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gujuprincez08

@gujuprincez08

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1011

Hey, I just read your FF and I have to say it is very interesting! It is well written and I really love the Arnav in this one! At this point I am at the edge of my seat trying to figure out what is going on with Karan and Shyam!!! Please continue soon! Can't wait to read more!!!!!!

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Pooja Manhotra

@Dalilangel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1012

too good yaar update soon please

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SedonaScarlet

@SedonaScarlet

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#1013

Loved it!

Shyam is SUCH an ass-.-

Thanks for the PM :)

Do continue soon! :D

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lovespell

@lovespell

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#1014

That was so awesome. I literally wait for your update every other day. I read your every update 4 -5 times to get enough of them. But still can't. You have covered a lot of aspects today. Where should I start??😕. I will start from the start.

Finally kushi gave into her feelings. The intimate moments they shared were very intense. I am so happy and am on cloud 9. Hope that stays.😛

Soup choking episode is very hilarious and kushi's thoughts when arnav was hitting her back hard were very funny😉. I loved her statement 'Broth Einstein'. That was classic and also arnav's expression.

Shyam - drug dealer. Really?? So isn't he a lawyer?? Also arnav started getting the doubt on him. Arnav is very smart and sensible and mature in this FF.

What is with karan's mystery? Can't wait for it to unfold. So are we getting any girl for the poor soul karan😭.

Kushi's dad undercover cop. That is so cool.

OOOhhh! They are going on a honeymoon trip for a week. I am so dead now. Kushi complaining about her bikini is hilarious.

You are a great story teller who can keep readers like us glued all the time. Keep up the good work in fact fantastic work. I am so waiting for your next update👏👏

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meghnas

@meghnas

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#1015

fabulous update...yayyy they are going for honeymoon :D :D
the suspense is awesome! love the way you keep building the mystery n unfold tiny bits :)

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avantika_2012

@avantika_2012

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#1016

Gosh! Glad you updated!

It was Amazing as always. Wonder what's up with Shyam and Karan. I feel Shyam is threatening Karan or something.

Keep it up! :-)

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Spriha

@KaranShilpa:)

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#1017

Hi Pinki! :)

It took me a couple of hours-- i think i started reading early afternoon but finally I finished all twenty two chapters! And from what I read, I discovered what an intelligent and sensible writer you are! Absolutely loving all the dimensions this story has to it, from understanding and caring to mystery and heartbreaks, your characters, the love and romance and the sexual tension! :)

Can't wait to read more, pleasee let me know when you update next! Thanks a ton!

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fluffyktau

@fluffyktau

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#1018

just read your FF...I think it is a really good story...I like how you have portrayed the different characters...to be honest I prefer your creations than the ones in the show😊

just have a small query, why is anarv not investigating more...he obviously suspects shaam of something...is it because he loves his sister so much he doesnt want to rock the boat???
How comes anjali doesnt know anything...she is dumb in the show...is she here too??

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#1019

Pinki! It took me almost 3 hrs to complete this FF.. It was so wonderful that I couldn't take my eyes and my mind out of it! Though I know my manager was staring at my back since I haven't worked all this time. I'm not regretting on reading, anyways!

Woah man! Every gal's perfect husband! But he is perfect in fine tuning!

Initially I hoped Shyam is gonna be a good buy and is all in love in air with Anjali mode! But he's mysterious.. Is he having a crush on Kushi!!?? Who/What is he exactly?

Karan? What mess he is exactly in? Someone has warned him beforehand to not fall in love with her? Is he in connection with some gang for a long time??

And I should thanks Harshi, Bhavi and Rae for pointing me to read this FF! Special thanks girls!! When I meet you, I owe you a chocolate! Or may be a Burger!!

Hey Could you please PM me next time? Pretty and a Pinky please! please!!😉

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..-Niru-..

@..-Niru-..

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#1020

Hi Pinki,

I have read the entire FF. I seriously have no words to describe your FF.The plot in not like the conventional ones. Very unique. You said that this is inspired by a true incident right? Whoever that is, is very lucky!
The characters too, are very intriguing .Khushi being a modern, headstrong independent girl is such a nice contrast to the one in the serial .Karan's character too is such a nice addition to the story. His emotion, actions makes the reader gather sympathy as well as a little bit hatred for him. Khushi definitely made the right choice by marrying Arnav.
I love the way the story develops. Each scene being so different from other. I love Arnav's character. He quite understands the situation and sure knows how to make a girl comfortable. The intimate moments they share is described beautifully.

The humor in your story is also very quirky, not the usual slapstick. That makes the story lighter amidst the tense atmosphere of drug dealers and blackmailers.

The environment is also quite modern .It really brings out a very nice touch to the story.

I hope I made up for not commenting on each chapter .I'm so hooked to your FF.Love your writing style.

Coming to the latest update….I absolutely adore the way you wrote the intimate scene .Still recovering from that…..Shyam's mystery is making me more curious and restless …..Why would he consider Khushi as a threat? Drugs?

I feel bad for Karan but Any man who can't stand up and fight is no man at all…

I'm eagerly waiting for your next update …..And I guess that would be in another thread since this is coming to an end.

-Niru