Seeds of a Legend[KaSh]:Chapter 12-Page 61

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blue_lotus22

@blue_lotus22

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#151

Beautiful update...loved it so much.
Love the way you wrote this part... keep up the good work...
Update next part super soon.
Thanks for the pm, take care.

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amaniM

@amaniM

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#152

Zarqaa you rocked girl!

amazing part!

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manjiri

@m4manju

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+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#153

nice part ... loving the thrill m feeling reading the story... karan go get her already 😳

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falcon.star

@falcon.star

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#154

Amazing job Zarqa !! Absolute brilliant piece of work !!!

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moonlight2630

@moonlight2630

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Posted: 13 years ago

#155

hey Mais dear sorry for late commt kya karo meri daughter ke test they so i m late but ur update was superb awesome i love it and u did so beautifully described .deep black darkness and blazing heat fire make arman's character more attractive u all r very good i love all chapters so far plz counti...

thanks 4 pm.

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moonlight2630

@moonlight2630

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#156

hey Zarqaa dear i love ur update it was fabulous. shilpa finally got away from tower .u written forest part very brilliantly the flower part and specially the tress part how they became thick or tall and made dark scary cage .i really wanna know what happend when KASH come face to face can't wait for their second meeting .

plz counti...

and update soon

thanks 4 pm.

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soni4eva

@soni4eva

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#157

wow totally luvd da update

u described evrifin so beautifully

cnt w8 4 dem 2 meet plzz cont soon x

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Bhavya

@Bhavya8

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#158

That was sooo gripping!!
It was sooo dark and vivid!!
When Shilpa was escaping I was glad she wasn't being a dhukhi atma and alll sad at how alone she feels. But when the flower was shown I was reminded a bit of snow white, I thought the flower was a trap but I was wrong. The bigger picture was so much worse/better (can't decide!) The fact that Shilpa is trapped in Karan's land could be fantastic becuase I really am looking forward to KaSh meeting, or terrible if I only think of how scared Shilpa would be. But the supernatural elements are written so well. Karan's song, I don't know what he sang or the tune but I'm getting an eerie feeling! lol! Then the trees moving, I thought of Lord of the Rings, but this is obviously a really scary malevolent figure is behind it.
Shashank and Padma's fear was really saddening. And then the story flashback. It was done at the perfect time. And at the end when it dawned of Shilpa and she said "He's here." That was sooo awesome!! What a way to end that chapter!! I was left wanting more!! This ff is sooo unpredictable, I can't even imagine what's going to happen next. But I'm sooo excited. Thanks for pm!!!!!!!
Please update soon!!