13A Nottingham Place- A Raj Naina fic updated ch11 - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
#41
hey Riya
lovely part
Bhoomi is rude may be these girl r not accepting any new😊 member in her family so soon
Raj is sweet n kind
If I can't help falling in love with you lovely😍
thanks 4 PM

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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
Hey Riya gr8 part

Wow Raj is so sweet.

Surely in a house of robots you certainly need a friend. Make that a very sweet friend.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
Hi Ria
Nice part
Bhoomi is so rude
Rajveer he is soo sweet
So someone is here for Naina who welcome her with warmness
Nice Part
Con'soon
Ayushi
(Thanxx Shaina for the PM.)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
nice part Riya😊

this place is surely going to be an unknown world for Naina as the other family members of shekhawat will do nothing accept making her realise that she was there just for the favour done for her and her father😭😔

but raj has promised to be there with her in all the times hope that she will not felt lonely too much as raj would be there by her side all the time😊


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Posted: 13 years ago
#45

Finally our raj has arrived...aww i sooo luved his intro scene...
D whole update was awesome...raj was xtremely sweet n helpful...😍
Hoping for more dhamakas...😳
Pls continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
hi there,
i m a new reader of this fic...interesting storyline and characters...like the fact that Raj is welcoming and friendly...what a contrast to the rest of the folks staying in that house...what a cold and as raj mentioned weird family...no doubt Naina will be feeling out of place and too concious of her situation for the days to come...anyways looking forward to see RN's interaction...gr8 writing 👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
Wonderful story..read both the parts
Naina is trying to adjust in the new place. Bhoomi is quite arrogant while vishaka seems to be indeifferent to Naina's presence.
Raj knows that his family can be quite difficult and so he tries to assure naina that he will help her adjust to the new place. She is touched by her sincere words.
please continue soon ... do send me a PM when you update the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!! Thanks

Naina is trying to adjust in the new place but she is being made to realize that she is there just for the favour done to her!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 Yes poor her.

Bhoomi is as rude and arrogant as her parents while Vishakha seems to be indifferent to Naina's presence!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 Yes they are a bunch of snobs.

The song is very nice and sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 Thank You.

Naina is lost hearing his magical voice and carried away by his song!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍

Raj knows his family can be quite difficult and weird and tries to assure Naina he will help her adjust to the new place!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 Born sensitive.

Raj is really sweet and helpful and Naina is touched by his gesture!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 Raj is the best😳

Surely she needs a friend in this strange house and she has got a very sweet friend!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 You can't survive in this world without friends.😊

Raj is soo charming and I know he will take care of Naina!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Let's see...😊



Thank you very much for the lovely comments keep reading.😊
Edited by riyaa_1985 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: -purnima-

aww Raj being so sweet 😳😳...

whereas bhoomi & vishaka seem to be the troublemakers for dear naina 😆😆😆... but when to fear when saviour raj is here 😃😃😃... loved this line...

hope naina really njoys her stay with the shekhawats 😃😃 woh to waqt hi batayega.

continue soon 😃😃



Thank you so much for reading. Your comments inspire me to write better. Keep reading.

Edited by riyaa_1985 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: suhana.dixit

Nice part..

Bhoomi and Vishaka r as rude and arrogant as their parents.Poor Naina!!! she is great trouble.

Raj seems to b really sweet and helpful..he really made Naina welcome by his words.she is really touched by his gesture.😊

Do continue soon
Thank u Shaina for the pm😃


Yes true, Raj is the sweetest and Bhoomi and Vish are just plain rude. Let's see what happens next. Keep reading😊
Edited by riyaa_1985 - 13 years ago

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