IPKKND: One Halvai to Another Part 2: Page 19 - Page 17

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Posted: 13 years ago
What a great great story! As always, somehow you bring to the forefront something that never even occurred to me and is now all I can think of.

What cut me to the quick was how this didn't even occur to Arnav- and you are absolutely right, in lacing Khushi's explanation with bitterness-the issue of her being a divorcee in this day and age, from her specific background is nothing more than a death knell to any future she may have had.

She would now only be eligible for middle aged widowers with bad breath and greedy lustful hands, for men with children looking for free maid and nanny service, and always face, well into her future, cruel mother in laws looking for a helpless girl to torment.

This is what Arnav's contract has left her with in terms of options should she even recover from the emotional scars he inflicted, and ever seek a relationship, a respectable marriage again. A nineteen year old, who should be giggling about her potential wedding, dreaming about bangles and ghagras and suhaagan rites has been destroyed, denied a future as effectively as if he had cut her heart in half.

I hope he pays, because she will be paying for a mistake she never committed, and that he too easily has gotten away with.

Edited by napstermonster - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
heya

awesome update...

khushi said 19 year old divorcee girl is not a perfect candidate..was soo sad...depicted how hurt khushi is...

very well written...

thanks for the pm..:)
continue soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Haha oh Arnie Arnie Arnie...I just love it when the green-eyed monster strikes especially on the most unsuspecting victims!

Hmmm...so she was married to Arnav? I love how they still have lingering rights over each other, Arnav asking about where she was going and Khushi's concern for him.

So Suraj is from Diya Aur Bati Hum! He's so cute! Loved how you brought these together. I don't usually watch any serials besides IPKKND because I normally can't stand the drama but went to my grandparents recently and was forced into sitting and watching it. All I can say is thank goodness Khushi wasn't married into that house the mother...blooming nutcase!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Arnav fell off his chair 🤣

Ought to say that Kushi and Suraj would make an handsome couple, they are simple and uncomplicated persons..Uff ..ASR is too complicated...and tough to handle...

When Kushi said about being a "19 yr old divorcee"..I thought Arnav felt a tight slap..He must not have seen the rejection from that angle.

Yup...u amaze me..loved ur update..thanks for accepting my buddy request and for the pm...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Does Kushi really think of her past that way, that apart from the honest facts? Maybe she DOES still love Arnav?
Oh well. Atleast the update was gorgeous and thats all I want ^^!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Kushi and Suraj is such a good pair actually! Though not possible and some people might kill me for thinking that eventually!!

I loved the total update! It started so happy but ended with sad note!!

A very different attempt Shuhey! Please continue this, somehow, might be till Sandhya comes in or Kushi forgives Arnav!!

Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Arnav fell off his chair? 🤣 awesome update, makes me wonder, did she really refuse cause of her past or cause she still has feelings for Arnav?
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Posted: 13 years ago
what arnav and khushi already divorced?😲😲 suraj is ver sweet person and not anything like arnav what a girl wants for her husband.. but still arnav is arnav and suraj is suraj... last scene i felt so sad for khushi...what have you done arnav 🄺😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great part! Arnav should meet Suraj's sister-in-law, Meenakshi.. lol That would be hilarious. She could sell him some saris for his wife from her shop next door to the halwai..
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh my god.
update update update!
this story is so good!

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