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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shonajain

Wow new arsh ff 😊 😊
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Originally posted by: youth_showsfan

hey anumeha

congratulation on ur new story
the concept is awesome
waiting fr the first part :)
update super soon
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Originally posted by: SonaliDhone

interasting story ,dear ,thanx for pm me

I glad one new ff story add in my RtMc stories
Thanx alot dear
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Originally posted by: Simran_14

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Hey Anumeha! :) Congrats on the new ff and i liked the promo looking forward to the story :) Update soon :D


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Posted: 13 years ago

RT MC Version



Character Sketch


Disclaimer: Im writing this FF for my lovely readers and is my copyright and is not posted on any other website.

All the characters are just fictional and would be different from what they were in the show.


Mumbai the famous city and known as the city of dreams. The city where all ur dreams come true and it's a sheer luck but if it worked than nothing can stop u from being the best and achieving your dreams.

Uday Pratab Singh:



One of the famous industrialist of Mumbai but he has not got all this in heritance he has made it all himself. He is a self made man; Uday was settled in Punjab with his family and was a son of a farmer. His father was a really hard working and his mother one of the most amazing n adorable person. They got their son married to one of their friend's daughter Meera.

Meera Pratab Singh:



The most beautiful, sober and down to earth woman, who respects her elders and love the younger ones. She was the bartiya naari who was always ready to support her husband and always by his side to support him and encourage him.

A small Singh family, the most happiest one but life can't be same always it plays its dirty game and same happened with them as well. Uday's father died due to stress of paying off loans he took, his son was still studying for better education and to get a good job and that stressed him more. Singh family was completely broken with the sudden death of the head of the family, but life has to be lived and means to be moved on. They again started life with new spirit and making best of it. Uday and Meera worked hard together in the fields and paid off all the loans of their father and then with new determination and dreams, Uday, Meera and Kaushalya [Uday's Mom] moved to the new city ' Mumbai.

Kaushalya Pratab Singh:



The most jovial n loving personality, who is always there to support her children and now ready to support, encourage and take side of her grand children.

They all worked really hard day and night and even started their own business with the help of a very sweet family Gupta Family, during this period God blessed them with two most adorable son's Dharam n Veer both have completely different personality but still best friends, confidants and each other's life.

Gupta Family:

Arnav Gupta:



One of the most famous business tycoon, a very charming person who is always ready to help others and though seems tough but has the heart of gold, can't see anyone in any problem. Love his family a lot and his two adorable daughters are his life.

Sunita Gupta:


The lady with a gold heart and lovely personality, she just know how to love the person and can never be able to say anything against or wrong about anyone. Always there to support her husband and family love them a lot they are her only world.

Sumitra Gupta:



Arnav's mom, she is a strict lady and is not the one who forgives and forgets easily. Makes the person work in her way and had a unique working style. A selfish person never thinks for others rather than her own betterment.

Deepak Gupta:



Arnav's bro a very nice person who knows how to spread love everywhere around him and making other person's life beautiful as his and loves his two adorable and beautiful nieces.


Arnav Gupta is the one who helped Uday n his family when they shifted Mumbai n even helped them to start their own business. Both the families shared a sweet bond and had a great friendship, though Sumitra didn't liked this at all but didn't say anything because of her son. God has bless Arnav and Sunita with two adorable daughters who are the apple of their parents eye. Sia and Ananya again the two different personalities but cant live without each other.

Arnav and Sunita died in an accident which didn't seems to be an accident because their car breaks were being failed but no one knew what happened and Gupta family thought that to take over the complete business may be Singh family did it. Whereas the Singh family was themselves not aware of how this all happened. But that's what life is Deepak took responsibility of his two nieces and brought them up with his mother like his own daughters.



Part 1..


A beautiful day with the sun shining after so many days due to monsoon season.

A huge mansion in Mumbai city with huge black gates with the name plate of the mansion in bold letters written on its side 'Jannat Mansion'. A car entered the mansion and the black iron gates got open and a black Mercedes entered the gates which led to a lush green garden with a solid brick path in between. The beautiful garden filled with all colors flowers which were spreading their fragrance and aroma in the air, white marbled fountains in the middle of both sides of the garden with water running out of them. The trees and flowers dancing with the air and the car moved ahead and stopped in the porch of the beautiful mansion. The mansion was painted in white color showing simplicity and elegance.

