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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Kriyansh-love

Hey guyz i knw i had said ki aaj ek surprise hoga par guyz im really sorry ki mai aaj kuch nahi de payi aap loginko nahi ek update aur nahi wo surprise im really sorry mal kal pakka dedungi . Aaj metlra mood kuch accha nahi hai issiliye update nahi kar payi
thank you & sorry 😳

That's okay. Next time de dena. :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow da way kriya taking care of rey is soo jst sweet
loved it soo much
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hola guyz !!!! hw r u all :D well to all those who want 2 kill me 4 nt informing b4 going on dis long break of 6days ,( sply snigda ) im teribaly sorry , acctualy due to sum personal reasons i could nt update , hope u all vl understand :) thanks , & enjoy :) & snigda dis update is sply 4 u :)

guyz b4 i start i want to give a small recap acctually d recap is of SWARON i.e 4m part 6 , ull get it why , as u read d update :) hope im clear , if its confusing plz do feel free to ask me :)

RECAP :
SW: wo , wo , um wo humei NOTES , I , I mean tum logon ko class chalna chahiye ...
R:swayam tu tekk hai na ??? ab tujhe kya hogaya ??? sharon kya kam thi jo ab tu bhi itna wierd behave kar raha hai ? hua kya hai tum dono ko ?

[ becharey SWARON :P ]

Sw: arey nahi yaar kuch nahi hua hai hum dono ko wo accutally hum dono ne peheli wali class miss kardithi na so hume uske notes bana ne hai , haina SHARON ? [ looking @ her who was already dreamily STARING @ him ]

LOOK LOOK HAWA HAWA :D

Sw: * breaks d eye lock * Sharon , haina ? * indicating her 2 say a YES *
Sh: * cumz outa her dream land of SWAYAM * haan haan wo humei notes bana ne hai , issiliye hum LIBERARY ja rahai hain
all except KRIYA : LIBERARY !!!!!! AUR TUM ????

Sw: haan to kya hua kya Sharon liberary nahi ja sakthi ?? usme kya hai ? haan , tum log bhi na , kuch bhi kehthe ho , [ b4 anybody cud say any thing else cud say anything swayam holds sharons hand & just pulls her out off there safely ]


Part 8 ( part 1 )
guyz dis is PART 1 of CHAPTER 8

nw imagine dat dis is d continution of d recap given above

SWARON :)

Swayam pulled Sharon out of d canteen safly & den stoped 3-4 steps away 4m an empty class .

Sw: ur welcum :)
Sh: huh ? oh haan sorry , i mean thx :) & b4 he cud say anything else she stared to move ... ( with her high heals )
Sw: hey , ruko ...

Sharon turned @ an alaram & her heal sliped & she was abot to fall on d groung with a big thud ... bt as usual SWAYAM d hero saved her , he caught her wait tight enough to support her 4m d fall , * pehela nasha in d background music *

she had closed her eyes tight due to fear bt as soon as she realised dat she has floting in d midle & had nt fallen on d ground she opned her right eye to c wat was going on & den she opened her let eye & den LOOK LOOK HAWA HAWA

SW: * dreamily * WOW !
Sh*brok d eye lock * kya ?

Swayam pulled her more closer * by waist * Shron's eyes widened ,

Sw: mai ne kaha WOW ! :) ;)
Sh: umm, kisliye ?
SW: kisliye nahi kinkeliye ?
Sh: huh ?
Sw: tumhari yeh aanken , dey r BEAUTIFUL * hey stressed on d word BEAUTIFUL & also draged it a lill *
Sh: smiles * a bit lyk blushing * umm, thx & again same smile * plz imagine d smile which she had in d latest episode wen she was talking to swaym on d phone *
Sw: waise tum itni bhi bari nahi ho , i can carry u par agar hum aise hi rahe tho i dnt mind bt others vl surly do & gives a soft smile :)
Sh: huh ? & den she looks around her & every1 wer staring @ nly dem & den she looked @ her's & swayam's POSITION & straightened herself ...
Sh: umm , excuse me ...& was about to leave wen suddenly she was stoped by swayam ( he had caught her wrist ) & he pulls her into d empty class room & closes d door behind him ...
b4 sharon cud say anything SWAYAM spoke

Sw: sharon pehele baito
Sh: par
Sw: plz , batio
sharon sits & swayam sits beside her
Sw: sharon , baath kya ?
Sh: * lill nervous * ba..ba..baath ? kaunsi baath ? she gets up tum kya keh raheho swayam ? mujhe kuch samj nahi aaraha hai ...
Sw: par mujhe samaj aaraha hai ...
Sh: kya samj araha hai ? i mean ki jab kuch hai hi nahi tab tumhe kaise kuch samj mai aa saktha hai ? tum bhi na swaym , kuch bhi ... & smiles * fAKE ONE *
Sw: KRIYA ,
Sh: kya ? tum .. tumhe kaise pata ?

