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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Kriyanshlover

Main phir bhi tere piche juttis and le kar peche bhaagne wali hoon jaane se phele infrom nahi kar sakti?

sorry yaar acctually mai inform karne hi wali thi par wo kya hua na ki hum 2din pehele hi nikal gaye & i had thought of informing a day b4 going par suddenly mumms ne mujhe uta diya aur bolne lagi ke v r leaving , to mai kaise inform karthi ???
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shaffy_arsha

its ok teju...n ab pls weekend par hi updates krna tb tk mere xams b finish ho jayge 😉 😃...n ha mjhe na big update chahiye

mai itna baada update dungi ki tum bologi ki plz plzzz ab yeh update katam ho gaye . plzzz :P :D & yea all d very best 4 ur xamz :D
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Kriyansh-love

mai itna baada update dungi ki tum bologi ki plz plzzz ab yeh update katam ho gaye . plzzz :P :D & yea all d very best 4 ur xamz :D


chill we wont say that aftr ol u hv to make out for not giving updates for so long
n its okay we understand that u wont b able 2 update wen u r @ ur nanai's place or wen stuck in examz
so we wont mind that
as soon as u update plz send me pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
welcum bck teju. Ab intne pyaar se sorry bolrahi hai toh tujhe maaf toh karna padega aakir mein hamari ache dost jo hai. Toh ab aagayi hai toh update bhi jaldi karle intezaar kar rahe hai tera
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Posted: 13 years ago
gud 2 c u back teju,take ur time
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shenz_kriyaansh


chill we wont say that aftr ol u hv to make out for not giving updates for so long
n its okay we understand that u wont b able 2 update wen u r @ ur nanai's place or wen stuck in examz
so we wont mind that
as soon as u update plz send me pm

sure love i will :D & ill surly make it up 4 u ppl :D
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anniemathias

welcum bck teju. Ab intne pyaar se sorry bolrahi hai toh tujhe maaf toh karna padega aakir mein hamari ache dost jo hai. Toh ab aagayi hai toh update bhi jaldi karle intezaar kar rahe hai tera

pakka is saturday ya sunday ko kar dungi ya fir dono hi din :P :D ;)
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Posted: 13 years ago

heya guyz !!!! kaise ho ? im bak vt d update ( as promised ) guyz dis is really a very very short update sorry abt dat par kal pakka badi update dungi , 4 sure , plz mujhe flooters, sneekers , etc etc etc se mat marna , hehehe i knw u might be wondering ki floters aur sneekers se kyun maroge wo acctually " mujhe joote , chapal se mat maarna " wala line bahut purana hogaya hai na issiliye flooters aur sneekers 😛😛😛 achha teek hai ab update pado 😃


GUYS !!!!! * screaming * ek aur baath b4 u read d update , yeh part sirf aur sirf nammy arsha-rocks aur deethu abssd/deetha keliye dedicated hai ... 😃⭐️😃

REASON

1] i cud nt wish deethu on her b'day 😭 so im just trying to make it up 4 u , deethu dis 1 is 4 u , love u 😃 * hugs * 🤗
2] i love u tooo nammy , aaj kal hum bahut hi zayaad close hogaye hai so yeh tere liye meri jaan 😃 * hugs * 🤗

RECAP :

R: mera matlab unse tha HUMSE NAHI [ vt a mischivious smile playng on his face ]
K: * widened her eyes 2 d fullest gulped & den said * matlab ? [ vry sweetly ]
R: * was going mad @ dis reaction of her , he laughed inside his heart @ her babyish act *
R: matlab mujhe bhi wahi lagtha hai jo tumhe laga & gives hr a approving smile
K: sacchi ??? ( wide smile )
R: mucchi ( wide smile as well )


PART 7


R: umm kya tumhe class jana hai ?
K: ji ?
R: nahi , kyun ki abhi humare classes to nahi hai auragar tumhe college dekhna hai to , i can help u ( in mind ) *plz haan boldo , i want 2 spend more tym vt u*
K: arey aap wo sab chodiye na ( pulls rey's hand & makes him sit on a chair )
aap mujhe SWAYAM aur SHARON ke baare mai bataye na ( with a big smile )
R: ( he too smiled lyk a fool bt den made an fake angry face *lill pouting* )
K: kya hua ? bataye na ...
R: gave her an angry look ...
K: arey aap jussa kyun hogaye ? *feared face *
Rey gave her a tougher look & stood up to leave bt Kriya held his hand & Rey turned bak to c hr
K: maine kuch jalat kehdiya kya ??? im sorry rey * holding ears *


PRECAP : d reason d rey's angrerness 😉

sorry pata hai bahut hi chota update hai na 😭




CHECK THE NEXT POST PLZ 😉😆😉

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Edited by Kriyansh-love - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

NOT DIS POST D NEXT ONE 😃😆😃 😛😉😛

Edited by Kriyansh-love - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

hehehehe kya socha tha ?????? kya tum logon ko sach mai laga ki mai itna CHOTA UPDATE DUNGI ????? hahahahahaha , chalo neeche jo likha hai wo pado 😃

RECAP :

Rey gave her a tougher look & stood up to leave bt Kriya held his hand & Rey turned bak to c hr
K: maine kuch jalat kehdiya kya ??? im sorry rey * holding ears *

Rey went to her dremland , adoring her & her beutiful way of telling sorry 😉 bt came bak to sence wen she stared shaking his hand ( left )
he saw her , her beautiful big round brown eyes den wer she had held him * just few inches below his elbow * & looked bak @ her & kept on looking 😃😍

she stood there looking @ him & wondering wat he was doing until she realised her hold on him 😛 she left his hand @ an instance which brought him bak to d real world