The rear door of the car opened and a young figure came out of it wearing a black tuxedo and an office bag in his hand. He moved towards the stairs and entered the mansion opening the big dark brown wood shaded doors; the hall of the mansion was decorated beautifully in the most elegant way and gives a really cozy feeling. There were family pictures all around and a big family portrait in the center. The figure put his bag on the coach and moved upstairs on the first floor. The stairs were carpeted with red color making it look more bold and elegant and the side walls of the stairs were covered with photo frames, first of a couple, second two kids and like this many more. He moved up and walked through the corridor which has rooms on its either sides, he opened the wooden door of the second room on his left and saw the room emerged with darkness. The curtains were down not letting the sun rays entered the room, he can see nothing in the dark room so moved towards the windows and put the curtains aside and let the sunrays entered the room and fill it with light and also their life and it's in the room making it bright.

He turned around and its none other than Dharam Pratab Singh one of the biggest business tycoon in Mumbai handling his family business. He is charming and really hardworking, loved his family a lot and the one who use his brain more than the heart.

He smiled to the figure lying on bed and moved towards bed. A bright smile soon turned into a sad one and his eyes turned moist seeing his life, his best friend lying on the bed with different wires and machines attached to the body. Giving it some energy and other some hope that it might live and they get their happiness back. Dharam saw the figure opening the eyes straining them a bit trying to open them n them slowly opened them but closed it again because of the bright light in the room and Dharam smiled seeing this. The figure again opened eyes n looked in all directions of the room and then set on the person standing near the bed but didn't showed any reaction and looked towards the front wall, where a picture was hanging with flowers on the frame showing that the person is no more.

Dharma sat down on the bed beside the figure and held the hands of the figure and said.

Dharam: kaise hai mera bacha ab teekh hai na.

The figure looked towards him but again moved his tension towards the photo frame hanging there.

Dharam: kab tak chale ga aisa mein baat karta hoon aur tu kuch bolta hi nahin yeh kya baat hui Veer, mujhse naraz hai kya.

Veer yes u heard it right its Veer Pratab Singh lying on the bed with machines attached to his body giving him the strength to live, though he don't want to live but he he is alive just for his family. He looked in Dharam direction once more but again went back to see the picture. Dharam couldn't hold his tears now, his brother was always cheerful, the most loud and mischievous person is lying on the bed saying on a single word at all and in his own world after the death of the most important person in his life and the other painful thing is today is the birthday for whom Veer lived his life for.

Dharam was in his thoughts when a lady clad in a beautiful purple shaded saree entered the room with a pooja thali in her hand, her silky hairs open and coming up to her waist and she is having a baby bulge which has recently started showing up.

Lady: arey Dharam aap kab aye.

Dharam turned around and saw his beautiful wife standing in the threshold of the door with a pooja thali in her hand and a sweet smile on her lips, her face glowing with the pleasure, peace and experience of being entered into the stage of motherhood.

Dharam: arey Sia aap yahan rest kyun nahin kar rahein, chaliye aye yahan batiye 'he moved towards her gave a peck on her forehead and tried to take the thali from her when she stopped him and moved towards Veer.

Sia: ab kaise tabiyat hai aapki bacha, chaliye jaldi se teekh ho kar who pehle wale Veer ban jaye jo humein humesha satata tha hmmm..

She put a tilak on his forehead and put a small amount of Prasad in his mouth, kept flowers nears his pillow and then taking his hand lightly which has iv in his arm tied the red thread around his palm. Her eyes were moist but she cant do anything, she can't bring him back, she can't bring her sister back who have left him.

She moved towards the picture lighten up the diya and fragrance sticks in front of it, changed the flowers with the fresh ones, put tilak on her picture again but now she couldn't stop her tears she again looked towards the picture and said.

Sia: we miss u Ananya, Veer misses u the most, Happy Birthday.

She couldn't hold it anymore and rushed out of the room. Even Dharam's eyes were moist and he ran behind her. Veer eyes also got filled with moist and soon replaced by tears he just want to get up n hold her picture or let go of this life and go to his Ananya who is waiting for him somewhere.

Veer: [in heart] I miss you Ananya please ho sake tu wapis ajao please wapis ajao.

