OS : Arnav hears the truth...Completed !!!

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

honeypriya

@honeypriya

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: Pearl_mystic
'sorry to keep you waiting'' yeh dialogue tumhara hona chahiye! but what an ending yar! padhke jaan me jaan aayi..!!!

So sweet! Poison se lekar hatred se hokar in the end love ke station par gaadi pohoch hi gayi!!! Hayyyeee!

Loved it!

Thanks for the PM!

P.S. waise, bashers ko bash karna acchi baat hai, but lovers ko kyu suffer karwa rahi ho?!?!?!?!?! 😛

woh dialogue maine jaan ke hi diya...sirf tere aur kuch aur partners in crime ke liye 😉 😆 poison wala line think in hindi...actually wanted to do those dialogues in hindi...would hv been better...bt most of the readers prefer english here so...

lovers ko to har din kitna khush karti hun🤗socha kuch unhe bhi yaad kar lun...aise wo mujhe kaafi hate karte hain 😆😆

thanks so mcuh for reading it all...seriously means a lot...i had nothing in mind when I started writing,...but u guys encouraged and I could get this so long and to a closure 😊😊

Quote

dhivy

@dhivy

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#102

superb endin... arnav kissin kushi's forehead.. i really want tis scene in t show too.. its awesome yaar...

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Alyaa_27

@Alyaa_27

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#103

i read all d parts... its awesome...

Quote

shwetachauhan

@shwetachauhan

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#104

debu!!!! what an OS!!! read it in one go!!! loved it! loved it! loved it!! 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

i knew you write well but i had no idea you write OS too!! and you said this is your third one??? where are the other two?? send me the links!!!

you have been dreaming too much about them!! 😆 😆 seems like you have already played the future sequences in your mind many times!!! thats why such a perfect OS with such apt emotions!!! this is how they will react if it happens in the actual episodes!!! how i wish it happened this way!!!! 😍

aur kya SP style twists and cliff hangers! without precaps!!! LM has really left a mark with you!! 😆 😆 😆

write some more!! please!!! will be waiting!!!