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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Great start than you😊

Excited to read a new FF on RN...can never have enough of them
Please do send me a PM when you update the next part... sure i will 😃would love the read the story
continue soon

Thanxx NIsha😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Edited by sainiayshi14 - 13 years ago
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Part-2
uss ladke ke piche se ek ladka ata hain aur kehta hain-Raj yeh tu kya kar raha hain..

Raj-kuch nahi Alekh bas isse yeh bata raha hoon ki confident aur over-confident mein kya fark hain...


Arjun Bijlani as Alekh Sharma (bachpan mein Alekh ke Parents ki car accident mein death hojane ki wajah se Rajveer Ke parents ne usey Adopt kar liya tha Alekh aur Raj bachpan se dost hain)

Alekh-Chal ja aur bata de asey kaun mard hain aur kaun bacha...Alekh Raj ko hug karte huy kehta hain.

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Match Starts
Raj aur Vicky ke bich ka match start ho chuka tha Vicky ko mann hi mann aisa lag raha tha jaisey ki woh haar raha hain but fir Vicky ne mann mein socha ke nahi woh itni assani se haar nahi manega aur na hi woh Raj ko itni assani se jitne nahi dega kuch toh karna hoga...

Vicky apne ek dost ko kuch Ishara karta hai...aur vicky ka dost Raj ke ekdaam pass ake Khada ho jata hai jise ki Raj distract ho jata hai aur uss ladke ki taraf dekhne ke liye jaise hi apna sir upar uthata hai Vicky mauka dekh ke Raj ke hath ke apni side ki traf push karta hai but Raj bhi ekdam se uska hath apne side push karta hai aur Vicky ko hara deta hai

Pura hall khushi se Raj ke liye cheer karne lagta hai udhar Vicky ab tak use pata hi nahi chala ke uske sath yeh ek jhatke mein kya hua.

Alekh-So dekha Vicky sahab ab toh apko pata chal hi gya hoga ki confidence aur over-confidence mein kya fark hai...pure hall mein mein sabhi log zorron se hassne lage..

Vicky-Rajj yeh tumne acha nahi kiya...😡

Raj kuch bolne hi wala hota hai ki Alekh kehta hai-Aye shane zyada shaand patti mat dikha nahi toh apun bhi sab ko yeh bata sakta hai ke tune yeh match cheating se jitne ki koshish ki hai.samjha

Vicky Raj ke kareeb ja kar kehta hai-tumhe iss ki keemat chukani padegi Raj

Raj Thoda sa smile karte huye kehta hai-agar cheating nahi ki hoti na to shyad sirf shayd haan sirf 1% shayad tum jeet jate abhi kuch der pehle tum ne kahan tha na ki jao jake apni mummy ke pass baitho... agar tum apni Ma ke pass kuch der rehte na toh woh tumhe batati ki baimani se jeetne ka phaal hame chukana padta hai...aur ek baat khel mein hamesha apne dushman ki akhon mein akhein dall ke khelo samjhe..

Vicky wahan se gusse mein chala jata hain aur fir se keh ke jata hai-pachtao ge tum Vicky se uljhkar pachto ge

Alekh raj ke pass ake kehta hai-mein chalta hoo

Raj-kyun

Alekh-woh tu mujhe jaane ke liye bole usey pehle hi mein chala jata hoon

Raj-par mein kyun tujhe yhaan se bhejunga

Alekh-woh toh tujhe abhi pata chal jayega chal mein tujhe dusre hall mein mulunga byeee.

Raj-are par sun toh ...isse pehle ki Raj kuch bolta ek ladki Raj ke kandhe par hath rakhti hai aur Raj jab use peeche mud ke dekhta hai toh dekhta hi reh jata hai.

Shweta Salve as Ritu Khanna
(Yeh hai Ritu Khanna jo ki Rajveer se pyaar karti hai aur raj jisey ritu par ek crush hai but ritu toh ritu hai apni adat se baaz nahi ayegi na Raj ko yeh ehsaas dilati rehti hai ke woh ussey pyaar karta hai aur raj jisey yeh pata hi nahi hai ki pyaar ka ehsaas kaisa hota hai woh ek simple se crush ko ritu ki meethi meethi baton mein ake love samajhne lagta hai)[[mujhe kuch damkiya milli thi aur kuch meri bhi galati thi jiski wajah se mijhe yeh lines thodi edite karni padi😆😉]]

Raj ek lambi saans bharte huye kehta hai-hayyyeee tum baar baar mujhe apni adao se ghyal karti rehti ho.

Ritu thoda sile karke kehti hai-tum kabhi nahi sudhroge na

Raj-tum sudharne nahi deti na.(said with flirtatiousness)

Ritu-Rajjj..

Raj-uff agar tum mujhe aisey hi dekhti rahi to kahi mein yahi maar na jaun

Ritu theek hai fir mein yahaan se jati hoon...aur ritu wahan se chali jati hai.

Ho..
Ho ho ho...
hmm hmm...

Woh dekhne mein kaisi seedhi-saadi lagti
Hai bolti ki woh toh kuch nahi samajhati
Andar se kitni tez hai
Kabhi ajeeb si, kabhi haseen lagti
Kabhi kisi kitaab ka hai scene lagti
Philosophy ka craze hai
Ho.. Kehti hai yeh ik phase hai [x2 times]
Ho.. Kehti hai yeh ik phase hai

Ritu piche mud ke dekhti hai ke Raj yeh gana uss ki taraf dekh ke gaa raha hai aur woh smile karke chali jati hai aur ek juice ka glass utha kar peene lagti hai

Ye kahaan main aa gaya ?!
Bolo ye kaisa ye teyaar hai
Dil kisi ka ho gaya
Naa isspe ikhtaiyar hai
Karun toh kya karun ?
Kahun toh kya kahun ?
Ye gaana bhi toh usko paas laane ka bahana hai
Woh chhup-chhup mere dil ke raaz kholti
Haan takiye mein mere khwaab bhi tatolati
Possessiveness ka case hai


Ritu dekhti hai ke Raj ek ladki ke sath dace kar raha hai toh wo wahan se gusse mein jane lagti hai toh Raj aa kar uska hath thaam leta hai..