On the other side Sia was sitting on the edge of the bed crying, Dharam came in the room and saw her weeping badly, he cant see her like this, he cant see anyone in his family suffering and his family is suffering badly. He moved towards her and sits beside her.

Dharam: Sia'shhh bas chup ho jaye aise halat mein aapka rona teekh nahin aapko apna khayal rakhna chahiye.

Sia: mein kya karon Dharam kya karon mein usey aise nahin dekh sakti, Ananya ki mout[death] ke baad who ek dum toot chukka hai who behan thi meri lekin uske jane ka sab se zyada asar[effect] Veer par hua hai. Woh kuch kehne ko tayar hi nahin aise jaise himmat hi na bachi ho usmein toot ke bikar gaya hai who, kaise sambhalon mein khudko sabko aur sab se mushkil Veer ko.

Dharam: Sia mein janta hoon halat ache nahin hain mujhe bhi takleef hoti hai apne bhai ko aise tadapta dekh kar lekin hum karein bhi tu kya, jo haqiqat hai use hum badal tu nahin sakte. Ananya ab nahin rahi aur Veer ko yeh baat samjhne hogi.

He made her sit comfortably on the bed and himself leaned on the bed head post and Sia put her head on his shoulder and he embraced her in his arms.

Sia: Dharam.

Dharam: hmmm.

Sia: aapko yaad hai jab hum pehli baar mele thae tu Veer aur Ananya mein kitni fight hui thi.

Dharam: han who din mein kaise bhol sakta hoon tab hi tu mein pehle baar aap se mila tha.

On the other side Veer also thinking about his past when he met Ananya for the first time and fight with her.


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Edited by anumeha_rajat - 13 years ago
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Armaan Ridhimaa Version



Character Sketch


Disclaimer: Im writing this FF for my lovely readers and is my copyright and is not posted on any other website.

All the characters are just fictional and would be different from what they were in the show.



Mumbai the famous city and known as the city of dreams. The city where all ur dreams come true and it's a sheer luck but if it worked than nothing can stop u from being the best and achieving your dreams.

Shashank Mallik:



One of the famous industrialist of Mumbai but he has not got all this in inheritance he has made it all himself. He is a self made man; Shashank was settled in Punjab with his family and was a son of a farmer. His father was a really hard working and his mother one of the most amazing n adorable person. They got their son married to one of their friend's daughter Padma.

Padma Mallik:



The most beautiful, sober and down to earth woman, who respects her elders and love the younger ones. She was the bartiya naari who was always ready to support her husband and always by his side to support him and encourage him.

A small Mallik family, the most happiest one but life can't be same always it plays its dirty game and same happened with them as well. Shashank's father died due to stress of paying off loans he took, his son was still studying for better education and to get a good job and that stressed him more. Mallik family was completely broken with the sudden death of the head of the family, but life has to be lived and means to be moved on. They again started life with new spirit and making best of it. Shashank and padma worked hard together in the fields and paid off all the loans of their father and then with new determination and dreams, Shashank, Padma and Kaushalya [Shashank's Mom] moved to the new city – Mumbai.

Kaushalya Mallik:



The most jovial n loving personality, who is always there to support her children and now ready to support, encourage and take side of her grand children.

They all worked really hard day and night and even started their own business with the help of a very sweet family Gupta Family, during this period God blessed them with two most adorable son's Atul and Armaan both have completely different personality but still best friends, confidants and each other's life.

Gupta Family:

Arnav Gupta:



One of the most famous business tycoon, a very charming person who is always ready to help others and though seems tough but has the heart of gold, can't see anyone in any problem. Love his family a lot and his two adorable daughters are his life.

Sunita Gupta:


The lady with a gold heart and lovely personality, she just know how to love the person and can never be able to say anything against or wrong about anyone. Always there to support her husband and family love them a lot they are her only world.

Sumitra Gupta:



Arnav's mom, she is a strict lady and is not the one who forgives and forgets easily. Makes the person work in her way and had a unique working style. A selfish person never thinks for others rather than her own betterment.

Deepak Gupta:



Arnav's bro a very nice person who knows how to spread love everywhere around him and making other person's life beautiful as his and loves his two adorable and beautiful nieces.


