FF-Strings, Tying Us Together #2 Part 15 Pg101 4/7

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YPNHK_kiFANno.1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#761

OK! Mission begins now! 😛 I've neglected these for too long! It is time to delve back into Mya's more than lovely writings and begin on the readings! 😆 This was always my fave of yours n I have just read u have put some of the others on hold so what better place to start, than here! I have already read about half of this when you know My I was always dying for updates! 😆 Now get ready again cos I'm re-reading this and you'll have another person pestering you! …Now to begin...😉

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AquaBluez17

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Posted: 13 years ago

#762

Originally posted by: YPNHK_kiFANno.1
OK! Mission begins now! 😛 I've neglected these for too long! It is time to delve back into Mya's more than lovely writings and begin on the readings! 😆 This was always my fave of yours n I have just read u have put some of the others on hold so what better place to start, than here! I have already read about half of this when you know My I was always dying for updates! 😆 Now get ready again cos I'm re-reading this and you'll have another person pestering you! 'Now to begin...😉

can't wait girl!! nice to see you back on board!!

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AquaBluez17

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Posted: 13 years ago

#763

Originally posted by: Electric_BuBBle
Fabulous update, Mya! It was written awesomely!

I just loved how Khushi's plan worked but then Lavanya's revenge, ugh! Hate her so much!

Anyway awesome update, continue soon :D

thanks Meggy! Im glad you liked it!!

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AquaBluez17

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Posted: 13 years ago

#764

Originally posted by: priyah_reddy
Awesome update as always 👏👏👏

Would love to see ASR being protective of Khushi when these male models try to harass Khushi ... I would so love to see La's plan fail.

Loved it 😊

thanks for the comment!! don't worry you will see something though it mite be surprising!

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AquaBluez17

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Posted: 13 years ago

#765

Originally posted by: asumi
gaaarrr! what is LAvanya's problem!!!

lol superb update! ant wait to see La's plan back fire ( hopefully :P )

you will see!! it will be nice haha

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 13 years ago

#766

oh ho male models the return ...wounder what happens this time...keep on writting

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AquaBluez17

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Posted: 13 years ago

#767

Originally posted by: flowers4u
oh ho male models the return ...wounder what happens this time...keep on writting

thanks! glad you liked it!

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YPNHK_kiFANno.1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#768

Originally posted by: AquaBluez17

can't wait girl!! nice to see you back on board!!

Wu-ow!! So yeah just been reading ALL the updates from the start and I think I stopped reading round about the time he lost his memory! 😭 It was honestly too sad! I'm really bad though lol, hehe cos it's nice to read an FF a little later, cos I'm ALWAYS impatient to read the next part and this way I know loads of parts await me and I just love reading em all !😆 WOW! This FF has come a long way My! It was heartbreaking the way he treated her and taunted her ! But this girl has got spunk alright! She's gonna give back as good as she gets!

I cannot believe he called La back and to top it all off, no one stopped her from coming back! I thought maybe Akaash might put her in her place and tell her to get lost, but also understand that yes…the doc told em to keep everything as it was, so he finds his own way back, remembers everything himself.

The whole dream/nightmare sequence was beautifully done, you could feel what a fitful sleep he had and also I was like , at least he remembered stuff! La is such a meany! I hope she soon realises that what she is doing is very, very wrong and I so know Arnav will NOT let her get harassed, he just will not and then after I'm sure he'll be majorly confused as to why he couldn't watch her being teased by those models! 😕

Arnav does love her deep down it's clear, he's fighting these feelings again, I wish she knew that he does love her and that is why he is acting like this. I like all these little points you make about how she had just managed to get him to eat his food on time and come to the pooja's and how she won't 'let him get away with it', the poor thing has worked too hard to let a little memory loss mess up her achievements! 😛

You've portrayed the turmoil and conflicting of emotions very well My 👏 and well what else is left to say apart from….cannot wait for the next update! (Lol I have missed writing 'can't wait for the next one') I'm impatient to read more now! Whoop! One down, many more more to go! …umm next one I think I'll pick Dildara!