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aditi07

@aditi07

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#51

This was amazing...I've watched the movie which was great ...as was this.
plz update soon😊

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mandira1

@mandira1

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Written beautifully!!

Brings back memories of the film!

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day_lily

@day_lily

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

OMG!!!

totally loved dis..

Pls PM me also

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aakriti

@aakriti120

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#54

hey
awesome ss...
very well written...
continue soon...

and thanks for the pm..:)

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Prerna

@prerna1

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

hi dear great start
loved it
plz continue soon

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tinsel

@tinsel

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

amazing Harshu!👏

Edited by tinsel - 13 years ago

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anjali

@rosette80

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

omg...wat t ot say frend..that was just sooo fab.!!! LOVED IT..SPECIALLY KHUSHI IN A NEW CHARACTER..

please pm me tooo..love to hear next part!

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Aparna

@-aparna-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#58

When u told that khushi is pr:*stitute i was super angry on u.
And my first word
what the?
Im not going to read it.
But as story proceeds i loved it though i dont like khushi as pr:*
poor girl wanted to do huge shoppin:(
arnav know that she is innocent:)
d night ;)
arnav is so caring here.
I didnt watch movie so i donno what is going to hpn next. But amazing start.
updt sooon.

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meghnas

@meghnas

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#59

heyy nice start...our desi hottie can definitely give competition to Gere 😉 n I can imagine the bubbly happy Khushi playing Julia Roberts' role 😊

update soon...this is fun!!