Arnav Gupta is the one who helped Shashank n his family when they shifted Mumbai n even helped them to start their own business. Both the families shared a sweet bond and had a great friendship, though Sumitra didn't liked this at all but didn't say anything because of her son. God has bless Arnav and Sunita with two adorable daughters who are the apple of their parents eye. Anjali and Ridhimaa again the two different personalities but cant live without each other.

Arnav and Sunita died in an accident which didn't seems to be an accident because their car breaks were being failed but no one knew what happened and Gupta family thought that to take over the complete business may be Mallik family did it. Whereas the Mallik family was themselves not aware of how this all happened. But that's what life is Deepak took responsibility of his two nieces and brought them up with his mother like his own daughters.



Part 1..


A beautiful day with the sun shining after so many days due to monsoon season.

A huge mansion in Mumbai city with huge black gates with the name plate of the mansion in bold letters written on its side 'Jannat Mansion'. A car entered the mansion and the black iron gates got open and a black Mercedes entered the gates which led to a lush green garden with a solid brick path in between. The beautiful garden filled with all colors flowers which were spreading their fragrance and aroma in the air, white marbled fountains in the middle of both sides of the garden with water running out of them. The trees and flowers dancing with the air and the car moved ahead and stopped in the porch of the beautiful mansion. The mansion was painted in white color showing simplicity and elegance.

The rear door of the car opened and a young figure came out of it wearing a black tuxedo and an office bag in his hand. He moved towards the stairs and entered the mansion opening the big dark brown wood shaded doors; the hall of the mansion was decorated beautifully in the most elegant way and gives a really cozy feeling. There were family pictures all around and a big family portrait in the center. The figure put his bag on the coach and moved upstairs on the first floor. The stairs were carpeted with red color making it look more bold and elegant and the side walls of the stairs were covered with photo frames, first of a couple, second two kids and like this many more. He moved up and walked through the corridor which has rooms on its either sides, he opened the wooden door of the second room on his left and saw the room emerged with darkness. The curtains were down not letting the sun rays entered the room, he can see nothing in the dark room so moved towards the windows and put the curtains aside and let the sunrays entered the room and fill it with light and also their life and it's in the room making it bright.

He turned around and its none other than Atul Mallik one of the biggest business tycoon in Mumbai handling his family business. He is charming and really hardworking, loved his family a lot and the one who use his brain more than the heart.

He smiled to the figure lying on bed and moved towards bed. A bright smile soon turned into a sad one and his eyes turned moist seeing his life, his best friend lying on the bed with different wires and machines attached to the body. Giving it some energy and other some hope that it might live and they get their happiness back. Atul saw the figure opening the eyes straining them a bit trying to open them n them slowly opened them but closed it again because of the bright light in the room and Atul smiled seeing this. The figure again opened eyes n looked in all directions of the room and then set on the person standing near the bed but didn't showed any reaction and looked towards the front wall, where a picture was hanging with flowers on the frame showing that the person is no more.

Atul sat down on the bed beside the figure and held the hands of the figure and said.

Atul: kaise hai mera bacha ab teekh hai na.

The figure looked towards him but again moved his tension towards the photo frame hanging there.

Atul: kab tak chale ga aisa mein baat karta hoon aur tu kuch bolta hi nahin yeh kya baat hui Armaan, mujhse naraz hai kya.

Armaan yes u heard it right its Armaan Mallik lying on the bed with machines attached to his body giving him the strength to live, though he don't want to live but he he is alive just for his family. He looked in Atul's direction once more but again went back to see the picture. Atul couldn't hold his tears now, his brother was always cheerful, the most loud and mischievous person is lying on the bed saying on a single word at all and in his own world after the death of the most important person in his life and the other painful thing is today is the birthday for whom Armaan lived his life for.

Atul was in his thoughts when a lady clad in a beautiful purple shaded saree entered the room with a pooja thali in her hand, her silky hairs open and coming up to her waist and she is having a baby bulge which has recently started showing up.

Lady: arey atul aap kab aye.

Atul turned around and saw his beautiful wife standing in the threshold of the door with a pooja thali in her hand and a sweet smile on her lips, her face glowing with the pleasure, peace and experience of being entered into the stage of motherhood.

Atul: arey Anjali aap yahan rest kyun nahin kar rahein, chaliye aye yahan batiye 'he moved towards her gave a peck on her forehead and tried to take the thali from her when she stopped him and moved towards Veer.

