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Faisa

@Faayey

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#81

Very eotional, beautifully written😭

I realy cant belive she jumped..well atleast that snake is jail pheww...

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_Janki_

@_Janki_

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#82

It was so emotional!
Loved it, its written so beautifully!!!

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Sadaf Rizwan

@saduf

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#83

though it was very sad but beautiful

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OmNaMaSteOm

@OmNaMaSteOm

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#84

i loved it

quite refreshing

as long as khushi & arnav or not separated & either are not dead i will keeping loving it

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haminasto

@haminasto

Alumni

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#85

that was an immense dose of angst n grief but the tiny ray of hope that still pertains is what bounds them...
this was just wonderful..

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#86

Heart wrenching! Loved every word!

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essess

@essess

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#87

oh please NO!

Its beautifully written, But HERE at least with ARSHI, I dont want sadness, I want Happiness in Life, even if it comes after a few upsets. Please dont write sad endings, I CRY!

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Chandra

@Roark

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#88

Very emotional - but a good one

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AnnieARS

@AnnieARS

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#89

All i can write now with clouded eyes is... I am crying!!

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DarkDove

@DarkDove

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#90

Oh my gosh!!

You know, my little sister is making brownies and I took some raw brownies liquid and started eating it 😆

No kidding, i can taste the chocolate, flower and raw egg too 😆 But it is sooo good...

But this OS was rocking yaar!!!

I hate shyam the loser -_-

Omg!!!! Him not trusting her after she even told the truth? This track is going on right now on the show and you wrote this waay before it! I think the CV's plagiarized that idea from your OS 🤣

Gaaahh!!! Shyam! Die man!!

Poor Khushi!!! Why the heck did she jumped?

And aaahh i could feel arnav's pain, khushi pain too!!

Loved what you showed us, skipping a year!!

AAahhh!!! Hope welled up in me when her thumb stroked his hand! he was hugging her!!

Lovely OS!!

LOVE YOU SISSY!