FF:Holi|ArHi-Confront|Arnav Masti|Chap7B PG38*UPD*

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Chhaya

@arhi-fan

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#181

Oh ! Wah ji wah kya update tha. Itna sweet aur adorable. Matlab dono ek dusre ko challenge karke hi mante h. But ya yar it was really superb. Khushi kab tak arnav se bhagegi. Waiting eagerly for next update.

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meemithai

@meemithai

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#182

cute, fun and amazing update...

loved Arnav and Khushis nok jhok...

superb...

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Leena

@LeenaRocks

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#183

NOTE!!!!

guys please let me know which part of the updates(from alll the chaps)you liked the best...

also please let me know what you dint like... would like to correct it accordingly... as i have a story line in mind that will run for a lot more chapters ...

Lastly... do you think its a problem that i have kept all the dialogues in hindi?

not sure if that is the reason for not receiving much response...

The only reason i have all the dialogues that way is to have the same effect as how it is potrayed in the serial ... please lemme know if these needs to be converted to English!!!

please guys appreciate your comments .. negative or positive.,...

Luv Ya All,

Preets

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anurao.66

@anurao.66

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#184

I just loved it. keep it up.

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Life is too short, Enjoy it too the fullest

Anu

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Mehak

@Love_Mehak

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#185

just love it the way its goin..*THUMBS UP*

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Sophia Ali

@SweetSophie

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#186

I think the last two chapters were the best in portraying both of them, their thoughts, and changing behavior (least in arnav's case). Well penned.

Love,

Sophie

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parit.mansi

@parit.mansi

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#187

cn u plzz add me in ur pm list

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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#188

i really liked all the chapters... all weighing their own importance in taking the story forward..

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Jasreen Kaur Sidhu

@XxJasreenxX

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#189

Everything is fine the way it is you need not to change anything, Keep going. luv it

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NEETANAME

@NEETANAME

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#190

OMG, this completely captures what Arnav and Khushi are about, fighting, arguing yet not able to let one another go!!! LOVEDDD ITTT continuee sooonnn pleaseee :)