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swetha10

@swetha10

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#121

NIce start...

cool CS...

luved it..

waiting for more..

continue soon

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judith

@-BlueShadow-

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#122

awsum prt
Continue soon
Plz pm me:))

Edited by -BlueShadow- - 13 years ago

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DarkDove

@DarkDove

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#123

i loved the update dear...

very nice and detailed description of the mansion and the colors and the pictures hanging on the wall.

So that was Atul, walking up the stairs and goes into the room of Armaan! Omg, he is attached to machines, too weak to live.

Shilpa is dead? Why? How did that happen? Im feeling so sad and down, you really really wel described Atul's, Anjali's and Armaan's emotions. I even felt this pain in my heart.

Anjali is pregnant, thats sweet. I love the bond that Atul and Anjali share.

I feel really bad for Armaan...

Hhmm so the flashbacks are going to come in the next part...

Loved the update ❤️

xxhaffie

Edited by DarkDove - 13 years ago

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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#124

i just loved it...loved it?...more than that.

u r awesome.

super awesome.

u described it beautifully , i felt as if really seeing it.u r mindblasting,...

now let me start wid d story,

veer lying on bed -all helpless, wat made him like dis...its really painfull to think.

ananya is dead...shocking and really didn't want it...

he just want to get up n hold her picture or let go of this life and go to his Ananya who is waiting for him somewhere.

this is really hittest line...or i vud say sensational.complete , perfect,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,it brought out every emotion of veer...

love veer and ananya both.

waiting for flashback...happy times...

do cont soon...

once again i remind u ...

i loved ur story

Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago

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KSGforever08

@KSGforever08

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#125

wht a ff.luved the update.lukin 4wrd 2 read further

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Urvi

@-screwed.UP-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#126

wow great start!!
Loved the bonding btw the trio.
omg shilpa is dead :(
and armaan is in trauma cuz of that ...thats so shocking :|
i m too excited to knw thier past...please cont soon.
thnx for the pm :)