Ohh Gawdd...Anki ab main kya batau tujhe...am DEAD...r u actually waiting fr a comment or feedback...and wat do u mean by 'if u guys dont like d update...'
r u crazy...do u really think kisiko yeh update nai pasand aayi hogi...
Its awesome baby...super hawt...cute...romantic...intense...and at times funny too...
LOVE IT TO THE CORE...luvd every bit of it...
N LOVE U LOADS for this super hawt, n freaking awesome update...u knw I am kinda falling short of adjectives now...
And the dialogues...they just killed me...how on earth u managed to write something so wonderful and ao real at the same time, something shot, romantic and cute, innocent all together...
U knw wat mujhe itna tym kyun laga comment karne k liye...bcoz I was unable to express only...m happy...m excited...m getting emotional...honestly koi shabd nahi mere paas...
N now main kuch v bolu ya comment karu it will surely not justify those wonderfully written words n the effort u hav put in to give us all such a realistic picture of our very own n beloved ArSha...
Pata hai pehle to tera update dekhke main thodi der k liye pura numb ho gayi thi...i felt like crying n was wondering k kyun hum itna attached ho gaye kisike sath itna jyada k now it affects us like anything... bt the way u hav included dat NY thing actually brought a ray of hope to us'..m really wishing k it turns out to be reality *fingers crossed*
U knw I really took some tym to come out of the trance...sweetie u potrayed everything so well...ur writing is MEJIC in itself...
Nw coming to the dissection of the update...its really awesome rey...the first two paras r super hawt n sensuous ...I really like the way Kunwar teased Shakti by saying "And why do you think I would help??" each and every dialogue are so intense and deep...
Then I went gaga at the way u described the sweet talk betwn Kunwar and Shakti after they reached India and the kind of understanding potrayed...
U wer even awesome the way u potrayed the brotherly relation betwn Dharmesh and Kunwar...
main last teen din se IF aa rahi hoon yeh soch k dat today i will comment on ur update...par everytym wen i come here and go thru update again...i get senti...bt really get lost...dekh abhi tak m confused wid my feeelings...so i really dont knw if my words r making sense to u...par gusssa mat hona...kk ppllzzz...
i so wish k yehi sach ho...
LOVE Uā¤ļø LOVE Uā¤ļø LOVE Uā¤ļø
so sorry rey fr such a late reply...maybe i let u down...being a gang member...i shouldnt be so late...bt honestly dear i coudlnt control my feelings...once again sorry...
n yeh le ek badi si jhappiš¤ n gussa mat karna mere upar...
n btwn i hope tera aaj exam achcha gaya hoga...sorry main tuje pehle all the best nai boli...
N by the way THANKS fr such a wonderful update... Edited by sukanyaa - 13 years ago