MG SS(new) : MERI JAAN updated EPOLIUGE pg 35

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HII FRIENDS. I AM HERE WITH NEW SS. IT CONSISTS OF ONLY 3 OR 4 PARTS. I AM POSTING PART 1. SO TELL ME HOW IS IT. HOPE U ALL LIKED IT. 😊



PART 1:


Geet is stting on the couch her head rested on his chest. His one hand is around her waist n other hand is carassing her hair. His family members are silently watching them. He is staring at his family members mom, dad, daadi n his sister pooja. He is asking them to convince her.

Geet beta u dont worry. He will come soon told mom.

Nahi maa he wont go anywhere told geet stubbornly.

Geet plzz dear, I have an important meeting. I promise I will come in 1 week told that guy.

Geet got up from the couch n shouted MAINE KAHA NA NAHI THO NAHI. MAAN SUNO AAP KAHI NAHI JAAYENGE saying so she left to their room crying bitterly.


They all sighed not able to convince their stubborn bahu. She is Mrs. geet maan singh khurana. She is an architect working in KC as an head architect. For past 2 months she is not going for office as per doctor's suggession. Now she is 8th month pregnant. Maan n geet have studies in the same college n they fell in love. Geet is a middle class girl, full of life, stubborn as well as very sweet. Maan n geet got married 2 years back with the blessings of the elders. Geet's parents stay in hoshiyarpur. Every year maan n geet go to hoshiyarpur n stay there for 1 week or two n spend with her parents. When doctor confirmed that she is expecting all the family members were very careful. They didnt allow her to do any work, they said not to go to office even. But geet convinced that she will take care of herself. They all agreed.

Maan was more protective, he didnt allow her to move in the office. He sifted her cabin in his own. If she needs any files or blueprints maan use to bring or tell someone to bring it. It became easy for maan to care of her n the office romance they enjoyed a lot. But sometimes her pregnancy harmones n mood swings getting on his nerves but he can do anything for his jaan, n his baby.


5 months passed now geet had a little baby bump, n she became weak due to work. So family members told her not to go to office n maan too started working from office. Only if any important meeting is there he would attend n come early.

One day ay mid night around 2 am geet got up saw maan sleeping peacefully holding her waist. They both r bare n geet covered herself with blanket n took maan's shirt n wore it.

Maan called geet.

No response.

Maan called geet again.

No resonce.

Maaan shouted geet in his ear.

Immediately maan got up n looked at geet who is smiling at him seeing his face.

Geet what happened? Asked maan worriedly.

But geet is still laughing.

Why u r laughing ? Asked maan.

Maan u look soo funny. Once see ur face when u got up. Awww like a little boy told geet controlling her laugh.

Geeet shouted maan angrily.

Acha baba sorry told geet.

But maan wanted to tease her so he turned other side.

Geet held her ears n told sorry maan.

But maan didnt care.

Seeing him not responding tears formed in her eyes. Geet hugged maan from back n told sorry maan. Her voice chocked. His bare back is getting wet due to her tears.

Maan literally banged his head. Oh god her mood swngs r really horrible. Maan kya jaroorat thi geet ko tang karne ki. Now see what happened thought maan.

Immediately he turned to her n hugged her n told sorry shona, I was joking.

Nahi maan I am really sorry. Mujhe aisa nahi karna chahiye tha told geet in between her sobs.

Maan was rubbing her back to come down.

Shhh shona dont cry. Dekho baby will feel bad if u cry.

Really?? aked geet innocently.

Maan thought awww she is damn cute in that pout.

Ha shona.

Thik hain I wont cry.

Waise why u r awake in this hour asked maan.

wo.. wo.. mujhe gol gappe khana hain told geet.

Gol gappe at this hour?? no way geet told maan firmly.

Plzz maan that road side gol gappe. Ummm yummy told geet licking her lip.

Road side, no way geet. Chup chap so jao told maan.

Geet pouted n told u dont love me. I know n was about to cry.


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Maan slammed his lips on hers n started kissed agressively. Geet too started responding in the same passion. Maan entered her mouch n his hands went under her shirt feeling her c***s. He pinched the bud n geet closed her eyes feeling so much pleasure n moaned maaan.


Maan started unbuttoning her shirt buttons. He removed her shirt now both r bare. Maan is exploring her each n every part but didnt broke the kiss. He entered her mouth n exploring her mouth with his tongue. Geet pulled him more close n her c***** r glued to his chest. Finally they broke the hug n aan made her lay on bed n he was on top of her.


He starting kissing her shoulder, leaving love bites there. Then he kissed her throat n then her neck. Maan placed her head in between her c***** listening her uneven heart beat.

Maan told dare u speak anything like that geet, I love u more than anyone in my life.

I am sorry maan told geet cutely.

Maan saw her innocent n baby face n smiled at her.

But u will get punishment for this told maan.

Geet made a sad face n asked what u want?

U told maan.

I am all urs. Do what ever u want told geet looking into his eyes.

Maan can see the passion, unconditional love n care for him.

