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Mara.Dyer

@Mara.Dyer

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#451

Fantastic update.

Emotions were beautifully defined and conveyed i could imagine the scenes.

Continue soon.

Thnx for the pm.

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--Nargis--

@--Nargis--

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#452

Oh Lyra...I don't know how I missed your Pm for this update...Brilliant!! You are by far the QUEEN of ANGST...I love you!!! My GOD...I think I know this Arnav as I know myself...that's how close I feel to him!!!! Tremendous!!👏 You should be honored...for I think this is the first time I can relate to MALE lead then the female...for this is certainly an accomplishment!! Not to say that I cannot relate to this Khushi or her pain..for I do...but my heart bleeds for this Arnav!!! Thanks for a beautiful read!

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#453

Lyraa! A PM from you instantly make me feel heavier and I almost shed tears for all your updates. And this one is no different! You are making me broken more than Kushi or Arnav!

That was fabulous work dear! U have a great talent! Loved reading it!

And thanks for the PM.. To say, I received twice, so double thanks😊

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sharme

@sparklystarstud

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#454

lyraaa...

that was EPIC...

beautiful...terribly beautiful update...

the play of arnav's n khushi's emotions...

and aryan saying those words to khushi as though he had already guessed his fate...

BRILLIANT WORK...

u made me cry...i bawled out my eyes...

and i read it wen i was in class...every1 got worried coz i was crying...right after our professor finished a sleepy class on energy efficiency...they must have thought i had lost it finally...screw them...

I DUNNO HOW I MISSED UR PM...saw it oly today...

sorry for the late comment hun...

but seriuosly cant wait for the next update...make it sooonnn pls...

but concentrate on ur exam too...

such a heart wrenching update swthrt...poor arnav...

and poor poor aryan...damn that shyam for me pls nah

much luv

~~~ sam

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rockinggirl5

@rockinggirl5

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#455

OMG!!! It was beautiful. U have gone a great job again in showing their love, emotions, and sadness. I love ur writing and this FF. please continue soon and pm me when u do.
Thanks

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SunriseGreen

@SunriseGreen

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#456

OMG nooo! Aryan can't die! Saala Shyamu ughh! Someone please club him >.< And why do I get the feeling that Aryan was going to hand Khushi over to Arnav?...

Hayeee, the agony in this update had the same effect on me as all the other updates have had- my heart was in my throat 🥺 I can't take it anymore *dramatically closes eyes and lays back of hand on forehead* But my need to know what happens is much more important than my tolerance 😆

Wonderful, beautiful udpate :) Continue whenever you get the time!

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medha

@medha16

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#457

oh god!!it is one of d bestFFs ive ever read...i read all of it togedr n its wonderful!om speechless!!!ive been crying buckets since d time i started reading this story...its so natural,so real,so painful n yet so heart warming!!!the feeling of unrequitted love,pain,responsibility,duty,obligation n so many emotions u hav captured so well...it was as if i was seeing a real life situation unfolding itself in front of me...d hurt,pain,anguish,selflessness,d complexity of relationships-u have successfully created this complex web of human emotions which makes this story so beautiful!ur an amazing writer...plz pm me whwn u next update!cant wait to read how d plot unfolds from now on...

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Shivana

@SNR7

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#458

Ooh! Da climax is here...& like all good writers, CVs, etc u promptly leave us hanging 😕! But loving it way too much to wallow in the injustice served to us on a golden platter 😉 - 😆! But pliz don't let anyone die (well snake can but not anyone else pliz!)