Note'Devil's Desire' Thrd2 147 - Page 65

Originally posted by: dhamigeet

DEAD!!! HATS OFF!!!!!!!!

each word has deep depth ,ur creativity has been 4folds enhanced by this ff

fallen shortoff words 2 praise u

the script was heart touching ,the feel of the words sinks down into blood

portrayal of character was just mindblowing

Originally posted by: anushaarja

i want geet to fall 4 maan first... dekha jaye toh it will be always maan who falls 4 geet... but i want it to b changed... i want geet to confess her feelings to him...and den maan being a devil will b mended by her to love her... i want it to happen ...

Originally posted by: music_girl

Yup, Geet, the real dark game begins "now" beware 😆 oh gosh nice bet Maan...hmmm...really eager to know how Geet gonna fall for the terrible "monster" Maan Singh Khurana!!!!! 😉 Well, please do continue soon and also update Sacred Sin too!!! Me just eeeaaager😊

Originally posted by: maaneetfanatic

r u going to update soon hun😛

Originally posted by: softly_spoken

Ainee... all the updates are really nice... loved them all...

as usuall this story also started with a kiss...

i think now its your signature style to start it with kiss...

still me unable to type much... i will compensate... once i get over the sickness...

Originally posted by: crazydevil87

first m truly sry yaar i didn't reply on d first part so dis is for both first n second...
now oh my good lord wat a deadly combo u thought of a complete beleiver of love and a man who doesn't beleive in d mere existence of love...our devil juz knows arrogance n power...
oh lord here comes our second devil oozing out arrogance n attitude oh how cud a girl save herself from falling from his persona bechari angel bhi phas hi jayegi deny kar kar k...but abhi to i luved d way maan ne us despo sameera ka katta kiya...thnks for dat Annie it was fab...
ae lo devil ki nazar angel p n angel apni hi duniya mein magan phas gayi devil k saath...
oh no how shamelessly dis devil was asking her to go to room bechari angel was shocked...
sachchi mein dis devil is really shameless but haye main to iski is ada pe bhi fida ho gayi hes so evil...
bechari geet so sincerely answered him d difference between love n lust but can a devil comprehend it no so he laughed it n nxt moment oh my gosh he actually kissed her in front of dev...n bechari angel kept waiting for her knight but her expected night is a big tym loser i must say he just went off saying he didn't luv her n oh god ab ye usko apne room mein le gaya n how shamelessly he started opening his buttons n bechari geet...waise me wondering how is she resisting d hot devil wo bhi wid shirt off haye...but yaar dose paying words were too insulting any girls hands wud automatically reach to slap n o lord wen she expected him to b harsher our unpredictable devil is in mood to hv a new bet...wow...
but i luv his idea 6 months oh gosh m sooo excited to c wat will happen nxt...:D
fabulous job annie u truly rock...