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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abina03

fabulous update

fantastic dialogues
You are hot and those guys lust for you, and hide it by giving lame name such as love. this point devil is scored .
but how dare he to make fun on pure love
hmm... he gave dead line to Geet...
now surely he needs to break all his rules

Annie, make the Devil fall in love

check the tag line
u never know
when devil itself falls in love😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: khushi1022



wooow dat's jst fabulous...
wat a devil he is...even she didn't said it's bet...bt our devil himslf assumes dat...vry smart...
dev is a coward...he didn't do anything...such a darpok..

"Yeah I did say that but in my world I make rules and I can break them anytime. For a change I don't mind forcing the girl who is making me desire her irresistibly. It would be fun."
uff d devil is highly impossible...

geet try to threaten him...n even try to slap him...bt devil being devil extra smart...
oh!!! now devil has given her 6 months tym...for finding true love...are koi devil ko batao ye koi job thode n hai jo itni kam tym me mil jaega

THE GAME BEGINS NOW..!!!!!!!!!

and me egarly waiting for it devil jii...

so finally devil is ready to wait for 6 whole months in ordr to fulfil his desire...intrestingg

now it's bet according to devil...so let c... who is going to win

awesum work dear



thnak
u soo much
for such wonderful concepts
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Azmatazz

Annie.. frankly this is your story and its just he beginning... so i would want to see your perception and your story rather then we telling you how it should be...

However yes one thing that i desire to see is an equally or if not equally then a little devil Geet ... No a cry baby 😉 If thats possible...

i will
tryy my best 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ns.1

omg!! this devil is driving me crazy already...what an attitude "Do you know one thing..? Maan Singh Khurana has never been denied anything..! anything in his life..! and something that is strongly denied is strongly desired by this devil..!!"
and your denial has increased my desire for you..! and it won't be easy because you are devil's desire..!" wow!! anniee just awesome update...u don't need to make any changes dear just continue the way u have thought...its brilliant...i am loving it so much...the devil's game has begin...i wonder who will win...continue soon...muaaahhh!!😛

thanks dear
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ananya95

OMG OMG annie that was marvellous!
loved it!
i m just swooning with devil"s attitude n arrogance!
poor geet tried so hard to stand against him and argue with him!
so now devil"s game started
uffo devil n his challenges!
now wats gonna geet do? real or fake bf!
lets see whether his lust or her love wins or both merge in! n whether msk gets j or not
ha ha she said he is mean n all n he admitted proudly! devil lol!
dare u ever think of stopping this! it is superbly wowlicious
m in luv with it!
cont soon!

the game has started
and anything can happen😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Heya aniee di.. !! Howz u..? Gud mrng.. !! How r my angels..?? Me thru phn.. In college..:-P
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: x.Maaneet4eva.x

OMG sis, IM IN LOVE WITH THIS DEVIL! So Hey Devil there is love man coz I'm a girl who had the same dreams as the girl in front of u is ready to love u even though ur a devil and so selfish I'm ready to love u even after knowing about u. Ha ha ha...


I think Our Geet should get her ears checked, Poor "MY" Devil has to repeat himself "Don't push me". How could u Geet, how could u push the GREAT MSK? Ur unbelievable...

This Devil is so sarcastic, he not only has a good choice with girl ( He chose Geet above that stupid Sameera) but also a good sense of humour... "the is no love baby , so its time for lust" Wow he's s straightforward...Great going Man, u exactly know what u want... and how he repeated Geet's dialogue ( the great dialogue, many girls dream), no no no not repeated but mocked...Ha ha ha he is so funny ( but me hurt, how dare u make fun of our dreams Maan, dw no girls can be angry on u after all we all desire u :P) .

But i must say, Our Geet is clever. How she tried to trick Maan using his own words ( Wow, Weldone Geet, I'm so proud of u) But alas if our Geet is clever our Maan *dreaming* is to to too Clever. ( but i must say this mean is a bit too loose). How he said i make my rules and breaks them. ( Oh God who will tell Maan that rules are not to be broken, but what an attitude man. LOL. *me drooling*)

Awww, poor Geet is so innocent, when she said i can't sleep with u coz i don't love u ( me laughing, i bet Maan felt like laughing too, Geet he doesn't love u BUT DESIRES U and that too only for a night. Wake up girl).

And The MSK yet again proved that no one can trick him with words, nor wait for anyone's approval. "i don't wait for anyones consent" ( what an attitude) *me drooling yet again* Poor Geet what have u gotten Urself into.

And this Maan is also too straightforward, it only took him a meeting to make him admit that Geet is "hot" ( me jealous, but...oh well its our Geet :P). But me imagining what will happen to the MSK if he sees Geet everyday.

And its yet again proven that cleverness and Maan is one package. What a way to trap Geet. 6 months ahd she has to find someone who will love her selflessly ( is this s hint sis? I hope The MSK isn't going to fall into the hole he dipped for Geet. Lets wait and see who is going to get trapped, But either way he will get what he DESIRES).

And what an invitation, an invitation to hell? WOW only MSK can do that ( but if it means getting to see MSK forever I'm happy to accept it without second thought. LOL)

WOW sis, what an update and how u described what Maan Desire, the Devil's desire. I LOVED IT!

And yes, so the game begins here, and lets see who is living under the illusion Maan or Geet ( Love or desire? But can someone one someone if they don't desire them? * hmmm, my little brain can't think* lol)

Thank u for the update sis.
LOVED IT
Bless
LOVE U MORE
Sinthu.x.

omg
omg
omg
luv ya sis
i will get heart attack
by reading such comments
someone save me😳
luv u sis
here the game begins
but u never know
what devil
might do or what might happen
winks
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: vivacious_gurl

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mishtiritu

Heya aniee di.. !! Howz u..? Gud mrng.. !! How r my angels..?? Me thru phn.. In college..:-P

hiii
how r u
they r fine

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