K: aap gussa ho mujhe ?
Rey rememberd dat he was supposed 2 be angry on her so he gave her an angry look
K: REY !!! kya hai ? aap mujse jussa kyun ho ? kuch to bataye !!! tabse pooch rahi hun * irritated face *
R: kya kaha ? fir se kaho ...
K: kya kaha ? yahi ki kya aap mujse jussa ho ?
R: nahi usse pehele ...
K: ummm , kya kaha tha ? *thought 4 few seconds & replyed * REY !!!
R: exactly !!! aaj se mujhe REY hi bhulana na ki AAP AAP AAP , samji ?
K: oh tho aap issliye gussa the ?
Rey gav her d same angry wala look again
K: ab maine kya kiya jo aap firse
R: dekha , fir se aap ?
K: accha accha teek hai mai aap ko , mera matlab tumhe , tumhe
AAP karke nahi bulaungi , teek hai ?
Rey smiled wide lyk a joker 😃
K: ab yeh joker ki tarah hasna band karo aur baito ...
rey stoped smiling & sat , kriya to sat bt b4 rey cud utter a word kriya said

K: ab bataye
R: kya bataun ?
K: budhu * hitting playfully on his head * SWAYAM aur SHARON ki love story
R: kya ? love story ?
K: kyun nahi hai * baby face *
R: well abhi tak tho nahi , par shayad jald hi hojayega
K: wow !!!sachi ?
R: haan may be , par tum kyun itni interested ho ?
K: bas aise hi , acha teek hai ruko mai cofee leke aathi hun .
R: par kriya ...
K: roko na , abhi aathi hun * she left b4 he uttered anyother word
R: pagal hai bilkul * smiles *
just den he gets a caal 4m vicky ,

R: haan vicky , bol .
V: kya haan vicky , bol ? saale tu hai kahan par ?
R: arey badak kyu raha hai ? bolna kya hua ?
V: saale bhulgaya kya , aaj rehersals nahi karni kya ?
R: arey haan , mai to bhulhi gaya ...
V: teek hai ab to aaja mere bhai .
R: accha to ruk mai aata hun bas 10- 15 min lagega
V: teek hai .

rey saw kriya who was still waiting 4 their coffees to come , he stood up & went near her , their coffees wer served 2 kriya she took both d hot coffes in each hand & turned . . rey was just standing behind her & was abt to say sumthing bt suddenly

R: aaa !!!!!! mumma !!! papaa !!!!!!! aaa !!!!!! KRIYA !!!!!!!! * shaking his hands up & down * 😆
uff uff ufff aaa ufff ufff ufff

Kriya spiled d HOT HOT COFFEE on rey's hand (right ) 😲 as she suddenly saw him right behind him & lost her grip on d coffee mug which she held in her LEFT hand . 😛

Kriya opened her eyes as WIDE as she cud & also her mouth .
😛😃😛

R: kriya !!! kya kar rahi ho ? plz mujhe ek tissue to do * almost lyk a crying baby * mera haat jal raha hai ...
K: haan haan , yeh lo * she gives him a tissue * .
K: sorry , sorry , sorry rey , hay universe ji yeh maine kya kar diya ? aap aap ... ummm aap chaliye mere saath .
R: par kahan ? 😕
: aap chaliye na , plz .
she holds his other hand acctually wrist & drags him to d med section (medical section)

she turns on a tap takes rey's hand ( which was hurt ) & puts his hand *wer it was slightly burnt* under d cold water ( d back of his pam , i hope u all got it ) ... she takes his hand out after a min or 2 den makes him sit on a chair which was near by & she herself sat on a chair which was next 2 his , she took his hand in hers & very slowly & gentely wipes away d water & blows air @ d place wer he got hurt ... den she keeps his hand on her thigh & takes burnol ( anticeptic cream 4 burns ) 4m d medical kit & appls it on his hand ... & again blows air @ it ... 😳

K:bahut dard ho raha hai kya ? im so sorry , maine jaan bujke nahi kiya ... sorry & pouts like a small baby .
Rey was sooo busy looking @ her & her care 4 him dat he didnt reply 2 her & keept looking @ her ... 😍😳😍
K:aap kuch keh kyun nahi raheho ? kya aap apne papa ko meri shikaayat karoge ? dekhiye , im really very sorry , chaho tho kal ek chocolate ladungi , par aap plz papa ko kuch mat bataye 😔 * pouts with a fearing face *
R: kya kaha tumne ? PAPA !?!?!😲
K: 😲 wo wo , i mean uncle , nahi sir , sir .. haan sir ko mat batayega , plzzz kal pakka chocolate ladungi , promise * holding her throught lyk DANCE KI KASAM * 😃
R: *smiles* teekhai , kuch nahi bataunga ... PAPA ko 😃
K *smiles widely * sachi muchi ?
R *smiles wideer dan her * sachi muchi 😃

thats it 😃 sorry guyz itna accha update nahi tha na ? i knw bahut hi bura tha infact aaj tak ka sabse bura update tha , & i myself am nt happy with d update : ((((( * baby face *

so critisisum is most welcumed 😃


ok chalo ek din pehele hi update kar diya hai , ab jo jo bhi mujse gussa the aab gussa chod do aur haan kal ek surprise hai so soc the rehna ki SURPRISE KYA HAI 😃 aur haan ek aur baath kal MOHOBAT SADIYON KA surly will be updated aur yeh FF bhi 😃 hope u enjoyed


now look @ d next post which is in d next page 😛
with unconditional love
teju ( di ki shree devi )


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Edited by Kriyansh-love - 13 years ago

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