13A Nottingham Place- A Raj Naina fic updated ch11

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Raheela

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Hey

amazingly written
lovely lines
Tanhayion se nahin hum mehfil se darte hain
duniya se nahin hum khud se darte hain
yun to bahut kuchh khoya hai humne
na jaane kyun tumhe khone se darte hain'
13A Nottingham Place sound like hostel ruled but strick warden
love the story really intersting n mrs shikawat is strict 😒
thanks 4 pm

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arwa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Hey Riya gr8 start

hmmm it sounds very interesting seeing that she is stuck with a bunch of snobs and it wouldn't really be easy living with them.

It does sound very sad for Naina for sure

Now let's see how the children are and whether they are arrogant or friendly.

Hope to see the next update soon

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@Discovery

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Hey riya...🤗
Awesome start...vry fresh concept indeed...👍🏼

luved it...though a bit sad 4 naina bt i knw she'll manage to impress everyone...
dis one's d 3rd ff dat m reading on RN...n i mst admit u all r gr8 writers...👏

update soon...

Edited by Mrsimisam - 13 years ago

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lallulal2010

@lallulal2010

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

plz add me to ur pm list and continue soon...

will love to see how the story unfolds...

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neha10.for.u

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

hey Riya,

Thanks for another RN ff. Its gud to see that ppl are still enthusiastic abt RN fics. All of u frm RPFC are doing gr8 job in keeping their memorable characters alive 👏

Coming to the story,

Interesting prologue, and gr8 first part 👏

Pls add me in ur pm list, and do pm me when u update it.

Thanks Shaina, for sending me the link. I wud definitely try to visit RPFC more regularly 😊

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Purnima

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

yippie another FF 😳😳😳 ... wonderful start 😃😃😃

Naina's past had been quite sad 😔... hope she gets adjusted with the shekhawats 😆😆 who seem to be well disciplined & strict 😆😆😆... all the best to Naina 👍🏼

i wonder if shekhawat's children gona accept an outsider in their family 😕😕 ...will they make naina's life more easier or difficult 🤔...

continue soon 😃😃
& yes thanx Shaina_b for PM 😃😃😃

Edited by -purnima- - 13 years ago

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Priya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Awesome start...

prologue and first part...nicely written...

Tanhayion se nahin hum mehfil se darte hain
duniya se nahin hum khud se darte hain
yun to bahut kuchh khoya hai humne
na jaane kyun tumhe khone se darte hain'

beautiful lines...

waiting for u to cont further...

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Prerna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

quite interesting start
plz continue soon

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noaccount

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

hey...umm riya??

nice part dear!!!

loved it!!!

it was beautifully written!!!

tch tch poor naina is adopted by shikawats!!!

anyways plz cont soon ...ASAP!!!

and add me in ur pm list!!!

thanks

esha

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Riya

@Riya_16

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Shaina_b
Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!

The title is very interesting and different!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

The poster by Arwa is beautiful!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

The lines are beautiful!!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

The journey of Naina's life so far has been really sad!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Her own father sent her away to live with Mrs.Shekhawat and it is indeed a surprise that she accepted to let have live with her!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲

The Shekhawat's residence at 13A Nottingham Place is indeed a huge and beautiful mansion and it was described very well!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

Poor Naina!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔The Shekhawats seem to be a bunch of snobs and she is stuck with them!!!!!

I wonder how their children are and if they will accept an outsider in their family or not!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕

I hope they are better than their parents, especially their son!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