IPKKND: One Halvai to Another Part 2: Page 19

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Gunjan Mukherjee

@gunjanmkj

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Posted: 13 years ago

#181

Arnav fell off the chair!!! :D hahahaha gr8!! Serves him right :D poor khushi..19yr old divorcee sounds so sad :( neway,gr8 update,thnx 4 d pm :)

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Daayan Bai

@KunwaariDaayan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#182

Thanks for that Shuheda...loved it...but I had no idea about the divorce...you caught me off guard again!..I think Khushi and Suraj will be cute together.

Edited by shaz2009 - 13 years ago

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Ishrafan11

@Ishrafan11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#183

That very intreasting aww poor kushi

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elle22

@elle22

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Posted: 13 years ago

#184

Please continue soon...I dont know suraj...but i liked all of Arnav's reactions...AND he said SORRY...thats huge for ASR.

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insanelycrazy

@insanelycrazy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#185

omg i think khushi is the cutest and the most adorable fictional character i have or could ever see! she's so mast and bindas! i LOVE her happy go lucky and carefree attitude. she sees Suraj and just naturally mingles in with him as if they are the oldest friends!! i loved how she challenged him in the last part about making the world's best jalebis! (i tried making jalebis a couple of weeks back and failed miserably, such a bloody hard task! tsk tsk)

that bhabo person literally freaked me out! such a khadoos! grrr and chotu is sooo cute! trying to fix up his brother with khushi, gosh! its a good thing arnav came late or otherwise he would strangle the poor kid!

i think khushi and suraj would make an ADORABLE pair! (Just like NK and khushi, hogs both of them are :P ) they'd keep making jalebis all day long and eating it. Knowing that Khushi is such a foodie, she might just lead to Suraj's business going on a down hill! bwahahahha

cute story!!

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Yuks

@-Yuks-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#186

Excellent so far. I would love to read more

Yuks

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haminasto

@haminasto

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Posted: 13 years ago

#187

OMG!!!!!!!!!! did i say my mum is like gone crazy since i told her you wrote about SurajJI n Khushi?.
they r so perfect!!!!!!!!...He'll make jalebies she'll gobble them with earnest!!!!

But Bhabo was like so after her Aukad of education.Like Arnav being after the lack of it she was after the excess of limit she wanted.
poor girl.

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exoLarmy

@exoLarmy

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#188

Aww that was very cute!

Khushi is so bubbly and sweet! & Suraj has a really clear and lucid mind! 👍🏼 He's so adorable!

If Suraj and Khushi were a couple then i would say they are absolutely pulchitrude! almost made for eachother!

AND They can both make Jelabi babies 😉😛😆

Love the way Khushi bit back and hushed Arnav. LOL it was funny.😆

He deserves it. The remorse is not enough. Let him suffer for once. And when he realises and truly feels penitence for his wrong doings then he can be with Khushi :)

I really enjoyed reading it!

Thanks for the PM cupcake :)

Much love.

xxx

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Blue Rose

@uniquebluerose

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#189

Arnav fell off his chair at the marriage proposal!!!!

hmmm something should have hit his head and gosh so he clearly doesn't realize the implication of all the senseless actions he did...did he

that the girl life would be totally ruined!!!! and how it would affect and thing like that ...

as for Khushi and Suraj well no offence meant but Suraj is just too sober and too obedient and always listening to his mother for Khushi...as far as my view goes NK is the right candidate!!!! But then of course Suraj and Khushi will work in a way because he is just so forgiving and understanding and once he know the truth probably wold be ready to marry her even then and probably wait for ever Khushi to learn to love him!!!

that his best quality as far as i can see!!!

But loved your update esp the way you mentioned Chotu and Bhabo is just too cute!!!