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honeygrape

@honeygrape

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#361

awsome update dear...wow i dint know that you ll update today...thanx a loot dearie...and about the less number of comments, the story has just started dear...so may be thats the reason...sabr karo dear...

hey dadima is on her side...thats great..and really the story is becoming more interesting dear...

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Remya

@Remya_Pillai

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#362

Awesum part..

did maan really shoved off dat bracelet..

I feel very bad for vicky..

But i hope geet makes the family one...

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ritzy09

@ritzy09

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#363

loved the update Simi...already differences between him and Shetan are coming through. Though circumstances made them what they are but here Maan is moulded more like this because of his responsibility...

loved the line where Geet thinks "are kings supposed to be rithless"...crux of it...right there

saw u r note Simi. I know as a writer how disheartening it is to not get likes and comments. But then I always think of my those readers who have always appreciated me and waited for my updates. You are a much better write than many of us as you have experience and depth in your stories. So please dear calm down and we are always there to support you.

Also read about your surgery. Hope it is not something very serious. Take ample rest if you are not well and we will wait for your updates. Take your time.

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Zohamaaneet

@Zohamaaneet

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#364

awesome simi
love it yaar
so will see wat store next fro geet

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nehakapoor7

@nehakapoor7

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#365

wow.. superb update... Little Vicky so cute.. now Geet found someone with whom she can share.. , m sure she'll melt Maan as well..😉 but now waiting for Suhag Raat...

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Sparkling-eyes5

@Sparkling-eyes5

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#366

Awesome update n i did not get a single pm although my inbox is empty

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Maaneet4eve

@Maaneet4eve

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#367

loved the updates... waiting for the next one...

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Saru

@smallville

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#368

Awesome
Love how geet got along with Vicky !!
Update soon

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504887

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#369

awesome update!
loved it!
awww she won Daadima's heart too with her niceness!!
awww Vicky and Geet bonding was so cute and sweet!
The way she consoled Vicky and played with him was lovely!
OMG Maan is so rude. He threw the bracelet! Poor Vicky was so scared and hurt!
OMG Maan humiliated Geet in front of the whole village! loved how she held her stance!
OMG Maan forcing himself on her!! Poor Geet! Ha ha Maan jealous of his own brother!
loving this new Shetan!!!
cont soon!
You rocked it!