Mohabbat Yun..last part PG 132 - Page 15

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shria19

Nice update:)
continue soon



thnks alot
will cont soon

Originally posted by: --Ruchi--

AMazing update di...Mayur ke college fights yaad aa gaye by God!

Loved their conversation...
going good...cont soon.



thnsk alot dear
lol... han office mein bhi college ki tarah lartay hain...
thns..wil cont soon




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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Anila-

Awesome update API...
i jst loved it to d coreee...sacchi
u know jab maine ussi din yeh update parha tha tab hi mann kiya tha ke comment kardu abhi bt phir time nhi mila toh chali gayi...
it was such a Beautiful part...
n more importantly it was Beautifully written Actually...

thanks alot that u find it so good..realy loving the fact ur enjoying this ff
loved it lodss...
BTW i hv a feeling ke woh flowers Nupur ko Mayank ne hi diya tha kya yeh sach hain???ya main ainvay hi assume kar rahi hoon???
nhi nhi yeah baat sach nhi hai..mayank ny nhi diya... tum zayada soch rahi hoo...sir nhi toot jata mayank ka
n den khud ko jan ne dene wali baat humey bhttt acchi lagi...
loved d way der relationship is proceeding...
n OMG!!!!! loved dat Red wala dilog...😆🤣
Red ki asi examples sirf meri API hi likh sakti hain...By God!!!😆🤣

i can cause i really feel such for red😕😆..kiya kero ...kuch tu light dekhna tha nupur ko bechari hitler lag rahi hai

n den wah wah!! kya baat kahi i jst loved d way Mayank is knowing Nupur without any boundaries from her...i mean jaisi woh actual mein hain Mayank ne khud hi usse waise jan ne laga hain...loved dat Upset naki gussa hone wala line...n Nupur's confusion...😳
n loved dat Bachy wala line.😆...Mayank is ri8 arey Lover ko koi bachy thori na bolte hain bhai..😉
YA ALLAH!!! pehli dafa kisi ff mein Mayank ko Failed hua student karar diya gaya...😲😲😲
i jst loved dat too much...😆
n d last line...😆🤣
has has ke main sach mein mar gayi...🤣🤣
🤣loved dat Red Bull give u wings wala line...🤣🤣🤣
loved it to d coreee...
love u lodsss API...🤗🤗🤗

ps: n han ek baat sacchi sacchi bolna woh 10months wali baat bass ase hi likha ya yeh kahin inke real ppl ke upar toh nhi 😉😳




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thanks dear..
so glad ur enjoying and actually looking at all aspects will help u to understnd it more as story progress...

n PS..: lol..nhi its not at ll real life.. yeah kisi wajha se hai..agay pata chaly ga tum ko
thnks for comenting whn i know ur too busy

🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update API.
i loved it lodsss
really loved Nupur-Riya bonding here...
loved it to d coreee...
dey were so cute and adorable...
i loved when Nupur said sorry to Mayank...
and i was so sure dat he is gonna meet her when he went to dat beach n yes i was ri8
i loved Mayank n Riya's convo der...
spcly when Mayank offered to have coffee and d way riya replied...
i was toalyy Awwwed with dis lil Princess...
i loved her sooo much...
n for d 1st time m loving a character named Riya...sigh!!
loved it lodsss
love u API...🤗🤗🤗

ps: really sorry for d delay...😳

Edited by -Anila- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely updt fiza
loved mayur & riya interaction
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago

beautiful update

update gmyh plz... missing it😛

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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful part Fiza
you have expressed Nupur's feeling beautifully i can understand what she demands and expect from others but on the other hand in reality no one care about others feelings...so its better to not expect anything from others.."expections give us hurt"its my

Philosophy n i believe on it..

Anyways...the last part was so adorable n for me now the real story is start n i am liking this FF now..

continue soon
Auroni.92 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved this part dii...
Beautifully written specially the last part mayur with riya..
Cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago

awesomest update di..

loved it
mayank n riya together r adorable...
hayee
thanks4 the pm
may god blessu
Edited by parul_bansal - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
very lovely and sweet update...
love riya's talks...they were so sweet ...
continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful and mindblowing part. love it

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