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Posted: 13 years ago
I would not like too be Khushi right now
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Posted: 13 years ago
Such a moving story Lyrra!! I have read almost all the updates with tears blurring the words... you write so beautifully... now waiting for your new thread with the proper ending :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
i read the whole in one go and jst got hooked to it... totally and completely loved it... u are a terrific writer... every emotion is superbly written... marvellous...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awww, what a beautiful chapter!!!
I hope you know that you are like the most talented writer here, love your works!!! Update soon :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
So sorry for replying late !!!! Am on vacation !!!!! So Internet is hardly available !!!!!
I have no words for the update !!!!!! If was simply superb !!!!!!!
Loved Arnav and khushi's conversation Nd loved the way you have written Khushi and Aryan's conversation !!!!!
Felt bad for both Aryan and lavanya !!!!!! Hope they both find the happiness they deserve !!!!!!!! Lavanya as Aryans PG !!!!
Can't wait to read more !!!! Thnx for the pm !!!! Update soon !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
ummm where do I start... I just read all the chapters, I have no words to explain how I felt while reading this chapters 9 and 10 I shed a tear but chapter 17 had bought out all the emotions I have never cried at a FF I was imagining it all in my mind it was beautifully written I'm glad you won for the best FF you truly deserved it and I loved this "This one bangle will be with khushi but I want to keep the other one with me because till my last breath I will be hoping that khushi will come back and I will myself put this bangle on her wrist. And if she never does, I will still have this bangle reminding me of the two women in my life. Ma and Khushi. One who taught me not to believe in love when she went away and one who taught me to believe in love and yet went away..."

Please PM me the updates



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Posted: 13 years ago
Just finished chapter 18...it was a beautiful update & obviously I breathed a sigh of relief that ArHi are once again together but not only that but that La & Aryan have common ground and may eventually fall in love with each other!!!

Very much looking forward to the next update to see where you take it next!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sorry for my late comment...!!!
I loved it!!i feel sooo bad for aryan...yes i wanted arnav and khushi together but when i read about aryan and how his feelings have been crushed i cant take it...you have written it so beautifully!!!
Lavanya...once again the mature one...once again the one to forgive and forget...this is why i love her...and this is what sets her apart from everyone else...
Are you going to continue with aryan and lavanya's part??i know you said this story is not about aryan but could you please give a small mention of him when you end??i feel his character deserves a happy ending...:)...just asking...:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi babes .. sorry for the late comment ...
u already know i had exams .. and then i fell ill and have only recovered enough to lie back and read .. but nt fully myself yet ... anyways will give u more details about tht latter .. i am nt here for tht ... so here goes my comment .. hope u enjoy it as much as i enjoy typing it ...

wow .. the first pt was touchy ... nice cossy scene .. u know wht came across my mind .. tht it is hard luck tht u cannt find any images of arnav on a bed to make a wonderful siggy .. of course are few pic of barun on bed in dmg .. but yaar in those he seems more like a drug addict .. it wont be of any use .. perfect scene ... i am dreaming again .. ur work has tht effect on me .. u know tht na ..

wow ... la's realization tht pride has no place when ur heart already is broken .. nice one .. luv ur la and hate tht pam .. she is bitchy ... i think tht was the whole idea ..

wow .. man tht was simply amazing i am speech;less .. i mean literally .. tht was brilliant .. god luv aryan .. yaar .. i cannt decide whether i am in luv with tht chaaracter more than with arnav himself .. it was extra ordinary ... perfect to the core ... so finally ur initial statement in the prologue is solved ... or rather defied properly ... it all make scene now ..

two banks tht would never meet ... arhi'
river seperating them ... aryan ..

and the fact tht he tell she is the reason behind his breath and she taught him to breath so tht he can breath with out her ... wow ... have i told u tht u have deep thoughts ... if these ideas resembles the way u re thinking i cannt imagine how can i truly understand ,, i mean 100% understand u .. lol .. ... confusing right ... but i will keep trying ...

and luved the fact tht aryan just having so much to say leaves without telling her those things .. for sure a time will never come tht will bring upon such a day tht kushi will need anyone .. arnav would make sure of tht ...

and the ending statement tht tells his luv .. is amazing ... she will never know the extend of his luv ..

so aryan and la are both free agents ... hope they meet as two broken hearts can make one whole ... guess so ... lol

wow .. tht was another cossy scene .. arhi .. luv them .. but still feel sad for aryan .. am delighted arhi meet .. but cannt feel sorry for the broken hearts ...

tender a kiss .. in a park after all they have been though ... tht was pretty romantic of u .. lol .. thoughtful ..

wow .. though i wished tht they would meet .. never thought tht u would do such a thing and change the tables ... wow .. very creative .. now i can atleast hope tht they might learn to breath all over again .. together i will hope .. and atleast now i am nt feeling sad for either .. they will find there way ...

thanx for the wondeful update .. and thanx for letting us .. me be a part of ur wonderful imagination and skills ...

update soon ...

xoxo
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Lyraa99

Heya everyone

When I had written the fifteenth chapter of this FF, Aparna (aparna5293) gave me a ring and she wanted to know that since my title was REASON I BREATHE if this story was about Aryan cz Aryan was the reason Khushi breathed. In a way this story was about all three of them. Aryan was the reason khushi breathed till arnav saved his life and arnav became the reason Aryan breathed. Now Aryan was purely a character of my imagination and I guess in a way it is difficult to connect to him.

What I intend to say is that, this is it about Aryan. I wont be writing a story about Aryan and Lavanya and leaving it all to your imagination. You can go ahead and believe that Aryan and La fell in love eventually. Aryan's love for Khushi was deep' as deep as Arnav's was. I believe there are two types of people. One who love truly but when they lose the one they love, they have the courage to pick the pieces and love again. But there are also people who when they fall in love, it's for life and they never fall in love again. Many may say such true love doesn't exist in reality and frankly I don't believe it does'I know this is reality and not a fairy tale... But then reality can be a fairytale too if we just close our eyes and believe'


guys the ff is not over yet...😆 starting a new thread soon... dont u guys want a proper ending...???



wow .. u keep on impressing .. seriously yaar .. man ur thought go too deep ,.. i wish i am half as thoughtful as urself .. hard luck .. u know na ... i am more heartless than many .. lol

the most cathcing pt of this post was ..
" One who love truly but when they lose the one they love, they have the courage to pick the pieces and love again. But there are also people who when they fall in love, it's for life and they never fall in love again. Many may say such true love doesn't exist in reality and frankly I don't believe it does'I know this is reality and not a fairy tale... But then reality can be a fairytale too if we just close our eyes and believe'"

it was simply amazing ...

and ans to ur next question .. we definitely need a prper and perfect ending .. oh tht reminds me i have another comment due .. sorry .. yaar .. will get on to it eventually .. just remember i havent forgotten it is just at the back of my mind ...

xoxo




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