Mohabbat Yun..last part PG 132 - Page 61

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Posted: 13 years ago


thnks



grt 😊


Originally posted by: kirti123

nice
waiting for the party
😊


thnks dear

Originally posted by: parul_bansal

nic update...

lovely
finally they will meet



thnks dear


Originally posted by: shria19

Nice update:)
cont soon



thnku


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Irum.

Mayank is very egocentric.Oski fixation hoye hai Preoperational stage main.Its high time for him to decenter.

He does not need Nupur ,he needs a robort.Jis main wo apni marzi ka software install kare.Then he wil act according to his way.wo oos ki possession main bhi hoga.



now i understand u r comment.. itna psychological coment kyun aya...n ur absolutely right..
lolz..
thnks for ur comments dear..

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kheya-mayur

BEAUTIFUL UPDATE FIZA ...

now m understanding MAYANK .though i m still angry wid him .
how can he accuse nupur for leaving him? has he forgot dat it was he said dat HE WAS OVER IT .n still nupur tried to contact him .still nupur kissd him before leaving him .

SHE HAD NOT FORGOT HIS LOVING WORDS ,N SHE CLEARLY UNDERSTOOD DAT WAT HE SAID IN ANGER HAD NOT COME FROM HIS HEART .

isilie to she tried to manao him!!!

how can a man be so immature!!!!!
still i will say .may be he has a pure heart ,may be his love is pure but he z not worth of nupur!!!


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thanks alot dear..
i know u are and in update u cant be in love with him again..
i hope as updates cum he can make u believe it more n more

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -SupriyaluvsMN-

omg... both of their lives r in total mess!😒
bt i hope success party does sum miracle!😳




yup they are...
hopefully it can bring so
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Mudrika25

nice part,...

😒 but after reading mayank point of view it seems that he just blame others for all wrong doings,...
he is so egoistic,...
liked the way you interject the cupid's talk,,...😊
continue soon,...waiting for the party




thnks dear..
i know sumwhere i have made him look such.. yet let the updates unfold..he is indeed such ..but not to an extend of tht...
thnks dear... the cupid has to do it again


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Posted: 13 years ago


thnku

Originally posted by: raginisharma

it such a pain to get BF like mayank ..sach mai..😆


BUT as i know There will be some happy moments ahead i am Waiting for those..



lol so tu hain yaar...

really tumhain umeed hai asai... okay mein flashbacks dalo gi wasy...lol

.


thnks


Originally posted by: love.mayurarti

thank god!!!!he is thinking sumthing +ve




yes here the positive tracks cum

Originally posted by: .Divya.

very nice update, Fiza ... 😊 😊



thnks



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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Auroni.92

Goshh dnt know where destiny is leading this two...
Mayank uss typical BF s ki tarah hai jo GF ko ussi tarah dekhna chahe hai jaisa vo chahe, vo karte hue dekhna chahte hai jaise vo chahe...Possessiveness is must in relationship but over possessiveness can cause great harm and make this relationship a cage...U have to give enough space to let ur partner breathe in open air and feel this relationship a blessing...
But mayank always wanted nupur to be like the girls who wr the heroine of his love stories and as nupur is completely different frm other girls things dint work out here...He defo needs to realize that he shud let her love him the way she wants...And if he wants to see some changes in her he also hav to change himself according to her...
Loved this part...Hope he'll show some maturity next time he see her...
Cont dii..




i agree with u ... all tht u have said... but still there are thing from his POV tht needs to me seen... hope i can do justice with it...
will cont soon dear


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Posted: 13 years ago
I edited my cmnt API...😳
ab mera bhi reply de dou n jaldi se agla wala update kardo...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Anila-

I edited my cmnt API...😳

ab mera bhi reply de dou n jaldi se agla wala update kardo...



lol
control kero larki...😆

will update very soon...aur woh bhi 12 pages k update hai//phew
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Anila-


API!!!!!!!!!!!
Awww...mere liye..😳 u r the BEST API...
Thank u sooo much API...🤗
love u lodsss API...🤗🤗🤗

Awesome update...
loved ur writing...👏
it was Beautifully written once again...⭐️
n d best part was u again described all the feelings sooo Beatifully i loved it...
Sigh!!!!!!! so dey actually broke up...Sigh!
though dey both can't live without eachother still dey r living without each other...
dat really hurts...Sigh!

thanku so much dear..
yup its hurting yet..all the things n there emotions are cuming up more clearly i next part

Gosh!!!!! iss Mayank ka kya karu...
yes! possessive hona chahiye bt ek hadd tak naki ap apne possessiveness ki wajah se apne relationship ki band bajwa dou...Sigh!
usse ab tak nhi pata ke uski problem kya hain n usne asa kya kiya...arey usne itni bar koshish ki n kaha bhi ke agar Mayank ne ek bar bulaya toh woh wapas ajayegi n still usne usko nhi bulaya...n upar se kahe phirta hain ke she broke up!!!!!!! this is the limit!!!!

haan per yeah us k firm belives thy...ek dam se un ko chorna aur yeah maan na k yeah sab gaalat hai itna aasan nhi hota.. plus he is sumwhere right not compleltey
unn dono ne kya haal bana liya hain apna...Sigh!!!!
n d last part...SIGH!!!!!!!
god!!!! it make me teary...Sigh!
Nupur ab bhi usse kitna pyar karti hain n kahin na kahin uska wait bhi...DEEP SIGH!!!!!
it was sooo heart wrenching... :'(
i jst hope ke iss bar Mayank apni galti plzzz samjh le...Sigh!
loved it lodsss
love u lodsss API...🤗🤗🤗

asa tu nhi hai k sirf nupur us se ab bhi pyar keti hai... pyaar tu dono traf hai... yet there are things jo mein ny nhi dkehi atleast from mayank's POV jo i will try k mein next part mein achy se dekha paao...
thnsk alot dear


ps: i agree with what u said in -Nyx- reply...it was Mayank who became selfish as he wants his lover to be exactly like how he want n even forgot that the same thing goes to Him too...😳



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