do jism ek jaan -LAST PART_ parts 3-15.

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Kiran

@ILuv-LoveStory

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#181

wowww..precap..can't waiting..Snake beating..hahahhaa..he deserve this!!!

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ASADsweetZOYA

@ASADsweetZOYA

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Posted: 13 years ago

#182

nice update

thnx 4 the pm dear

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Prerna

@prerna1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#183

hi dear just read this story
likes it very much
waiting for next part
plz continue soon

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Chhaya

@arhi-fan

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#184

Just loved the update it was awesome. Just kill this shyam.

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Isha

@gilmore

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#185

super update waiting for next part

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arooshi

@arooshee

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#186

will wait for Shyam to get beaten up continue soon jaldi

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kriti_atharv

@kriti_atharv

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#187

oh my cnt wait for syam to b beaten up..n thnx 4da pm

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dumas

@dumas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#188

awesome update loved it poor asr the guilty is eating him alive loved it thanks for the pm can't wait for snake to get beaten up loved it

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freezie

@freezie

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#189

you know what i just realized. i think this drama has chnaged me a lot. i was never a violent person, but seeing this one character being tortured, tormented, and abused is giving us a lot of pleasure 😳 i have noticed this in the comments as well. hehe... but.. remember... our main aim to is get arhi back together again into the rabba ve sequence. :) if that means making mince meat out of the kabab main haddi (the snake) then we shall. writing up the next part now.

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freezie

@freezie

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#190

oh guys. i needed another piece of advice. as i mentioned in the pms. i intend on getting another dance sequence soon. but for that i need a nice romantic song. the advices last time were amazing. and i took the song bahon kay darmiyan from their. the next song sequence is of course. like all dramas and bollywood movies, in the rain. after the next part being updated right after this. i need suggestions. ok. thanks in advance. 😃 wait for me to post the next part first before giving any suggestions though please. so i can just scroll down after part 13. sorry for the bother. but thanks.😊

Edited by freezie - 13 years ago