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Chap 5:

Recap: Kriyansh in park, and Rey's card for Kriya.

7:00 a.m.

Kriya woke up in the morning. She didn't even hit the snooze button today. She woke up and took the card which she had kept next to her. The one which her secret Valentine had given ,and kept admiring it. "It has to be Rey. It is Rey!" she thought, looking at the familiar handwriting.

She got out of bed, took a shower and put on the dress which Rey had given her. It fit her perfectly and she did her hair, and put on some earrings and all.

She went to Rey's room and knocked on the door. Rey was still asleep. "Abhi koun hai yar?" he murmured. "Rey, Darvaza kholo. Open the door na!" Kria shouted from outside. When Rey heard Kria's voice, he jumped off from the bed and ran to open the door.

Rey: Sorry Kria. Mai so'.You..You look Beautiful.

Kria: (Looks at herself) Really?

Rey: Hun, tumhare universe ji ki kasam

Kria giggles. Rey smiles.

Rey: (Acting clueless) To kisne di yeh dress?

Kria: Wo main aapko kyun bataoon?

Rey: *thinks* Smart girl.

Kria: Kuch bola aapne?

Rey: Pehle stop calling me "Aap"

Kria: Kyun?

Rey: Aise hi. Mujhe accha lagega,

Kria: Then okay! J

Kria hesitates a little.

Kria: Shall we go out for a walk?

Rey: Sure (replies immediately)

Kria smiles.

Rey: I'll be down in a minute. But don't you have college today?

Kria: Nahi. Jaldi aao.

Rey: Okiess!

When Rey went inside the washroom, Kria kept her reply to Rey's question. It was a card she had sat up all night making.

In that she had written.

I would love to be your Valentine. Xoxo 'K.

She kept the card on the table and went down immediately.

Swaron were sitting on the couch and eating French fries.

Kria: Good morning, Swayam. Good morning Shar.

Swaron: Good morning.

Sharon: Kaha jaa rahe ho? All dressed up. It's only 8:30 now.

Kria: Main aur Rey walk pe jaa rahe hain.

Swaron turns towards her and towards each other a few times.

Sharon: Okay tum jaao.

Rey came down and waved to them. Kriyansh left.

In the park:

Rey: To why didn't you go to college today.

Kria: Aaj college nahi hai.

Rey: kyun?

Kria: Kyunki mai nahi jaa rahi hoon. *giggles*

Rey: hahaaha.

Kria: *looks at the shop* Rey, dekho. Lollipop.

Rey: Kahan?

Kria pulls rey and goes to the shop.

Kria: Can I have a huge heart shaped one please?

Shopkeeper: Yea sure.

Kria: *takes it* Thankyou. How much?

Shopkeeper: 4 euros.

Kria: *hands it over* Thankyou.

Shopkeeper: Have an amazing V'day.

Kria: Thanks. We will.

Rey: *puzzled*

Kria: kya hua?

Rey: Mere liye lollipop?

Kria: Aaj Valentine's day hai silly. Aaaj hum dono ise share karenge.

Rey grins.

They started sharing the lollipop.

While they were returning home,

Rey: Wo card tumne hi rakha na mere room mein.

Kria: *without thinking* Haan, aur koun rakhega.

Rey: Kya kaha tumne?

Kria: *realizes* Kuch nahi.

Kria: *hesitates* Rey, kya aap aaj College ke Valentine's Day Dance mein mere date banenge?

Rey: *Smirks* Ofcourse banoonga.

They went back home.

Swaron:

Sharon: Swayam, Will you be my valentine for the dance today?

Swayam: Ofcourse i will darling. Who else will my my valentine? :)

Sharon: I love you.

Swayam: I love you too <3

In the night:

Everyone's getting ready.

Kria puts on a really pretty knee length Red flowy dress. Her hair was curled and she had clipped it with her heart shaped clip and a simple loose French twist.

Sharon put on a Red dress as well but she put on a full length dress and straightened her hair and left it open.

Rey and Swayam put on their tuxedos. J

When they were ready to go,

They put on their corsages and boutonnires and looked splendid.

They drove to the college and went into the Gym coz the dance was going to be held there.

Lisa came with her date to kriyaansh and Swaron.

Lisa: Rey! Swayam! How are you both! You guys look amazing.

Rey: Thanks Lisa. I'm glad you remember us.

Swayam: Yea, Li. It's been a long time since we met.

Lisa: I know. Sharon and Kria keep talking about you. And Rey, I never forget best friends.

Rey: *grins*

Lisa: *introduces her date* Hey meet Jason. Jason, this is Kria, Rey, Sharon, Swayam.

Jason: Hey guys.

The four of them: Hey.

Lisa: *to Kria* Kria, we better get going now. Otherwise all of us will miss out the first dance.

Kria: Yea! I know.

They all to the dancing area.

A slow song plays. (Crazier by Taylor Swift)

Kria: This is my favourite song.

Rey: Oh great, May I have this dance?

Kria holds his hand and they start slow dancing. They danced like no one else was there. It was only the two of them. Rey looks into Kria's eyes.

Rey: Kria, I lo'

A voice: HEY REY!!!!!!!!!

They turn to see who it was.

Rey: Oh, hey Charlie.

Charlie: Hey guys! Rey, when did you come here?

Kria: Hey Charlie *Irritated* He came here two days back.

Charlie: Why didn't you give me a call?

Kria: We were busy.

Precap: Charlie pulls Rey from Kria and dances with him. Kria looks at Rey disappointed. Swaron shocked.

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Hey guys! I hope you like it.

And i'm sorry if its not that good. I have my exams going on. So after exams i'll type better :)

COmment and like.


Edited by taylenaloverx03 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow Sneha =D>
This Is So Soon Yu Updated And so Long ...Loved It Lyk Alwayz =D>
Super Amazin' FF ..And Yaar Frm Where This Charlie Came Between'em..? :'(

Bechari Kriya..Feelin' Pity Foh her...
Buh Still Waitin' To Read The Next Part Ov It :">
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow..nyc part...pr yeh charlie kahan se tapak gyi...kabab mai haddi she is...
Waitng fr nxt part...:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update...
n this charlie..ye kahan se aa gyi...waiting for d update..
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Posted: 13 years ago
WOW! Dis is osmee.<3
Luv it..gud goin!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Loved it to evry bit. Especially the spontaneity showed by both of them. Was so cute. Waiting for next part. Common make them confess quickly

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Posted: 13 years ago
that was really cute n romantic...awaiting d party scenes eagerly!

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