do jism ek jaan -LAST PART_ parts 3-15.

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continuation from the first three parts. but each part can also be read alone if there are time constraints.


part 3: page 1
part 4: page 2
part 5:page 4
Part 6: page 8
PART 7: PAGE 11 (DANCE IN DETAIL)
Part 8: page 14
part 9: page 18
part 10: page 21
part 11: page 26
part 12: page 29
Part 13: page 32

Part 14: Page 38

PART 15: LAST PART PAGE 41 (Dance included)




previous episode:
khushi was left in the rain bc of arnav. she bacme very very sick and needed body heat. arnav gave it to her. khushi was angry but then payal came and explained everything to her.

khushi: di main voh bas tayaar ko kar ati hoon. (let me just get ready). payal hands her the sari and tells her she is waiting down stairs for her.
arnav places the breakfest tray right beside khushi and turns around to leave.
khushi: arnav ji. voh ...hum... voh...hummay maaf kar digiyeh. hummay pata nahin tha. aur ap hamari madad kar rahay thay. (i am sorry, i didnt know you wanted to help me)
arnav: whatever khushi. tumhari adat hai. dosray ki baat bagair sunay howay faisla kar lay thi hoo. (its your habbit to make judgments without listening to anyone else)

khushi: hum ek baat kahain. yeh tho apnay bhi kiya hai. bagair meri baat sahi say sunay howay. humay doshi tehra diya. (you did the same. without listning to what i had to say, you blamed me for the happening with di) a tear started to flow down khushis cheek

arnv turned around and saw her eyes. his heart told him that she wasnt lying. but his head told him something else. his ears heard her say to shyam that he should leave his wife. but his heart was telling him that khushi could never do such a thing. he was too confused as to what to believe and what not to. he rmemberd what his di told him after she came back from the accident. whenever there is a debate between mind and heart, always listen to your heart. before he could say aything to khushi she had left to go and get ready.

when she came out. arnav was stunned. when ever he saw her in a sari. the blood in his body ran ten times faster. he took a gulp. turned around and held his hand over his heart. dhak dhak... dhak dhak... he couldnt contrl his heart anymore. but he convinced himself that he had to control his emotions. he only married her bc she was the reason his di was about to be unhappy. he turned back and went to go and get ready himself. when he came out. khushi was ready and waiting for him. she seemed a bit weak. maybe it was the after affects of the fever. as she stood up, she held head and her head started turning round and round. she was dizzy and about to fall. arnav quickly grabbed her before she would fall. khushis head was now against his chest. she could hear his heart beat. it was very very soothing for her. her heart was beating at the same rate, same tune as hers. she knew there was a connecttion between both the hearts. but what exactly. she didnt know.
arnav: i am telling payal and akash to go ahead. we are not going anywhere today
khushi: nahin arnav gi. hum theek hain. chalian. (im fine, lets go)
arnav: khushi. mainay keh diya, tho keh diya. got it. (i siad it so done.)

khushi goes and sits on the sofa. arnav tells akash and payal that khushi is still too weak to go. so they go ahead.

arnav opened up his laptop to get some work done. khushi turned on the tv. whatelse was there for her to do. she picked up the mug. as she took a sip. she immedialty spat it right out. it was arnav gis coffee. soo bitter.
khushi: karwi karwi coffee peethay hain. isi liye itna karwa bool thay hain. (he drinks such bitter stuff that he even speaks bitter)
arnav: excuse me?
khushi: kuch nahin. hey devi mayyan. yeh kya kar diya hum nay. ek hi sari thi aur voh bhi gnadi ho gae. ap kya karain. (i only had one sari left, that too which jiji gave me, now what do i do)

she rmemberd that anjali ji had also sent a box for her in arnav jis suit case.
khushi: voh arnav gi,
arnav: hmm
khushi: meri sari gandi hogae hai. anajali ji nay go gift diya tha, voh kahan hai?
arnav: rolls his eyes. its on the dressing table over there.

khushi goes and grabs the box. she goes to the bathroom to go and change.
khushi: ahhh
arnav gets up and goes to the door.

arnav: khushi khusi ka howa. (what happened)
khushi... voh... voh... hum yeh nahin pehn sak thay hain. ( i cant wear this)

arnav: what the ... you scared the life out of me. argh... go bhi hai pehn kar agao. tumharay pas abhi aur koi bhi option nahin hai. (whatever it is, just wear it and come, you have no other option)

khushi: par par... (but but)

arnav goes and sits back down to do his work.
a light breeze hits his face. (soft heyyy heyyy music in the bg). he looks up. he sees khushi with her head bowed down. she was wearing a red silk, laced knee length night gown. she kept on tugging her collar to keep it closed. pulling the gown down to go past her knees.

arnav was in aww... he had never seen such a beautiful sight. he slowly gets up and starts walking towards her. he takes a step fwd. she takes a step back. he takes a step fwd. she takes a step back.

let me know if i should ctn??

