IPKKND FF: Let's fall in love- Note Page 149 - Page 103

Hey Hi,

im loving the story as its going along and love the fact over the top that the characters both arnav and khushi are rational in there thinking and dont jump over issue rather sort it out with cool mind... i loved khushi in chapter 21 not reacting to the letter and not being judgmental rather thinking with kool mind possibilities and asking arnav straight and willing to listen to him.. i totally love this ff and its not only arnav and khusi getting comfortable with each other trusting emotionally and intimatley but the stroy also has the suspense factor which i love... and khusshi not terrible shying away when intimate with arnav and knowing and accepting her feelings is also a point i liked ..
all of all this is an awesome read which i thoroughly enjoy and wait for getting updated...

This is FAB piece of writing and I'm hooked to this FF! I read it all in one go!!!!! You HAVE to update ASAP! I have added you to my buddy list. CAn I please get a PM When you do update?

i love the updates of yours- the story moves, there are other characters that do a lot more than fill space YET you never miss that one moment of Arna and Khushi which is soo heart warming!!

loved it!!! and i am falling deeper in love with this FF

wonderful ff!! soo different..jus completed reading al the parts in one go.. couldnt wait to read wat happens next! loved it to bits.. fab writin 👏Is shyam the one doin al these?😲 love the way u portray the characters..arnav -affectionate,passionate and protective - toatally amazin hw u write abt it! in short awsum choice of words & superb ff! 😆plzzz pm wen u update!!

I love your FF! The Arnav you penned is such a sweetheart. I like him better than the real one. And Khushi is so different but yet similar to the character on screen. Love her independence! I'm excited to see what happens next and seriously Khushi, you're worried about bikinis? smh

wow!! honeymoon huh?? gud going 😉

Originally posted by: asdfgh456

<font face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">"Khushi sweetie, it's our honeymoon. Technically, you don't need to wear anything"
LOL loved that line!
The more I read the more I love this FF and your writing!
I can't wait for the next two arnav/khushi chapters and her realising Arnav's value 😊 i know there won't be an update for a few days (unless you want to prove me wrong 😉...) but i'll still come back to check and probably re-read haha.

If you are still reading since this is quite a long comment :p, have you written any other FFs? if you have I would love to read them!

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Hi dear! This is actually my first FF :)

Originally posted by: AngelTeen

Update na, please! :D

Tomorrow night???
I've just been sick like a dog for the past few days so been laptop deprived lol 🤢