OS: Perspectives (Part XII)

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meera30

@meera30

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Hey everyone. Hope you had a great weekend.

Part XI is now uploaded.

Hope you like it. As always, please leave back comments even if they are brickbats :)

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subiscs

@subiscs

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#52

I loved itt!!! :) nice update!!!😊

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mali

@mali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

thanks for the update. Loved Khushi living for herself.

please continue this fantastic story!

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rukuswasthika

@rukuswasthika

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#54

it was a nice update😊

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oh.petite.one

@oh.petite.one

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: meera30
Given the lack of responses / likes, me is guessing the update wasn't liked much

Please share your criticism too! I would even love to know where you think the story / writing went wrong.

Of course, if you are busy, I understand 😊

Loving your story Meera ⭐️👏

Can I make a suggestion, i think the reason you might be getting fewer comments is because it is a little diffciult to keep track of the new updates as it is all in the same post...

why don't you post different updates on different pages and provide a index on the page one, so that people can follow new updates more easily, furthermore, on the title if you include the latest chapter and page number then people are more likely to keep track of the new updates too...

feel free to ignore my suggestion, i only mentioned this, becuase i myself found it difficult to track new updates so i thought that maybe others may be having the same problem too resulting in fewer comments :))))

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: oh.petite.one

Loving your story Meera ⭐️👏

Can I make a suggestion, i think the reason you might be getting fewer comments is because it is a little diffciult to keep track of the new updates as it is all in the same post...

why don't you post different updates on different pages and provide a index on the page one, so that people can follow new updates more easily, furthermore, on the title if you include the latest chapter and page number then people are more likely to keep track of the new updates too...

feel free to ignore my suggestion, i only mentioned this, becuase i myself found it difficult to track new updates so i thought that maybe others may be having the same problem too resulting in fewer comments :))))

Thanks so much for the suggestion! I will do that I think for the next update. So sweet of you to take the time to help me make this better. Love this forum for exactly this reason. Such wonderful people around.

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Gargee

@Gargee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

Loved it, loved it, Luuurved it!👏

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meera30

@meera30

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Thank you so much folks for loving my work and for taking the time to let me know!

I am no writer but your comments make me feel just a little bit closer to being one!

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oh.petite.one

@oh.petite.one

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: meera30

Thanks so much for the suggestion! I will do that I think for the next update. So sweet of you to take the time to help me make this better. Love this forum for exactly this reason. Such wonderful people around.

No problem, glad i could help :)))

if you need an example of what i'm talking about, check out the layout for this FF thread by Nayika:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2679936/ipkknd-30-days-thread-2-days-13-20