Swayam smirks & sharon bits her lower lip a little

Sh: fine ... & looks down 4m few seconds , swayam cums close to her & makes her sit

Sw: bato , kya baath hai ?
Sh; swayam wo , mai wo , [ turns d other side , facinf her back towards him ] pata nahi kyun swayam , but i hav a very weird feeling about Kriya , mera matlab hai ki , ummm, aisa lagtha hai ke hum dono ke beech kuch hai , something important , something strong ... jabse usse dekha hai , aisa lag raha hai ki im connected , connected to HER , pata nahi kya hai , par usse dekh the hi mujhe uski yaad aathi hai ...
Sw: u mean , tumhari ( b4 he cud complete his sentence , she turns towards him with tears rolling downd her eyes ]
Sw: hey , sharon ... [comes closer to her & wipes her tears] dekho shaaron , i knw hw it feels , par aise rone se wo todi na wapas agayen ge ? nahina ? aur kya undono ko accha lagega agar tum aise rovogi ? she nodes her head in disagreement i.e saying no , to ? aur kya tum mera promise bhulgayi ho ? yaad hai ki nahi ?
Sh: hmmm , soochne do * smiles * yaad hai , par
Sw: par war kuch nahi , dnt u knw ki mai kabhi bhi apne promises nahi todtha ? * he says dat vt full on tashan *
Sh: * hits playfully on his head * haan haan sab janthi hun , mai , tum aur tumhare promisess
Sw: ouch !!! dat hurts * pouts *
Sh: nautaki ... * smiles *
Sw: kahan ?
Sh: kya kahan ?
Sw: nautanki ? kahan chalrahe hai ? chalona chal kar dekthe hai * smirks *
SH: raises her eyebrows
Sw: gulps down a lump of saliva
Sh: hahahaha , swayam look @ u :) kitne cute lagrahe ho , let me click a pik :D & she clicks a pik of him
Sw: yeh kya ? dis is nt fare , delete karo
Sh: hahahaha dekho to kitne wierd lag rahe ho , isse to mai kabhi bhi delet nahi karungi
[ guys just imagine a funny fearfull face of SWAYAM ]
Sw: sharon do , mujhe phone do ,
Sharon gets up & starts running & swaym chaese her to take d phone & finally dey stop & sit on d benches beside each other breathing hard & suddenly both burst out into laughter

Sw: accha teek hai , ab chalo liberary nahi jaana kya ? apni joot ko saach mai badla na jo hai :)
Sh: ( smiles) haan haan udalo mera mazak , dnt 4get mera bhi tym ayega ...
Sw: tab ki tab dekh lenge *smirks* teek hai chalo , umm ladies first :)
Sh: huh ? tum na sach mai pagal ho :)

Sharons moves 2-3 steps front but den turns back & cums & hugs SWAYAM tightly * guyz SWARON's 1st HUG *
Sw: sharon , kya hua ? u ok na ?
She hugs him more tightly , & he to hugs her back

Sh: thank u , thank u so much swaym , tum hamesha se mere saath dethe ho , sply iss topic par , tum mujhe itne ache se kaise janthe ho ?
Sw: ssharon , plz thx mat bolo yeh mera farz hai , aur haan yeh mai kudh bhi nahi jantha ki mai tumhe itne ache se kaise jantha hun
SH [ laughs hardly ] tum na kabhi nahi sudroge , she breaks d hug & says , thx , jab bhi mai upset hoti hun to tum hamesha aise stupid cheeze karke mujhe hasa dethe ho , thank u
Sw: are baba ab bas bhi karo , kitna thx bologi ? aur yeh kya pura makeup karab karliya ? ek min * he takes out his hankey & stars wiping her ters & den corrects he kajal ... sharon keeps staring @ him ...
Sw: yeh lo hogaya ,:)
Sh: cums bak to her senses & says thx with a smile

suddenly der is a knock on d door [ remember swayam had locked d door ]

students keep knocking & one of dem
BOY 1 : arey koi andar hai kya ?
BOY2: darvaz akolo bhai , hume classes hai
BOY3 are kaun hai yeh idiot ?