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Posted: 13 years ago
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do continue! and omg what will he do
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Nice one! please update the next part asap and pm me 😊
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can u please give me the link for part 1 I cant find it!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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plzz contine fast

cant wait

you left it at a intense part
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good one. please update the next part
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awesome update loved it arnav is so confused poor khushi anjali gave a night gown loved it let see how long he will stay away thank you so much for the translation loved the update
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thanks all for liking this. as per your request part 4.

ab thak (until now)
khushi had gotten a fever from the rain. arnav saved her by giving his body heat. payal told khushi everything. khushi and arnav at still at the hotel bc khushi was feeling weak. khushi has no suit case. as it was lost. anjali put a gift in arnavs bag for her. it was a night gown. khushi just wore it and arnav is in aww...


dhak dhak... dhak dhak... khushi could see him coming fwd. she would take a step back. she didnt know how to react. his eyes were those of a lion. coming into his prey. last time she saw those eyes was on diwali. she looked here and there. but couldnt escape. truthfully speaking. she didnt want to escape. she knew he had a right over her. and she had given him this right when she gave him her heart.
arnav only looked at her. those eyes, those lips, that figure. he was man in love. he couldnt suppress his love anymore. this time, there were no barriers seperating them.

khushi was now against the wall. he slowly closed the distance between them. dhak dhak dhak dhak... dhak dhak... his eyes were focused. his aim was clear. he put his hand against the wall. khushi put her hands down against her sides.
khushi: aaa...gulp...sigh... aaarrrnaavv giii...
arnav: shhh... he put his finger on her pink lips. put his thumb and middle finger under her chin and pointed her chin upwards. looked up to her face. for a second his eyes looked at the mirror beside her. he could see a reflection of someone at the window. he could recognise that shadow anywhere. it was him. the creep. he tilted fwd to khushis ear and whispered. voh yahan thak bhi pohonch gaya hai. hammay khirki say daikh raha hai. parda hai tho theek say andar nahin daikh sak tha. (he has even reached here. he is looking at us through the window. the curtains are not allowig him to properly see us.)
arnav tilted his head towards her neck. looked up... and with a smirk... asked her..
may i? ...
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khushi took a deep deep breath. and with a light smile nodded. arnav seemed satisfied. his smirk grew in a smile. he knew she would never say no to him. with that he leaned more towards her. pushed his body against hers. slowly slided his lips from the top of her neck to the bottom. cherishing every second. khushi gulped. her heart was no longer under her control. she couldnt control it. and now she didnt want to either. she ran her hands from the bottom of his back to the top. holding him tighter. feeling this arnav started to plant soft kisses long her neck. he let go of her chin. and moved to the other side of the neck while giving the warm wind along the front of her neck with his breath. he slid his lips along the other side as well. later kissing each part of it softly. khushi could not take it anymore. she took a deep breath and pushed him away. arnav enjoyed seeing the effect he had on her. if only reassured him that she did deeply deeply care for him. otherwise she would never react like this. she tried to walk away. but he grabbed her hand. turned around and walked towards her from the back. raised his other hand and moved her hair to one side. giving another kiss on her neck. khushi took a deep breath in. tilted her head to the side. arnav wrapped both of this hands around her and opened the dori for her robe. he raised his hands and slowly slid the outside robe off. she now had only the deep v-neck gown on now. he let the robe fall on the ground. picked her up. he wrapped her hands around his neck and she became lost in his eyes. he became lost in hers. he slowly made his way to the bedroom. and gently placed his lady love on the bed. as he was about to lay on top of her, he turned his head around. then looked at khushi straight into her eyes. and smiled.
arnav: khushi... voh ja chuka hai. (he has left).
but she didnt care. she was too lost into his eyes.
some one started knocking on the door. arnav got up and went back outside. it was anjali di and his jijaji. they came as soon as they heard that khushi was sick. they had also packed a few more clothes for her. payal had told them about the suitcase incident. all that arnav could see on shyams face was the anger, hatred, frustration on shyams face. it gave him a lot of pleasure. he asked them to come in. took the bag from his di and said he will call khushi. they went and sat down on the sofas. as he wlaked to the room to call khushi. he saw that the red robe that he had taken off was on the ground. he quickly picked it up. and seemed a bit embaresed because of anjali. anjali noticed this. and smiled.
anjali: i hope humnay tumhay disturb tho nahin kiya chotte. (i hop we didnt disturb you.) she laughed. arnav quickly went into the room. told khushi that di and jijaji are over and that they brought you clothes. she replied : ill change then come out.
arnav agreed and started cleaning up his lap top and files. khushi cleared her throat.
khushi: arnav ji. ap please bahar jaingay. (will you please go out side).
arnav: yeah yeah of course. sorry. he was a bit confused. he wanted to finish was he started, but knew he couldnt. he also didnt understand if khushi loved him, especially after what just happned. the way that she reacted. or did she love shyam.
he went out side. after a couple of mins. khushi came outside. she didnt notice that her sindoor was a bit smughed. anjali gave her a hug and laughed.
anjali: khushi ji. voh apka sindor thora sa phel gaya hai. hehehe... ja kar theek kar lain. (your sindor is a bit rubbed... go and fix it.).
shyams face was red with anger. arnav felt satisfed with shaym's feeling hurt. arnav now knew. the only way to get back at shyam was to make khushi completely his. now he would do anything he had to... anything... to make her his and his only.

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Edited by freezie - 13 years ago
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absolutely lovd it...pm wen u continue
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plzzz contine fast

cant wait

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