D3 NEW FF-DIL DOSTI MASTI CHAP 22(a & b) PG 123,124 - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: PD_puja

Jst read it...n its awesome...plz add me 2 d pm list...n do pm me nxt tym u update...

ya sure thanx for liking it
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
hey guys thanx for this huge response as youl demamnded for a fast chap 1 update here it is hope youl like it
CHAP 1
We see a beautiful dobrial mansion in which Sharon n Kriya live.
Dobrial manshion was built by their parents for them as it was already decided tht they are gng to cum to mumbai for futher studies.
we see a girl screaming
girl:kriya where are u ????jaldi neeche aa na
another girl cumes down from the staires
she was kriya😊
kriya:kya hua sharon???itna chilla kyu rahi hai*folding her hands*
the girl who was scereming was sharon😊
sharon:arey woh mujhe ST Louis jana hai addmission ke kaam se toh main ja rahi hoon
kriya:theek hai bye
suddenly another girl enters in the house
she was neha😊
sharon:neha tu yaha kya kar rahi hai???/
neha:kyu main tere ghar nahi a sakti kya???
sharon:nahi aasakti hain par achanak se???
kriya:neha kya hua rey???
neha:woh actually she knells down infront of sharon n says plzz sharon meri baat man ja plzz!!!!
sharon:kya kar rahi hai tu pagal hogai hai kya
neha:plzz sharon party main chali ja
sharon:konsi party kiski party
neha:arey kisi ki toh party hai rey meri daadi ne zabardasthi mujhe waha jane ko bola hai par u know na ki mujhe yeh party warty main intrest nahi plzz yaar maan ja na main tere hath pao padhthi hoon tu jo kehegi main wohi karungi
sharon:arey toh kriya ko bolna
kriya:wht???pagal hai kya main nahi jane wali
neha:ha rey yeh kriya bahout bhav kha thi hai plzz sharon
sharon:theek hai theek hai main jati hoon par main toh St Louis ja rahi thi kuch khaam tha ab woh kham neha tu...
sorry sorry galat inshaan ko pucha kriya tu chali ja na plzz
kriya:theek hai main jati hoon
neha:thanx sharon love u rey n hugs her
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St LOUIS collage
kriya enters St louis she loves the coll
she was walking she askes one girl
kriya:yeh principal ka room kaha hai
girl:waha straight jake right
kriya:thanx
PRINCIPAL OFFICE:
kriya:sir can i come in??
princi-yes ohh miss kriya mujhe toh laga sharon ayegi
kriya:woh use khaam tha
princi-theek hai yaha tumare sign chahiye the aur ha main tumse khena chah tha tha ki tum coll aj hi dekh lo aur kal apne doston ko dekha dena
kriya:kyu sir
princi:woh kal tum logo ki coll main koi madat nahi karega sab busy hone kal kal aisa accouncem,ent hoga jisme sab busy honge
kriya:in a low voice announcement???
theek hai sir main dekh lungi😊 n she leaves
PARTY
sharon enters the party
she was walking wen she bangs into a guy who hand juice in his hands n tht juice falls on sharon's dress
sharon:dekh nahi sakthe kya tum
tht guy was non other than our dashing swayam😳😉
swayam just walkes away without saying anything
sharon:heloo are u mad???ohh god kaise log rehthe hai mumbai main
St Louis
kriya was walking in the corridor looking at the colleage
a guy was trying to talk to a girl
guy:plzz piya meri baat sun lo plzz
tht girl was piya
piya:no rey tum har waqt yeh karte hoon main tumari best friend hoon par tum hamesha yeh karte hoon mujhe tum se baat nahi karni
tht guy was non other than our hot reyaansh singhania😉😳
rey:piya i know maine tumse chupaya u are my best friend par listen
piya just walkes away
rey to himself:manana toh padega par kaise
baat suni hogi use meri!!!!
kriya was walking n piya was beside her piya goes ahead
rey was walking backwards n grabs a girl's hand n takes her in the fire exit
he wanted to take piya but bymistake he takes kriya in the fire exit
kriya started screaming so rey keeps his hand on her mouth n pins her towards the wall😳
rey n kriya were just staring at eachother😳
rey in his mind:she is so beautiful par yeh hai koun
kriya removes his hand and starts screaming tumari himmat kaisi hui mujhe touch karne ki wht u u think of ur self ha
rey:arey woh
kriya:arey kya ha tum jaise ladko ko main ache se janti hoon ladki dekhi nahi ki sharu hojathe hai
rey:arey miss baatcutter!!!!
kriya:baatcutter nahi kriya kriya !!! samjhe
n goes out of the fire exit
rey:yeh ladki koun hai ise pehle toh kabhi nahi dekha maine n starts smiling😊
PARTY:
a guy was talking to swayam
tht guy was non other than our cute vicky😃😳
vic:dude main tujhe kyu laya hoon???
swa:tujhe company dene ke lie
vic:kya kath company de raha hai tu mujhe aisa baitha rahega toh main walls ke sath enjoy karu kya
swa:arey par
vic:dude tu bahout bada padhaku hai yaar koi bekieve nahi karega ki tu hamare dance team main hai
sharon hears all this she goes to them
sharon:sahi kaha tumne
vic:do we knoe you???
sha:no u dnt n sits beside vicky
vicky is giving her a confused look
sha:tumara dost chehre se hi boring aur padaku lagta hai
swayam:wht??/
sha:yes aur kya kaha tumne ki yeh dance karta hai are u serious lagta hain tum mamzak kar rahe ho kyu ki boring logo ko maine dance karte nahi dekha hai n gets up n goes from there
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sharon was leaving from the party suddenly swayam takes her arm n pulls her towards him
LOOK LOOK HAWA HAWA😳😳😳😳
swa:main bata tha hoon ki main dance kar sakta hoon
swayam n sharon do salsa😉
(i cant describe salsa lol😆 so im agine it urself)
sharon was shocked cuz his salsa was perfect n swayam too was shocked cuz sharon was too perfect in salsa
vicky was enjoying this
suddenly swayam leaves sharon n walks out of the party n sharon is just staring
so guys this much for now hope youl liked this part!!!!!
plzz do like it n comment
n a reminder if u want pms add
akhu-tehmu to ur byuddy list
precap:
viha meeting n dazzlers first day in st louis
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: apurva100

Update soon na basanti..

kar diya maine update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
awesome dude...swaron n kriyaansh first meeting...too good...swayam n sharon salsa..*le me dies*...update the next part soon...n thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
Awesome luved kriyansh n swaron ki first meeting update the next part soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
Awsome akshu..love it..
jaldi jaldi update karti reh..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: SwaRonluver666

awesome dude...swaron n kriyaansh first meeting...too good...swayam n sharon salsa..*le me dies*...update the next part soon...n thanks for the pm

thanx alot for liking it next update soon n ya i included swaron salsa cuz i love swaron salsa
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: lovely7010

Awesome luved kriyansh n swaron ki first meeting update the next part soon...

thanx will update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: apurva100

Awsome akshu..love it..
jaldi jaldi update karti reh..

thanx apu
jaldi akrungi update😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
wah!!
kya update thi..!!!👏
masha allah!!😆
waiting for the first meeting...😍

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