Anjali: ab kaise tabiyat hai aapki bacha, chaliye jaldi se teekh ho kar who pehle wale Veer ban jaye jo humein humesha satata tha hmmm..

She put a tilak on his forehead and put a small amount of Prasad in his mouth, kept flowers nears his pillow and then taking his hand lightly which has iv in his arm tied the red thread around his palm. Her eyes were moist but she cant do anything, she can't bring him back, she can't bring her sister back who have left him.

She moved towards the picture lighten up the diya and fragrance sticks in front of it, changed the flowers with the fresh ones, put tilak on her picture again but now she couldn't stop her tears she again looked towards the picture and said.

Anjali: we miss u Ridhimaa, Armaan misses u the most, Happy Birthday.

She couldn't hold it anymore and rushed out of the room. Even Atul's eyes were moist and he ran behind her. Armaan eyes also got filled with moist and soon replaced by tears he just want to get up n hold her picture or let go of this life and go to his Ridhimaa who is waiting for him somewhere.

Armaan: [in heart] I miss you Ridhimaa please ho sake tu wapis ajao please wapis ajao.

On the other side Anjali was sitting on the edge of the bed crying, Atul came in the room and saw her weeping badly, he cant see her like this, he cant see anyone in his family suffering and his family is suffering badly. He moved towards her and sits beside her.

Atul: Anjali…shhh bas chup ho jaye aise halat mein aapka rona teekh nahin aapko apna khayal rakhna chahiye.

Anjali: mein kya karon atul kya karon mein usey aise nahin dekh sakti, Ridhimaa ki mout[death] ke baad who ek dum toot chukka hai who behan thi meri lekin uske jane ka sab se zyada asar[effect] Armaan par hua hai. Woh kuch kehne ko tayar hi nahin aise jaise himmat hi na bachi ho usmein toot ke bikar gaya hai who, kaise sambhalon mein khudko sabko aur sab se mushkil Armaan ko.

Atul: Anjali mein janta hoon halat ache nahin hain mujhe bhi takleef hoti hai apne bhai ko aise tadapta dekh kar lekin hum karein bhi tu kya, jo haqiqat hai use hum badal tu nahin sakte. Ridhimaa ab nahin rahi aur Armaan ko yeh baat samjhne hogi.

He made her sit comfortably on the bed and himself leaned on the bed head post and Anjali put her head on his shoulder and he embraced her in his arms.

Anjali: Atul.

Atul: hmmm.

Anjali: aapko yaad hai jab hum pehli baar mele thae tu Armaan aur Ridhimaa mein kitni fight hui thi.

atul: han who din mein kaise bhol sakta hoon tab hi tu mein pehle baar aap se mila tha.

On the other side Armaan also thinking about his past when he met Ridhimaa for the first time and fight with her.


*******

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Edited by anumeha_rajat - 13 years ago
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Armaan Shilpa Version



Character Sketch


Disclaimer: Im writing this FF for my lovely readers and is my copyright and is not posted on any other website.

All the characters are just fictional and would be different from what they were in the show.



Mumbai the famous city and known as the city of dreams. The city where all ur dreams come true and it's a sheer luck but if it worked than nothing can stop u from being the best and achieving your dreams.

Shashank Mallik:



One of the famous industrialist of Mumbai but he has not got all this in inheritance he has made it all himself. He is a self made man; Shashank was settled in Punjab with his family and was a son of a farmer. His father was a really hard working and his mother one of the most amazing n adorable person. They got their son married to one of their friend's daughter Padma.

Padma Mallik:



The most beautiful, sober and down to earth woman, who respects her elders and love the younger ones. She was the bartiya naari who was always ready to support her husband and always by his side to support him and encourage him.

A small Mallik family, the most happiest one but life can't be same always it plays its dirty game and same happened with them as well. Shashank's father died due to stress of paying off loans he took, his son was still studying for better education and to get a good job and that stressed him more. Mallik family was completely broken with the sudden death of the head of the family, but life has to be lived and means to be moved on. They again started life with new spirit and making best of it. Shashank and padma worked hard together in the fields and paid off all the loans of their father and then with new determination and dreams, Shashank, Padma and Kaushalya [Shashank's Mom] moved to the new city – Mumbai.