Sh: shit ab kya karen hum ? yeh to humara class bhi nahi hai * feared face *
Sw: aise tym pe sirf ek hi kaam hosaktha hai
Sh: kya ?
Sw: kidki ?
Sh: wat ???? kidki ? matlab ?
SW: simple hume kidki se kudhna hoga
SH: tum pagal to nahi hogaye hona ? mai iss kapade mai kidki se kaise kudhungi ? i cant ...
Sw: are mai hun na , tum mera haath pakad lo ,
Sh: r u sure abt it ?
Sw: dnt u trust me ?
Sh: i do par , kisine dekhliya tho ?
Sw: are koi nahi dekega , tum avo to sahi ..
Sh: teek hai , chalo

and den swayam opens d window which wud lead dem to d coridor & thankfully d corridor was empty ,
Sw: chalo , mera haath pakad lo , & gives her his hand , she hold it & dey stand on d base of d window

Kriyansh wer going ind same corridor & dey saw SWARON holding hands & standing on d base of d window ,
R: are yeh dono kya kar rahe hai ?
K: idiot jump karne wale hai
R: wo tho teek hai par kyun ?

SWAYAM checked d corridor to make sure no1 saw dem & kriyansh hid dem self behing a pillar & rey took out his mobile to click a pik of dem & he clicked a pik of dem holding hands & standing on d base on d window * hehe*

SWARON jumped safly & den sharon smiled wide & said , wow , swayam u wer rite :D kuch nahi hua :D
sw: to tumhe kya laga ki mai mazak kar rahahun ?
Sh; nahi par , accha teek hai chalo ...
Sw: kahan ?
Sh: are tum aoona & she drangs him to d crowd infornt of d class room wer dey had der small cute talk
Sw: sharon tum mujhe yahan kyun layi ? pagal hogi ho kya ?
SH: tum bas chup chap dekho
Sw: kya dekhun ?
SH: errr , vl u shut up ?
Sw: makes a baby face

Sh; [ to d crowd ] kya hua guys ? aise bahr kyun kade ho ? classes nahi hai kya ?
BOY1: are yaar classes to hai hi , par daravaza andar se kisi ne lock kiya hua hai ,
Sh: oh dats bad :(

& den cums a BIG FAT teacher of MATHEMATICS ... miss laila :D

ML ( miss laila ) Kya hua ? tum sab idar kaiko kada hai ? aaj class jaane ka man nahi hai kya ???
Sharon in mind ( abhi maza chaka thi hun , mujhe liberary keliye teas kar raha tha na , wait & watch swayam shekawat & smirks )
Sw: are yar tum kya kar rahi ho ? chalo na plz ...
BOY2 : are maam wo acctually class andar se locked hai

ML: oh my loard ! ab kya kare ?

Sh: are maam aap kyun fikar kar rahi ho ? yeh SWAYAM hai na :) wo aap ki madat kare ga
SWAYAM was fully shocked : wat ???? mai ? mai kaise ? tum kya kehrahi ho ?
SH: are swayam , kya hua ? tum na ek kaam karo , wo jo wahan kidki hai na ,tum na usse andar kudh ke jaao aur andar se door koldo ..
Sw: wat ?
Sh: * smirks & wispers * mujhe liberary ke naam se tease kar rahe the na , yeh uskeliye
Swayam's jaws drop down
sharons closes his mouth & says jaao na swayam , dekho miss laila kitni pareshaan ho rahi hai , go help her na & smirks
Sw: ja raha hun * angry face *
Sh: * in mind* hehe , he is soo cute :) , wait yeh mai kya sooch rahi hun ?
swayam jumps inside d window & goes & opes d door 4m inside bt as soon as he does dat miss laila hugs him vt all her effort & says
ML: oh god , thank u swayam , thank u sooo much ... & gives a kiss on his cheek * hehehe*
sharon goes out of d crowd & starts laughing ,

NOTE : sharon had taken piks of miss laila huging & kissing SWAYAM :D hehe

swayam cums out of d crowd vt lot of difficulty , he curses miss laila 4 kissing him ( on cheek ) & den he see's sharon laughing her heart out , 1st he smiles & den as soon as she see's him he gives her an angry look

Sw: yeh sab kya tha ?
Sh: *still laughing * TIT 4 TAT :D & laughs again
Sw: wat ?
Sh:hahaha swayam look @ dis & she shows him d pik in which Miss laila was kissing him on his cheek
Sw: Wat d hell !!! sharon im nt gonna leave u 4 dis

& again a chase , sharon runs to d canteen & swayam follows her ,

NOTE: every1 is in d canteen , i mean KRIYANSH , VIHA , RIMAI , NIMMI , VISHAKA & BHARAT

SH: AAA swayam plzz

Sw: no ways mujhe wo phone dedo

Sharon runs 2 d table wer every1 had sited , guyx plz HELP !!!
R: are kya hua ? aise kyun baag rahe ho ?


