FF : I Feel Nothing. Updated Part 40

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farheen75

@farheen75

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#411

amazing update...u r prtraying khushi's mental trauma and fragile condition so beautifully...arnav's remorse and repentance is equally endearing...your continuous updates are enhancing the beauty of this ff...thanx for writing such a beautiful piece of fiction.

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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#412

thanks for quick updates.. it was beautiful.. i really like the way he expresses his undying love for her and how he makes her feel again..

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Pissa99

@Pissa99

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#413

Heyy..

Part 18 is the most passionate and beautiful thing I've ever read. You seriously know how to write beautifully..Keep on writing for us. I really loved the way you have gradually moved the story forward without a rush.. While reading I felt the pain Khushi went through and Arnav trying to make it up to her..

Thanks for the pm dear.

It was lovely!!

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sRistee

@crazy44

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#414

OMG! that creep, i feel like smacking him!
and arnav, hes trying his level best to make it up to her!
loveD it.. i am already exciteD for the next part! :D
awesome update hun!
and thank you for the pm :)

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mimi

@moon_mine

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#415

loved all the parts!!!!!

they were jst awesome!!!!

too good!!!!

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603840

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#416

omg!! amazing emotional part. i felt like crying with khushi's last question. i hate that i love arnav at the moment

xxx

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sRistee

@crazy44

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#417

i am sPeech lesS!
it was so HOT HOT ;)
and the love making was so intense, arnav just wanteD to show her how much he loveD her. :)
i hope khusi fEEls pRotecteD again ! i hope thngs turn ouT welL !
faB update hun!
loveD it
p.s(my comment did nOt get posteD in the blog so i am posting it here!
and you are the best, so many updates in a day! i fEel like a 7 year old geting her fav toy ;)

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Bhavapriya

@Bunny_Bear

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#418

The last three parts were awesome.. I loved how Arnav used one incident to just throw the mask of respecting shyam.. Khushi is improving and i am happy by the way it is developing. Thanks for the PM