Kaushalya Mallik:



The most jovial n loving personality, who is always there to support her children and now ready to support, encourage and take side of her grand children.

They all worked really hard day and night and even started their own business with the help of a very sweet family Gupta Family, during this period God blessed them with two most adorable son's Atul and Armaan both have completely different personality but still best friends, confidants and each other's life.

Gupta Family:

Arnav Gupta:



One of the most famous business tycoon, a very charming person who is always ready to help others and though seems tough but has the heart of gold, can't see anyone in any problem. Love his family a lot and his two adorable daughters are his life.

Sunita Gupta:


The lady with a gold heart and lovely personality, she just know how to love the person and can never be able to say anything against or wrong about anyone. Always there to support her husband and family love them a lot they are her only world.

Sumitra Gupta:



Arnav's mom, she is a strict lady and is not the one who forgives and forgets easily. Makes the person work in her way and had a unique working style. A selfish person never thinks for others rather than her own betterment.

Deepak Gupta:



Arnav's bro a very nice person who knows how to spread love everywhere around him and making other person's life beautiful as his and loves his two adorable and beautiful nieces.


Arnav Gupta is the one who helped Shashank n his family when they shifted Mumbai n even helped them to start their own business. Both the families shared a sweet bond and had a great friendship, though Sumitra didn't liked this at all but didn't say anything because of her son. God has bless Arnav and Sunita with two adorable daughters who are the apple of their parents eye. Anjali and Shilpa again the two different personalities but cant live without each other.

Arnav and Sunita died in an accident which didn't seems to be an accident because their car breaks were being failed but no one knew what happened and Gupta family thought that to take over the complete business may be Mallik family did it. Whereas the Mallik family was themselves not aware of how this all happened. But that's what life is Deepak took responsibility of his two nieces and brought them up with his mother like his own daughters.



Part 1..


A beautiful day with the sun shining after so many days due to monsoon season.

A huge mansion in Mumbai city with huge black gates with the name plate of the mansion in bold letters written on its side 'Jannat Mansion'. A car entered the mansion and the black iron gates got open and a black Mercedes entered the gates which led to a lush green garden with a solid brick path in between. The beautiful garden filled with all colors flowers which were spreading their fragrance and aroma in the air, white marbled fountains in the middle of both sides of the garden with water running out of them. The trees and flowers dancing with the air and the car moved ahead and stopped in the porch of the beautiful mansion. The mansion was painted in white color showing simplicity and elegance.

The rear door of the car opened and a young figure came out of it wearing a black tuxedo and an office bag in his hand. He moved towards the stairs and entered the mansion opening the big dark brown wood shaded doors; the hall of the mansion was decorated beautifully in the most elegant way and gives a really cozy feeling. There were family pictures all around and a big family portrait in the center. The figure put his bag on the coach and moved upstairs on the first floor. The stairs were carpeted with red color making it look more bold and elegant and the side walls of the stairs were covered with photo frames, first of a couple, second two kids and like this many more. He moved up and walked through the corridor which has rooms on its either sides, he opened the wooden door of the second room on his left and saw the room emerged with darkness. The curtains were down not letting the sun rays entered the room, he can see nothing in the dark room so moved towards the windows and put the curtains aside and let the sunrays entered the room and fill it with light and also their life and it's in the room making it bright.

He turned around and its none other than Atul Mallik one of the biggest business tycoon in Mumbai handling his family business. He is charming and really hardworking, loved his family a lot and the one who use his brain more than the heart.

He smiled to the figure lying on bed and moved towards bed. A bright smile soon turned into a sad one and his eyes turned moist seeing his life, his best friend lying on the bed with different wires and machines attached to the body. Giving it some energy and other some hope that it might live and they get their happiness back. Atul saw the figure opening the eyes straining them a bit trying to open them n them slowly opened them but closed it again because of the bright light in the room and Atul smiled seeing this. The figure again opened eyes n looked in all directions of the room and then set on the person standing near the bed but didn't showed any reaction and looked towards the front wall, where a picture was hanging with flowers on the frame showing that the person is no more.

Atul sat down on the bed beside the figure and held the hands of the figure and said.

Atul: kaise hai mera bacha ab teekh hai na.

The figure looked towards him but again moved his tension towards the photo frame hanging there.

