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Radhika Sharma

@ridzzi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#131

god...u r amazing...what a start...👏

veer lying on the bed n machine n wires are attached to make him alive...😭...n anu is dead...how...?????????...😲

n sia is dhrams wife n pregnant too...oh that's sweat...😊

but u know what i hv read a story just like this...well not exactaly but a little similer...in that the condition of boy is just like veer...but the girl is alive...she is with him in his last moment...n after his death she becomes numb...

that was the only story which i hv read n feeling like cry...😭

n now u n ur story remembered me of that...i m really desperate too read this story...

''...Veer: [in heart] I miss you Ananya please ho sake tu wapis ajao please wapis ajao...''

Chhoti-chhoti baatein yunhi aate-jaate
Yaadein sehlaake jaati hai
Raaton ko sirhaane baasi muskaane
Mujhko sula ke jaati hai
Milna nahin hai mumkin itna bataaun lekin
Hum phir mile kyun hain
Tujhko bula naa paaun,

Tujhko bhula naa paaun
Yeh silsile kyun hain
Sab kuch wahi hai, par kuchh kami hai
Teri aahatein nahin hai
Sab kuch wahi hai, par kuchh kami hai
Teri Aahatein nahin hai.. nahin hai

Maine nahin jaana, tune nahin jaana
Jaane anjaane jo huaa
Kuchh tto hua jo mujh ko hua naa
Tujhko magar kyun hua

Ghalti nahin hai teri
Ghalti nahin hai meri
Phir bhi gile kyun hain
Tujhko bulaa na paaun
Tujhko bhula na paaun
Yeh silsile kyun hain
Sab kuch wahi hai [wahi hai]
Par kuch kami hai [kami hai]
Teri aahatein nahin hai

Sab kuch wahi hai, par kuch kami hai
Teri aahatein nahin hai, nahin hai hai

Teri aahatein nahin hai aahatein nahin hai
Teri aahatein nahin hai
Ohh..
Teri aahatein nahin hai, aahatein nahin hai
Teri aahatein nahin hai

Kyun... kyun nahin hai

update soon...

luv u...😊

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Nandini_goyal

@Nandini_goyal

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#132

awesome part!!!! :D

thanks for the pm

luv

nandi

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Bharti

@TheSexyDevil

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#133

Waiting for the next update
continue soon

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amruta04

@amruta04

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#134

hey Anu very nice update
and ridz is dead ??

waiting for the next update

do continue soon

take care and thanks for the pm.

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#135

WOW..really interesting start...

OMG shilpa is dead and armaan is such health...Can't wait for the next chapter...

do continue soon...

take care

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Geeta singh

@sweetdesire

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#136

Hey Anu.🤗..How r u dear?...Love the CS and first Chapter to the core👏...OMG Riddhima is dead and Armaan is in bed😲...Really want to know what happened to them...So Atul and Anjali are also married...Waiting for more so do continue soon...Thanks for the PM...Take care😊

Lots of Love

Geet

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Anu

@DulceAmor

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#137

Hey hun, what a great start to the story! I loved the way you described Atul coming in and the whole interior of the house - it was almost like the opening scenes of a movie; I could imagine the camera swining out and revealing it all. I kind of expected Armaan to be the one in the bed but OMG, I was really shocked to learn Shilpa is dead. A part of me really hopes that she's not dead and will come back, but then that would be all Ekta style wouldn't it? I hope Armaan gets his happiness back somehow. And also, that scene between Atul and Anjali was so beautifully written. It made me a bit emotional, tbh. Lovely start. Can't wait to read the flashbacks and find out how Armaan & Shilpa fell in love.

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jasmine ansari

@AMMY12

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#138

Awsm part.
Ridz dead thats a shocking start.
Waiting 4 d past track.
Update asap.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c.

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Rabia Amla

@-RabiaKSGKaJen-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#139

greaaat part buhh soo saddd;; armaan iss attachedd to wiress; tryinng tio livee anndd ridzzy iss DEAD :O OMG! whaah happenedd? ii wanna knoww noww; update soopper sooon <3 x