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Okay so I read this all in two days and I just want to say it's a freaking masterpiece! The way you described the pain of all the characters..the way you expressed their love for one other from Aryan, Khushi, Arnav's perspective was just wow! I re read and re read parts after completing it cause you're writing honestly touches the heart and evokes real emotions!👏 As a writer, you've def captured the ability to be able to touch our hearts, so kudos to you! Not to mention, this story was endearing. A women whose stuck between duty and love.. Your writing made me feel for Aryan's character even though I knew in the end it will be Arnav-Khushi, but I felt so bad. :( And before I forget, the way you described the different emotions of love through all the characters...was simply surreal! Your writing honestly left me spell bounded! I enjoyed every bit of this FF and now that I'm all caught up I WANT MORE! LOL. So i hope you're writing and will update soon! xx

Also, whenever you do decide to end the FF, please do mention Aryan..he was the reason AK would be together and since he was such an imp character..it would make sense to do so! :]

Awww poor Aryan! Felt bad for him, and La as well!

really liked it .
fantastic and fabulous.
i was like watching a movie than reading FF.
every thing was just happening in front of our eyes.
one of the best FF's.
really liked it.
when it is a triangle, one has to take the pain for rest two.

sorry for commenting late..actually had a pretty tough schedule for the previous 2 months so cudnt catch up with any of the works on IF!

M too stunned to say nethn..i nw undrstnd wat u mean by dull ache..cz dats wats in my heart..i ddnt cry a bit..bt its a kind of melancholy feeling, dat i dnt undrstnd..n i dnt want to undrstnd also..its bttr to remain in denial, to avoid..
i feel so so sad for aryan n lavanya..bt d respect i feel for them is much more..
aryan's last words to khushi were touching..
n m glad u left d aryan-la thng there only..let nature do d rest..
n m waiting for ur nxt update, proper ending 😊

That was beautiful. It just makes me CRT every time. I feel very bad for aryan and Lavanya. I hope they fall in love again. Brilliantly written. You are an amazing writer. Wonderful!!!

just read your entire story and it's amazing😃

O.K. This is getting seriously annoying.

beautiful story...love the way u narrate...i've already read another ff od yours called Behind That Smile...loved that one too and found the way akash proposed really endearing...here felt really bad for both aryan and lavanya...pls do accept my buddy request...

I just read the whole FF from the absolute start... and just wanted to let you know that I truly enjoyed it!! YOU are an excellent writer... I wish you get to publish your work as books in the future.. I would be a definite buyer!!! Good luck and thanks in heaps for the entertainment!!