PS- sharon & swaym wer on both opposite side of d table ( i hope u got it )


Sw: rey usse wo phone le
Sh: nahi , mai nahi dungi , acctually teek hai , yeh lo rey , iss mai jo pik hai na wo teek se dekha na :D * & she smirks *
Sw: nahii , sharon , chup chap dedo mujhe , dnt u dare show it 2 any1
K: are aisa kya hai jo tum hume nahi dikha na chahathe ? do sharon mujhe do , mai dekthi hun ..
Sh; haan kriya lo lo ,,,
Sw: sharon nahi plz , nooo

by dat tym sharon gives kriya d phone & kriya looks @ it & den kriya looks @ sharon & even sharon looks @ her & both burst out into a huge laughter ...

KRISHA ( kriya & sharon ) hahaha... :D

K: wow , swaym tumhari GF to badi hi HOT hai :D :D
SH: hahahahahahaha aur indono ka colour aur figure bhi kitna match kartha hai , hai n a kriya
K: hahahaha haan

KRISHA : PICTURE PERFECT !!!!! :D

R: are tum log hi dekoge ke hume bhi dikhaoge ?
Sw: sharon ull hav to pay 4 it
SH: accha kitna hua ?
SW: kya ?
SH; tumne hito kaha ki ill hav to PAY 4 it ... to kitne ka hai yeh kiss ? hahahahaha
Sw: tumhe tho , & he runs after her & she runs again & hids behing rey
Sh: rey plz bachao mujhe ...
R:are ruk ruk mujhe dekne de & he takes d phone 4m kriya & see it & den passes it to vicky & says
sharon ur d best :D hahahaha swayam , yeh teri gf hai ? hahaha
SW: kya yaar tu bhi ?
R; accha teek hai , par teri GF bahut hi HOT hai :D hahaha
& den evry 1 see's it & starts laughing on swayam

SW: errr , SHARON !!!!! * lill screaming - in masti *
SH: aaa , koi mujhe bachaoo plz
& she starts runnig & swaym follows her & he pulls her into d FIRE EXIT ...

thats it 4 nw :D hahaha , i hope dis was a treat 4 all my dear SWARON FANS & yeh d next update vl be on page 55 ... it's nt dat far , i knw u all vl make it upto 55 & yeh i want every1 to like it

PRECAP : swaron ka chuma !!! :D

i hope @ least after cing d PRECAP @least ull reach upto 50 , & yeh samping is allowed :D

hope u all liked it & yeh 4 pm's add me to d buddy list & ye u shud either like d post or comment or else NO PM's ...

Kriyansh-love : https://www.india-forums.com/member_profile.asp?PF=684679


& yea guyz i had asked all of u 2 suggest me a romantic song rite ? well dat update number will be around after d next 2/3 updates :D thx 4 d help guyz :D
Edited by Kriyansh-love - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hahaaa ...
sab ek doosre ki pic le rhe hey ...
or scoh rhe hey ki kisi ko pta nahi chla ...
or bichara swayam hamesha phas jata hey ...
thanks for pm ...
great work keep it up...
is baar to banta hey ... hard work jo kiya lambi update dene k liye ...
kya baat kya baat kya baat

by the way first one
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow...kya update tha yaar...
Seriously so beautiful...
Their chase n all was mindblowing...
N miss laila kaha se dhundi sai tha... Haha swayam ki gf shit...
Awesum...
1 qts swaron ab tak couple he ya nahi? Actually cnt remembr so m asking...
Thnkz fr d pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing update teju.
It was loving one.
Its superb.
Swaron were cute.
Ms Lila 😆🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Thanks for pm.
precap is so interesting.
update soon.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: namratajadhav

Wow...kya update tha yaar...
Seriously so beautiful...
Their chase n all was mindblowing...
N miss laila kaha se dhundi sai tha... Haha swayam ki gf shit...
Awesum...
1 qts swaron ab tak couple he ya nahi? Actually cnt remembr so m asking...
Thnkz fr d pm...

nahi nahi itni jaldi couple banaduji to maza kahan se ayega ? unke couple ban ne mai abhi bhi tym hai :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update...gosh couldnt stop laughing...miss laila 🤣 🤣 ...eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
all da tym i was lyk dis 🤣
n miss laila...hahaha🤣 bechara swayam...hahahaha 🤣 🤣
teju dis tym u rockk it man
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Posted: 13 years ago
hahahah awesome update...loved it very much
full of masti and miss laila...really she is too hot
poor swayam
loved the update
waiting eagerly for next part
continue soon

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