ArHi FF: Highway to hell-3, last Ch. pg 89

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purplekid

@purplekid

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#611

Loved the ending, Vidhya! You are a wonderful writer!

The fact that Nita died was sad, but you wrote it realistically.

Love how you tied up all the loose ends!

Please write a new one soon!

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desilover101

@desilover101

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Posted: 13 years ago

#612

well miss this story truely!! :(

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oh.petite.one

@oh.petite.one

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#613

brilliant end to a brilliant story.. hope you don't stop writing :)))

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twinkle662

@twinkle662

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#614

An extremely awesome ending to a fantastic FF!! I have followed ur FF from the beginning, even though i havent commented cause my tablet doesnt allow me to but now i found a way!, anyway, I have definitely enjoyed this FF and ur writings have been amazing!! U developed the characters very well and portrayed their emotions very nicely. Ur concept and story was very different from the typical stories which have perfect endings, ur FF was realistic! I'm going to miss this FF very much & im sure u are too!!!!

I look forward to more writings by you 'cause ur doing an awesome job :D

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ChocoBloc_12

@ChocoBloc_12

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#615

Wow!!! honestly really sad that this has finished... i mean it was such an amazing FF to read... i've followed it from the beginning, and have literally seen this family grow together,

Arnav and Khushi... have been amazing through this...been through so much crap but come out of it all happily :)

So sad to see that Nita died :'( ...but twins :)

Each update you just never ceased to amaze... you write so beautifully and at times absolutely hilariously...i've laughed so much whilst reading this...literally falling of my bed with your sense of humour and sarcasm in the updates :)

Hope you write some new material soon :)

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nareshSV

@nareshSV

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#616

that was an awesome end...

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Aishwarya

@malluangel

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#617

that was such a cute ending! realistic too with nita's end but still so sweet :)

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Deeksha

@-Dee-

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#618

I started reading the chapter and I looked for Nita - when Sheila jumped on to Mali and when Khushi and Arnav told Sheila to Mali jijji/di. And then you tell us that she's gone.

It was a very realistic chapter - acceptance and rueful content. So many emotions - happiness, sorrow and satisfaction.

It's been a beautiful journey somewhe hard and sad. I am going to miss this story. And I'm telling you once again if you ever pen down Mali's own story, count me in for a read.

Dee 😊

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•Jessie/Jessica•

@.Enchanted_Soul

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Posted: 13 years ago

#619

Such a cute ending. 😳

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-PM4mRonnie-

@-PM4mRonnie-

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#620

I am already feeling sad that its was d last chapter...nd nita is no more :((
bt life cannt b al happy, such a sweet ending!! D part i likd d most was arnav being ovr protectv over malli!