kriyansh and swaron FF Be My Valentine - Page 56

Originally posted by: perfectangel

gud job shivo keep it up main tab tak lik rahi ho its kinda sad 😛

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OK on page 83 now plz update now as want to read it now

Originally posted by: The007Shivani

OK on page 83 now plz update now as want to read it now

Originally posted by: The007Shivani

How much longer

part 19'''~~

R: kriya tumhare liye *with a calm voice*

K: rey rakdo abhi main busy ho

R: kriya hum date per hain

K: rey meri dost hain main isse 4 saal se nahi mili

Rey gets more angry and the interval comes rey rushes from the theater and shuts the door

R: aise kaise wo mujhai ignore kar sagti hain wo bi date per bahtar hota main date ke liye pooch ta nahi

Mean while ..

K: aacha vinti baad main vid chat karege abhi main bahar ho aur kisko manana bi hain

V: kisko ?

K: hain koi bohot special

V: oky tuja gud luck

K: vinti I don't need luck I have love bye *quickly cuts the call

Kriya rushes outside and finds rey no where she calls him twice but no answer

K: ab itna kusa koun karta hain kadoos ! kaise manaogi main

Ek ladki ho aise sab se hota hain kaha dunu rey ko !!

After thinking for 10 mins finally shes gets an idea

K: zaroor waha gai hogy !

She quickly takes a cab and rushes

She reaches the garden where they had therecandle light dinner but this time there was no table chair

Candle anything

Just rey sitting there and throwing pebbles in the water lonely !

Kriya goes and joins him

K: daikho rey I am sorry I got so excited when vinti called and she told….

R: kriya leave me I don't want to know what vinti said I want to be alone

Kriya gets sad and places her head on his shoulder

K: rey please maaf kardo I am really sorry I didn't mean it

R: kriya please mujhai aakela joor do

Kriya feels hurt and gets up she slowly goes taking out her heel sandals

Play the song http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X6hDtYAqYmI

Lyrics:

Na aaye ho, na aaoge
Na phone pe, bulaoge

She remember all the sweet momments she spend with rey

Na shaam ki, karaari chai
Labhon se yun, pilaoge

Shes crying badly and rey is feeling betrayed *I know it's a small thing and such a big fight but its just for a twist*

Na aaye ho, na aaoge
Na din dhale, sathaoge

She is remembering how rey use use to tease her

Sey neend mein jagaoge
Gaye tum gaye ho kyun

Rey is remembering how he use to wake kriya up and how she woke him up once

Gaye tum gaye ho kyun
Yeh raat baaki hain

Kriya and rey are feeling incomplete and are feeling that tonight's night is going

To be a long night

Gaye tum gaye ho kyun
Saath baaki hain..

Kriya is feeling bad for treating rey like that

*I am only doing till here*

Krya goes in the girls hostel and starts crying Sharon comes in the room

Sh: kriya kya howa ro kyu rahi ho ?

Kriya tell her everything

Sh:kria 1 min

She calls rey

Rey knew sharon would tell him something so he cuts the phone

Sharon quickly calls swayum

Sw: aagai meri yaad janemun

Sh: swayum something serious

Sw: krya howa ab ?

Sharon tell her everything as well

Sw: ek min main rey se baat karta ho

Rey needed someone with whom he can share his feeling and at that time swayum call

R: hello

Sw: rey tu theek hainn kaha hai tu ?

R: wahi garden jiske saath lake hain

Sw: aacha tuk main aarah ho

After 10 mins swayum reaches

Sw: rey rey kya howa

R: swayum kriya ne mujhai ignore kiya main use date pe legaya tha

Sw: I know rey laiken uski dost ki phone aai thi

R: tu

Sw: tujhai pata hai wo kitna roa rahi hai ?

R: roa rahi hai kyu

Sw: kyu ka matlab

R: isse tu khush hona chahiye ke iski dost aarahi

Sw:laiken wo nahi hai na

R: ab main kya karo *makes a puppy face

Sw: idea whispers in the ear

Rey smiles and quickly goes to the boys hotel

Sharon was here consoling kriya when she gets a call

Sh: hain swayum kya howa

Sw: Sharon tum ye karo….

Sh: theek hain gud idea

Sharon quickly keeps the call and tells kriya to manao rey by going to the hotel again

First kriya was like me again then she thinks ki rey kitni baar aya hain agar main dosri baar jaogi tu kya hoga

At 1 oclock she decides to go as she jumps in rey's room she sees him sleeping

She goes near him and kisses him

K: sorry rey I really did not mean to hurt u

Saying this kriya tear fel on rey cheek

Rey could see his princess crying and opened his eyes holded her her and pulled her

Kriya fell over him on the bed

R: baatcutter tum itna rao ho

K: hain rey wo sach mai, main aapko hurt nahi karna .

R: shh.. kriya please roa mat tum aise aachi nahi lagti

K: aapne mujhai maaf kardia

R: tumne mujhai kiya

K: aapki tu koi galti nahi thi*hugs tight*

rey wipes her tears and hugs her back and both sleep tgether

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precape: compitetion let se who wins and kriyansh and swaron meeting vinti 😉 see the twist and enjoy

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Thanks and amazing update good to work hard to get something like this and loved it

Originally posted by: Asha_ArSha

1st one to comment yay