TH1: An Arranged Marriage(ArHi)LINK NEW THREAD Pg1

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

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Posted: 13 years ago

#771

The VM and update were both heartbreaking. Feel for Khushi so bad hope she can make his life miserable a little

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Chinchinchoo

@Prinsesse.Suvi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#772

Aw, poor Khushi. Great update!

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Jenna

@LondonChick

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Posted: 13 years ago

#773

Aww that was beautifully written. I love how you've managed to capture Khushi's pain so perfectly.

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PinkPari

@PinkPari

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#774

Wooh you updated!

This story sounds so interesting and has a lot of unanswered questions which I think will form the basis for the big events in the story to occur!

And take as long as you like sweetie! The more you develop the characters at the start of the story, the more room you leave for bombastic emotional revelations and all our full flung drama hehe 😆 This Arnav reminds me of the Arnav at the start of the story, so I know I'll enjoy his transition from being cruel to being loving!!

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Homairah

@daydreamerr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#775

Eeep!!
Fabulous update but omg i feel so so bad for Khushi poor poor girl :(
Buttt! Loving the ruthless ASR yay! I'm so glad you've kept him all hard faced and unrelenting. Seriously so excited for this office track now can't wait until she goes in. I think she'll surprise him by being like, almost better than him at all the work etc.. Hehe excitement! But thank you for updating and here is my trademark long comment to spur you to update another chapter ber soon!
Thank youuu! ;D

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smileyhug7679

@smileyhug7679

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Posted: 13 years ago

#776

Oh my god feeling so bad for Kushi none of it is her fault

Why is he behaving like a hooligan ...

Ugh

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ashu

@white.band

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Posted: 13 years ago

#777

i m gonna soon hit him wid a stick...gud update

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rkapoor1382

@rkapoor1382

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#778

i feel sooo bad for khushi...

arnie y u hate her soo much...

f hate is like this socho wen he falls in love thn wat will happen????

continue sooni

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Malvika18

@Malvika18

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#779

Hey, that was brilliant..

Loved the quote in the beginning!.

Continue soon..😃

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Shobhana

@-Shobhu21-

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#780

This was amazing K !!
And just to tell you loved the trailer tooo !! It was seriously great man !! And it just made me realise all writers are probbaly great at making VMs tooo !! And I loved the track being played behind !! it just suts them sooo much !!
And I dont mind the pace at all !! Im perfect with it so Im gonna read it all !!

And as for the update I loved it too !!
Though Im just getting curious at why they both got married in such a hurry ?? Could you give us a flashback pl ??( if possible) And I just loved how apprehensive Khushi was...
Arnav I guessed wouldnt be sleeping, but there's something more thats taunting him other than Khushi I guess !! And the way he just made her subdue to his commands its typical of them !!
Loved it🤗