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Posted: 13 years ago
nice updt
waiting to know what is bothering mayank
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
very very nice update

i told you!!!
there is something... wrong with mayank..
there is a suspense which is mayank hiding from everyone!!!!


very nice update..

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Posted: 13 years ago
Veryyy nice update dear
ummm actually i m worried by mayank behavior
what happened to him
i think he is tensed abt nups pregnancy
a new responsibility is bothering him-hope everything will b finesoon

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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update .
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Posted: 13 years ago
PART 10

MN house morning- kitchen

nupur yawning uncontrollably in front of the stove. Mayank came from behind her,hugged her and kissed her on the cheek. Nupur smiled lazily and leaned back against him.

"good morning. Tum itni jaldi kyun utgayi?"

"mujhe bhook lagi thi."

"main chai banao?" mayank saw her from side view, the glow on her cheek inspite of her yawn, the brightness in her eyes inspite of the sleepiness in them, "tum aaram se baithjao" he pushed her to the chair nearby and started making tea and toast. Nupur sat with her head resting on her hand and her hand on the counter staring at mayank with a sleepy smile.

"tum kal raat ke tho itni jaldi so gayi thi , abhi tak sleepy ho"

"kal raat ko?" and remembered that she was supposed to be angry with him. Getting up suddenly she pushed him away from the stove, pulling the sugar from his hands and put another extra spoon into the tea grumbling,

"isiliye tho! main bhi sochoon itna pyaar kahaan se ? Main naaraaz hoon tumse."

mayank stood back with half a smile on his face and attempted to place his hand on her shoulder, she pushed it off "sorry"

pretending to ignore him, she finished making tea and placed his cup on the counter . Picking up her own with the plate of toast , she walked and sat fuming near the table.

Mayank sat next to her and placed his hand forcibly on hers," nupur, really sorry."

"kiskeliye?" sarcastically

"kal tumhe daantne ke liye"

"bas?" sarcastic still

"aur kisliye?" he drank the tea and swallowed with difficulty.

She made a face like you never understand , sipped the tea and spit it out,"tumne kitne spoon shakkar dala tha?

"maine? Nupur, tumne hi tho..." and catching the look on her face," okay. Maine daala tha. Sorry. Ab yeh chodo main banadoonga phir se. Tum yeh toast khao tab ta.."

"koi zaroorat nahin hain. Main ab bhi gussa hoon" and drank the tea in one gulp.

mayank moved forwards , held her face in his hands and forced her to look at him

"im sorry nupur. Dil se . Mujhe tumpe itna chillana..."

"uske liye nahin. Matlab wo bhi hain par...tum kal bhi late aaye mayank. Pechle dino mein tum kitne busy hogaye ho. Subah ko dono jaldi jaldi college jaathe hain, phir jab main waapas aathi hoon tab tum apne project ka kaam mein hote ho. Aur jab tumhe thoda time hain tab gunjan ki shaadi ki shopping ke liye nikalthe hain.aisa lagtha hain ki maine tumse baat hi nahin ki hain" she said in one breath her eyes moist

"nupur, kya karoon . Mera project..."

"project tho pehle se bhi tha na mayank par aaj kal hi kyun tum late hojaathe ho? Mujhe tumse baat karni hain. Tumhaare saath rehna hain, tumhaare saath dance karna hain , khaana khaana hain, raat ko tumhaare hi baahon mein sona hain" she said half smingly


he sighed at her obviously missing him
,"nupur bachhe ke future ke baare mein nahin sochenge tho...main bas yeh sab quickly khatam karne ki koshish main hoon taaki main baby ke aane tak main ek aur project bhi khatam karsakhoo "

nupur placed her hand on his which was still on her cheek," itna kuch karne ki kya zaroorat hain mayank? hamare present ke baare mein socho"

"zaroorat hain nupur. Jab hamare responsibility badhnewaale hain tab hamein uskeliye pehle se tayyaar rehna hain"he said bluntly, removed his hand from her face and drank his tea.

Nupur looked at him with mixture of emotions on her face. His words, expressions all showed his seriousness towards his responsibilities but where was his happiness? Or was he not at all happy?

"mayank, main tumse kuch poochoon tho sach sach jawaab depaaoge?"


"main tumse jhoot nahin bholtha nupur"

"tum khush nahin ho? Bachhe ke baare mein?"

"yeh kaisa sawaal hain?"

"jawaab do"

"of course khush hoon"

"Tum pareshaan zyaada aur khush kam lag rahe ho " she asked him apprehension written large all over her face. He looked back at her frown on his face. She continued, " jabse maine bola hain tumhe tab se sirf ek baar tumne hamaare bachhe ke baare mein smile karke baat ki hain, wo first din bas. Uske baad tho doctor se milo, tablets lo, kaam karo, graduation karo bas yahin..."

"main khush hoon nupur , matlab main jaantha hoon ki mein dil se khush hoon par dimaakh mein itne saare thoughts hain ki main ...main bas busy hoon aur shayad thoda sa confused bhi. Matlab mujhe laga tha ki jab tum pregnanat banogi tho bohot changes hojaayega lekin tum tho pehle se bright aur beautiful dikh rahin ho bas" he smiled sheepishly

nupur blushed at his words but smiling at his confusion said ,"waise mujhe bhi aisa hi lagrahaan hain.thakaan ke elawa koi change hi nahi life mein"


"tumhe bhi?wo kaise ? Tumhaara tho baby ke saath connection hoga na. Net mein wohin likha tha" he said sincerely

"achha ? abhi tak yakeen nahin horahaan hain ki mere ander koi jaan hain mujhe tho koi connection nahin lagrahaan hain mayank" she replied back and held his hands closer," mayank, kya main achhi maa nahin banpaaongi " she voiced out a sudden concern

"cmon nupur dekho three months hi tho hue hain. Time lagtha hain in sab mein"

"aur main tumhe pooch rahin thi ki tum khush ho ya nahin!" totally unsettled by turn of the conversation,she got up suddenly and started walking towards the stairs fast muttering," main tumhe kyun sunaa rahin thi, mujhe hi pata nahin ki mere bachhe ke saath kya horahaa hoga ander, mujhe tho yeh bhi nahin pata ki kuch hain ander" and looked at her tummy one of her palms on her tummy and felt her head spin.

"nupur" mayank held her before she fell. She struggled to get free," may..chod.." and pushing him with all force went to the sink in the kitchen to throw up.

Mayank ran behind her helplessly ," aisi garam garam chai ppeogi tho yehin hoga"

she looked up in irritation ," main pregnant hoon" stressing on the word.

He stood back till she was done with all her work and then hugged her " sorry " nupur placed her head on his chest and smiled basking in each others warmth ,all things completely forgotten for the moment

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hi hope this was okay. thanks for the likes and replies


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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update
plss update sajan part also
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update. but confused over mayank's reaction
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome updt
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
very nice but ab main hi confused hoon ...at last hoo kiya raha hai ? 😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww i loved this update 😃...her mood swings as well as his changed behavior...im glad she talked it out with mayank

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