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Posted: 13 years ago
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Such an emotional OS! But there was a bit of hope at the end!!! Great job!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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niceee👏👏👏 its relly imotoinal
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
I was just reading this beautiful story and realized that you have marked it as 'complete' but want to urge you to please please consider adding more to this story.

In my opinion, this is a brilliant idea and can be taken further in terms of flashbacks for Khushi and Arnav as she slowly comes out of her coma due to his caring and communication and redemption.

I will also appreciate if I can be on your PM list. I just discovered your writing yesterday and must say I like your originality.

I am a voracious reader of romance with many many hours logged into reading various genres.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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beautifully written...it was very emotional...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome man! Why didn't you continue??
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
So sad but beautifully written!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was beautiful and very emotional😭😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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beautifully expressed..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh man. That was so sad. I loved the ending though-very hopeful :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh sweet torture very poetic the grief the realisation...nicely done

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