R u sure shona? Baby is fine? Asked maan.

I am perfectly fine maan told geet.

Acha ?? maan whispered in her ears huskily.

Maaan plzz love me told geet.


Maan bit her ear lobe n he dipped his face in her hair inhaling her scent.

Geet started kissing his chest. Geet couldnt control n rolled now geet is on top of maan. She is kissing his shoulder, chest n leaving love bites.

Maan moaned geeet.

She is exploring each n every of him. Maan is enjoying her sweet torture. The passion is incerasing each passing minute. Their legs were entwirled. Geet bited his shoulder now maan lost all his control n he rolled on top of her.

U devil...

geet giggled. Maan was very careful n gentle.

He kissed on of her c**** n started licking it. Geet is feeling ticklish n he pinched her n******. geet moaned n he did it for the other c**** too. Maan slowly moved down n kissed her stomach.

Maan plzz.


Thats it now maan entered her giving her more pleasure. Maan moved to her belly bottom n bite there. Geet is feeling both pain n pleaure. Now maan kissed her ******* . geet is all wet now. He could feel her wetness. Geet dig her nails in his back to control herself.

Maan love me.

Maan placed his ******** on hers giving her pleasure. They both r moving in rhythm. They made love for a long time. When they hit climax both were panting heavily n sweating. Geet is all flushed maan turned to her n asked

geet r u ok? Sorry jaan if I have hurted u.

no maan u can never hurt me. They both cuddled closer n maan closed his eyes.

Maan mere gol gappe asked geet again.

Oh god thought maan.

U r tired now shona we will go tomorrow told maan.

Pakka ?

Pakka shona.

They both drifted to sleep.



Next day as promised geet ate gol gappe (road side). Maan gave many instruction to the gol gappe wala, to clean the plate n clean his hands with dettol n all. Finally geet ate her gol gappe.


Next one month was smooth, maan worked from home. Their love making sessions n her cravings.

One day it is for ice cream, gol gappe, n all other spicy food. Some times maan get annoyed. But by seeing geet's pippy face he use to melt immediately. Now geet is 8 n half months pregnant. Doctor gave the delivery date after 15 days. One day got a call from office about important meeting about london project. He went to office n came back home late.


All r waiting for him in the hall.

Dad mujhe 1 week ke liye london jaana hain told maan.

London why maan asked dad.

wo.. ek important meting hain.

But last week only the deal is finalised right?

Yes dad. But they called for meeting again.

But beta.. geet??

maan looked at geet who is looking down her lap.

Maan went n sat beside her n told geet...

kuch nat kaho maan u r not going. Thats it.

She is feeling something bad is going to happen. She dont want maan to go anywhere that too when the date is very near.

Geet plzz shona listen to me once.

Geet rested her head on his chest feeling tired.

Plzz maan dont go anywhere told geet.

Maan hugged her n carassing her hair.

Geet beta u dont worry. He will come soon told mom.

Nahi maa he wont go anywhere told geet stubbornly.

Geet plzz dear, I have an important meeting. I promise I will come in 1 week told maan.

Geet got up from the couch n shouted MAINE KAHA NA NAHI THO NAHI. MAAN SUNO AAP KAHI NAHI JAAYENGE saying so she left to their room crying bitterly.


Precap: will maan go or not??

why geet feeling so restless.

Mom, pooja shouted: GEEET.


Hii friends here is the 1st part of the SS. Hope u all liked it. First time I tried something romantic to write. So tell me how is it? Plz plz all of u hit LIKE n do COMMENT.

GUYS IF U DIDNT LIKE IT THEN PLZZ TELL ME FRANKLY.

Other part is also ready. So by seeing ur response I will update the other part soon.


NOTE: plzz add 'maneetmaneet' for pms.

P.S.: PMS WILL BE SENT ON SATURDAY. I am busy so plzz bear with me.


Love

-jyothi.


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Posted: 13 years ago
#2
loved it...
awesome starting dear...
i think maan will go...something will happen to him may b...but dont want any miscarriage plz...
maan is very naughty...to stop cravings of geet kya kya karta hai...babaji...
thank u very much fr such an lovely ss...
waiting fr d nxt prt...
contunue soon plz...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome first part for new SS
cotinue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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gud start...
loved geet's cravings and maan fulfilling her wishes in a naughty way..
i hope maan won't go...


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow just amazing superb romantic ss..really loved it..
I hope maan wont go to london..and y pooja is screaming?omg kahi geet ke sath kuch galat tho...na na babaji..sochne mein bhi dar lag raha hai..
And plz plz plz update soon...hey jyothi plz update soon ya..at least 4 me..
Love u..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congoz on new ss...🥳

liked the start...umm...i think maan won't go ...well lets see

thnx for pm


continue soon

love rose😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice part...geet's carving😆...
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awesome start
thanks for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very interesting start...

waiting for next part...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very sweet dear...u know this brought back all those memories when Maan went for that union strike ting...how he arranged chaat for her t home...

lovely

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