Feelings/Aftermaths THE END PG 19! (arhi OS/SS)

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desisoaps05

@desisoaps05

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

This story made absolutely no frickin sense. It keeps jumping around from place to place without making it clear how we got there and who all these pronouns refer to. You have to INFER on who's thought process we are listening to now, and who is who, who said what, who did what, how did we get here. UGH MADE NO SENSE.

Sorry. Just how I feel...

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Bushra

@cmileyfreaky

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: desisoaps05
This story made absolutely no frickin sense. It keeps jumping around from place to place without making it clear how we got there and who all these pronouns refer to. You have to INFER on who's thought process we are listening to now, and who is who, who said what, who did what, how did we get here. UGH MADE NO SENSE.
Sorry. Just how I feel...

hey no, do't be sorry!
hahah i know, a lot of my friends read it and went whaaat?
i guess when i'm writing it, i dont like to be very specific
i leave lots of hints though
and for me, as a reader, i know i would like to be kept in the dark rather than the writer handing me everything on a silver platter :P
but i'm sorry you didn't like it
maybe next time i wont jump around so much?

and i know which part you're talking about
the i'm sorry khushi?
a few people could have been thinking that
it's upto you as a reader
and what i dont reveal in one chapter i reveal in the next
for me the person who said sorry was payal
it could as well be arnav for you
how you interpret it is totally upto you! :D

thank you for this! :)

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lollipop4u

@lollipop4u

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#73

AWESOME. please update the last part soon.

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zafi

@zafi

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#74

Fantastic update.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Loved it.

Continue soon. Thanks.😊

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anumber1

@anumber1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#75

AHHH! HE'S RAPING HER! HOW CAN YOU END IT LIKE THAT!!

Translation: Please update soon. Thanks. 😊

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LoLo

@LoLo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#76

Maybe it was the Hindi that threw me, but I don't think I understood any of this. I'm sorry the writing was very intense, but I don't get any of what happened. Sorry, but nice creativity.