ArHi FF: Check Mate! (completed)

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Akorshi Oroni

@Akorshi

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#411

good one dear ...but they again lied...kya hoga un dono ki divorce...i want them to be forever...thxx fr update ...next update soon...

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hari93

@hari93

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#412

Thanx a lot for the PM...

Awesome update...

Khushi is so strong...

The way she dealt with the situation...WoW...!!!👏

Why can't they just murder Shyam tat'll end all their problems...😡

Arrrggghhh...!!!! I hate tat Snake...😡

Anyways Beautiful update..

Poor Arnav , He is sooo hurt...😭

Can't wait to read the next part...

Plz do continue soon...

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LyssaPie

@LyssaPie

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#413

wow that was amazing!

Finally it dawned upon Arnav that Khushi indeed sacrificed too much!

I love what Anjali said

But Khushi to the rescue!!

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Pooja

@poolovesarnav

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Posted: 13 years ago

#414

Reading this i felt like crying...Arnav seems helpless for the first time ever...i cant imagine what he'll do when the MU is cleared in show :(

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GoBananas

@GoBananas

Explorer

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#415

cant wait to read ahead!! :D

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Rhysenn

@Rhysenn

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#416

That was intense! Do continue please! 😊

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rockinggirl5

@rockinggirl5

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#417

I loved the date but I cant wait till I get my hands on this Shyam. I just really want to kill him right now. What does he think of himself? I can't wait to read the next update. Please continue soon.

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san2346

@san2346

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#418

nice update...wonder what will happen next?

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Zees-Dbn

@Zees-Dbn

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#419

I just found this update and read all the chapters at one go... WOW, wow WOW!!!

Love ur potryal of the characters. The last update broke my heart to c Arnav so heartbroken.

Keep up the fab wrk.

Pls add me to ur PM list

Thanks😊

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Stapleton

@Stapleton

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#420

Wonderful story. Just now read all d parts.
Please pm me if it's possible 4 u

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