Kriyansh Reunion SS (part 10 pg74)(Completed) - Page 30

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Posted: 13 years ago

Smriti's POV:

Mujhe jaldi hi kuch krna padega. Main use aise nhi dekh sakti. Mujhe jaldi se faisla krna hoga...

Smriti calls up Rahul. She tells him about her plan. He tries to says something but smriti cuts him saying that she knows very well what she is doing. He tells her to get Rey there anyhow. Rahul somehow convinces Rey to stay there.

Plan: Smriti just wants to ensure that whatever she heard was correct. If rey really loved her daughter then he would abide by his words. And she just had to test that.

Oh so she is gonna test rey. par abi kaise.

hope rey passes it easily.


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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the update thanks for the pm and sorry for the late reply was on holiday and would comment more if I had time but need to catch up on a lot and the update was absolutely amazing.
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In the evening Smriti literally drags Kriya to the orphanage despite her attempts to not to go there. Smriti makes her swear in order to convince her. She goes there half-heartedly ready to plaster a smile. Though kriya is resisting it but she is having feelings of something good happening but ignores it as she knows nothing like it can ever happen in her life. Rey on other hand is still enjoying with the kids. His grandma also joins them.

So they are going to orphanage.
wow kriya is feeling gud. rey jo hai waha.
wow so granny is also here.

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Meanwhile Smriti and Kriya comes there and they first greet Rey's grandma( i'll address her grans). Grans is so happy t see them. Kriya touches her feet and then hugs her but grans cud feel she wasn't the usual herself. She doesn't understand and gets confused. She's about to ask but Sonia thru her eyes tells to stop and promises to explain later. Meanwhile asks Rahul where Rey was. He points towards the kids. Smriti takes Kriya to the children. Kriya is a little happy to get to a familiar atmosphere. But smriti takes her through such a way that Rey is able to see them approaching.

wow kriya is so traditional.
so granny wil also come to know abt kria.
is kria nd rey gonna meet.
rey sees her.😊
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Rey senses kriya around him and then turns his head to see them approaching. Kriya doesn't notices him as she was already too preoccupied thinking of way to keep up a smile. Rey notices it. He feels like going near her and bringing a actual smile on her face, he takes steps in her direction but then retraces them back remembering the promise he had taken. With a heavy heart he then decides to actstrong and immediatelyexcuses himself and then thinks of leaving but then hides behind a nearby tree to see his baatcutter.

it must be so hard for rey .😭
he wants to see kria without affecting her so sweet of him.
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Kriya meanwhile gets surrounded by the kids and this automatically brings a smile on her face. Smriti notices Rey hiding near the tree and adjusts her position such that she cud see Rey's expression. Rey keeps on admiring her baatcutter and smile creeps up on his face and a twinkle comes in his eyes and that twinkle turns into a determination of bringing a smile on his love's face.

their love is so pure.
even i love her smile.
missing it now
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He never realises that Smriti was standing not far away from him but this time he was busy in his baatcutter. He mumbles "main yeh smile permanently tumhare face pe set kar dunga i promise"which Smriti hears and smiles in satisfaction of Rey passing the test. She just decides to talk to Rey while Rey starts leaving the place as he wudn't be able to stay away from her for long and Smriti senses it.

yippe rey passed the test.
i'm so happy so kriyaansh meetin soon.👏

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Meanwhile the other 4 sees it and grans is not able to understand it. Neelima then explains her in short and she is so happy that Rey chose Kriya for himself. The trio suggests her to go to Rey and Smriti while they wud keep Kria preoccupied. Grans leave from there and goes in direction of Rey. She sees Smriti approaching Rey to talk and hence decides to eavesdrop.

So ab grans ko bhi sach pata chal gaya.
Smitri is gonna talk to rey- 😳
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Smriti calls Rey. Rey turns and sees Smriti and freezes at his place. Both don't know how to strike a convo.

S: tum yahan????

Rey doesn't know what to say. He musters courage

R: ( stammer) haa..haan wo... woh mei...


rey must have gone through the biggest shock.


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😉Smriti smiles seeing him

S: Main tumhe khan hi jaungi. Yahan koi bhi aa sakta hai. Chill... woh tumhe yahan expect nhi kiya tha issliye pucha...

Then again the deadly silence. Grans on other hand laughs seeing his grandson like this


but he is still scared of u. aap rlb jo ho😉

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