circle...guys...hum 6 aur wo 4...

amar: 4???

sw: haan ...remember sh & kriya kitna bhi ho ek dusre se compete karna...dance mei...ego...

all: ri8!!!!!

r: so attack...

all the boys went in front of girls (4) and srtd dancing...and girls moving back...but now entered our two diva's...only them...2 are enough 4r the boys...they strtd with wacking moves...all boys ...along with the rest girls are shocked...all went back and the two strtd dancing... it looked lyk one was dancing and the other was her mirror image...

all were awestruck...then kriya did a head stunt opening her legs in a v shape in the air...balancing with her head and and hands...( just imagine her legs wide upside down) sharon caught her foot and did some moves...and later sharon did a babyfreeze...( personally i luv babyfreeze...hope i could do it one day) kriya hold her foot and did some bodywaves...and at the end...sharons right leg strecthed on kriyas shoulder and viceversa...and both had their ri8 hands on each others waist and left on each others shoulders as if to give balance to each other and gave a tashan wala look to boys who were already standing in pairs to save themselves 4rm falling...

and after a long silence...all hooted at their top voices...

Vinti; dude u both ...wo bhi saath mai ...aur dance...

rinni: u looked as twins...

all: aww!!!!!!!
krisha tight hug...

and rest...freshening up breakfast all bid bye to kriyaaansh ...but among all sad was sharon...in car...all gng together...

sw: sharon what happened ??? y r u soo low...

sh: pata nai swayam kriya se door jaane ka man nai kar raha hai...( same with kriyaansh)

rey: kriya...hum sab kal phir se milenge na so chill...

K: hmmm...

evening...

in singhania house...

kriya in her room...
rey in hall...

vijay and smriti came out together ,,,,,,they looked as if they were gng out...

R: dad...maa...kaha jaa rahe ho donon??

dad: beta mera ek imp conference hai kal subah aaonga ...

smriti: beta mujhe bank ki kaam se bahar jaana hai kal shaam tak aaongi...

dad: take care of kriya beta...

rey: kk dad...apdonon apna khyaal rakhna...

they went...rey on full happy mode...called his cook...told him to make sm specials...and after that he sent all the servants on holiday.!!!!!!!!! he thought of having candle light dinner... he made all arrangements...dressed himself went to kriyas room...opened without knocking...shocked...
cause then only kriya came out of washroom after having a log shower...she looked soo hot in wet hair rey went in and slowly closed the door moved 4rward and...











keep thinking guys...im very bad... ...hahahaha...🤣...want lamba cmnts...otherwise no update 4r 1 week...hahaha!!!!!!!!!😉😆...ur ri8 im a sadist...but i luv it...🤣
❤️deetha❤️


soryy...promo of earlier chapter is 4r the next or its next epi so keep waiting...
Edited by deetha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
grrr...kyun rok diya update??

Update was awsome
love it
continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
aabhi toh maaza aane wala tha hot hot scenes imagine karke aur aabhi hi khatam kardiya not fair
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Posted: 13 years ago

Grrr Hey zats not fair why did u stop???? I was so eager to know what happens when he enters her bedroom. LOL

Vicky kria ko gudiya bulata hain . Are so sweet .

I like the part when Sharon and Kria danced together.

Wow Kriyansh gonna b all alone in the house meaning that romantic scenes are on its way. Cant wait.

Plz plz update the next part.


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Posted: 13 years ago
deeta y did u stop der?????
hmmm so kriyaansh alone in home...
loved krisha bond.
thanks for the pm and update next part soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
sahi mein u r a big sadist..

thatt is so not fair...
aisa koi krta hai kya

aise point pe stop.. so not done..

update padh ke itna accha laga but then aisa stop saare mood ka kachra kr diya re...

update was awesome...

but update jaldi se
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Posted: 13 years ago
🤣 kriyaansh ka pyaar bcmg problem in dance...
so cute...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsummm deetha jst love it
hahahaha all boys are in dere majnu mood sply our one n only cassinova i mean rey...n kricky bro sis awww...shooo sweeet

n krisha dance wow man i cn imagine...dey are fab...n ku na ho after all twins jo h 😉

n grrr!!!!!!!!! deetha are such a devil 😡...aise b koi krta h kya...n 1 week tak suspense mai rakhegi...ab mjhe mat boli itne mai to mera dirty mind chal padega 😉...hahahaha

thkew 4 pm n pls pls pls thoda jaldi update de dio

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