Atul: kab tak chale ga aisa mein baat karta hoon aur tu kuch bolta hi nahin yeh kya baat hui Armaan, mujhse naraz hai kya.

Armaan yes u heard it right its Armaan Mallik lying on the bed with machines attached to his body giving him the strength to live, though he don't want to live but he he is alive just for his family. He looked in Atul's direction once more but again went back to see the picture. Atul couldn't hold his tears now, his brother was always cheerful, the most loud and mischievous person is lying on the bed saying on a single word at all and in his own world after the death of the most important person in his life and the other painful thing is today is the birthday for whom Armaan lived his life for.

Atul was in his thoughts when a lady clad in a beautiful purple shaded saree entered the room with a pooja thali in her hand, her silky hairs open and coming up to her waist and she is having a baby bulge which has recently started showing up.

Lady: arey atul aap kab aye.

Atul turned around and saw his beautiful wife standing in the threshold of the door with a pooja thali in her hand and a sweet smile on her lips, her face glowing with the pleasure, peace and experience of being entered into the stage of motherhood.

Atul: arey Anjali aap yahan rest kyun nahin kar rahein, chaliye aye yahan batiye 'he moved towards her gave a peck on her forehead and tried to take the thali from her when she stopped him and moved towards Veer.

Anjali: ab kaise tabiyat hai aapki bacha, chaliye jaldi se teekh ho kar who pehle wale Armaan ban jaye jo humein humesha satata tha hmmm..

She put a tilak on his forehead and put a small amount of Prasad in his mouth, kept flowers nears his pillow and then taking his hand lightly which has iv in his arm tied the red thread around his palm. Her eyes were moist but she cant do anything, she can't bring him back, she can't bring her sister back who have left him.

She moved towards the picture lighten up the diya and fragrance sticks in front of it, changed the flowers with the fresh ones, put tilak on her picture again but now she couldn't stop her tears she again looked towards the picture and said.

Anjali: we miss u Shilpa, Armaan misses u the most, Happy Birthday.

She couldn't hold it anymore and rushed out of the room. Even Atul's eyes were moist and he ran behind her. Armaan eyes also got filled with moist and soon replaced by tears he just want to get up n hold her picture or let go of this life and go to his Shilpa who is waiting for him somewhere.

Armaan: [in heart] I miss you Shilpa please ho sake tu wapis ajao please wapis ajao.

On the other side Anjali was sitting on the edge of the bed crying, Atul came in the room and saw her weeping badly, he cant see her like this, he cant see anyone in his family suffering and his family is suffering badly. He moved towards her and sits beside her.

Atul: Anjali…shhh bas chup ho jaye aise halat mein aapka rona teekh nahin aapko apna khayal rakhna chahiye.

Anjali: mein kya karon atul kya karon mein usey aise nahin dekh sakti, Shilpa ki mout[death] ke baad who ek dum toot chukka hai who behan thi meri lekin uske jane ka sab se zyada asar[effect] Armaan par hua hai. Woh kuch kehne ko tayar hi nahin aise jaise himmat hi na bachi ho usmein toot ke bikar gaya hai who, kaise sambhalon mein khudko sabko aur sab se mushkil Armaan ko.

Atul: Anjali mein janta hoon halat ache nahin hain mujhe bhi takleef hoti hai apne bhai ko aise tadapta dekh kar lekin hum karein bhi tu kya, jo haqiqat hai use hum badal tu nahin sakte. Shilpa ab nahin rahi aur Armaan ko yeh baat samjhne hogi.

He made her sit comfortably on the bed and himself leaned on the bed head post and Anjali put her head on his shoulder and he embraced her in his arms.

Anjali: Atul.

Atul: hmmm.

Anjali: aapko yaad hai jab hum pehli baar mele thae tu Armaan aur Shilpa mein kitni fight hui thi.

atul: han who din mein kaise bhol sakta hoon tab hi tu mein pehle baar aap se mila tha.

On the other side Armaan also thinking about his past when he met Shilpa for the first time and fight with her.


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Sorry for any grammatical mistake...couldn't re read it...and hope u enjoy...

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very nice update
loved it
waiting 4 next
cont.soon

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ArSh(Armaan-Shilpa/DMG) ff:

Is there anyone interested in reading ArSh(Armaan-Shipa) ff, it's such a old show that I'm not sure if there any fans left in this forum.

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