Jaaan-e-jaan jaan-e-mann
Toh har gaane mein aata hai
Parwana Romio har ladka hi bann jaata hai
Likhu toh kya likhu?
Banu toh kya banu?
Yeh filmon mein ladka hi kyun ladki ko phansata hai?
Main chahoon bhi toh main sabhi woh kar jaata hoon
Woh aaye saamne toh main sudhar jaata hoon
Ladki ek full-on chase hai
Ho kehti hai yeh ek phase hai


Yeh sab sun kar Ritu thoda sa sharma kar smile kardeti hai..

Woh dekhne mein kaisi seedhi-saadi lagti
Hai bolti ki woh toh kuch nahi samajhati
Andar se kitni tez hai
Kabhi ajeeb si, kabhi haseen lagti
Kabhi kisi kitaab ka hai scene lagti
Philosophy ka craze hai
Ho.. Kehti hai yeh ik phase hai [x2 times]
Haan Kehti hai yeh ik phase hai
Auooo... auooo...
Wooo he he

Movie-London Paris New York

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=7f9El6m4KyI[/YOUTUBE]

Ritu aur Raj dono sath mein dace kar rahe hote hai aur gana bhi khatam ho jata hai toh Ritu kehti hai-Ammm Raj mein chalti hoon kafi der ho gayi hai

Raj- are ritu abhi toh ayi ho aur abhi jane ki baat kar rahi hoon

Ritu-nahi Raj plese samjha karo

Raj-are janam tum samjha karo

RITU-Rajj plzzz

Raj-acha chalo mein tumhe tumhare ghar tak drop kar seta hoon.

Ritu-nahi woh mein apni car leke ayi mein chali jaungi

Raj-u sure

Ritu-hmm bye..

Raj-hmmm(sadly) bye

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Khanna"s house

Ritu-Hey bhagwaan mujhe aaj bacha lena pata nahi mom dad kitna gussa karenge...Ritu jaise hi ghar mein enter karti hai toh ek ladki kehti hai-Yeh koi ghar ane ka time hai..dekha bhi hai time kya ho raha hai...Ritu yeh sab sun kar darr jati hai

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Edited by sainiayshi14 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hiee.. all 🤗

I know yeh update padh ke mujhe fafii dant padh sakti hai but mein kya karu meine jaisi story sochi hai mein waisa hi likh rahi hoon...hope ki aap sab ko pasand aya hoon don't forget to press like button 👍🏼 and thanxx for your lovely comments it means a lot to me

Note to all:-ab sabhi se puch na chahti hoon kya aap log Radio sunte hoo aur agar sunte ho to kya kabhi Neelesh Misra ki story suni hai apne comments mein zaroor batana.😃😊


Ayushi⭐️


ARE ARE KAHAN CHALE PRECAP NAHI DEKHNA KYA = Naina's entry
Edited by sainiayshi14 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Raj and Aalekh are best friends from childhood!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Aalekh now encourages Raj to go and show Vicky!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Vicky tried to cheat but Raj won as he is just the best!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Vicly Raj ko dhamki deta hai but Raj answered him back well!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Aalekh is very intelligent and knows when he has to make his exit!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj has a crush on Ritu magar Ritu jab dekho usse chipakti rehti hai!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

The song is very nice!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

I am sure Raj will realise his true love when he meets Naina!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Ritu is late and is scared of her mom and dad!!!!!

I am sure the girl saying those things was Ritu's sister Naina!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊


Edited by Shaina_b - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
hey sweetheart!!!

sorry for the delay yaar!!!

was busy...kya yar tune to jet speed main update diya...clapping*

the update was awesome!!!

sorry haan ke maine pehle part pe kitne der tak res rakha ...but no probs 1st part ka comment bhi idher hi de deti hoo😆

first part was really good...it was mind-blowing!!!!

i could almost the intensity in that room!!!

oh who's that vicky????

anyways the 2nd part was good too!!!

raj love ritu😡...

this is heart breaking!!!!

i think the girl was naina ...who is not shown yet!!!

anyways plz cont soon!!!

love u tons

TC

esha



*****edited****

hurry te phuure te turre...LOLZ m not making sense at all am i ?🤣

anyways me happy raj don't love ritu...😍

i love ur fic even more now!!!!!!!❤️❤️❤️

and i am pretty sure yeh dhamki dene waali ria madam he hoongi ya shaina...😆🤣...anyways who ever it was ...it was a good choice👍🏼...we can't see raj with anyone else ...and especially with taht good for nothing ritu 🤣



Edited by backy - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey ayushi, good to see u here... 👏 👏 👏...one more fic

like ur fic, good going, sorry didn't comment on 1st aprt, just read it now...hmm to match b/w vicky n raj n like we all know match to Raj hi nai jaatna tha after all he is the hero...n yes he won 👏 👏 👏...n yes liked Alekh too, its good to see both of them together as a friend...looking fwd to ur fic

But ye kia like u said yr ritu kahan sai a gai 😕 😕 😕 ...but chalo u make us happy tht in the next part u'll introduce us with naina..n phr after few updates RN story 😊 😊 😊 ..till thn nice work...

cont soon n do pm me...

Take care

Edited by Innocent_eyes - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
hi
the up is good
so raj and vicky started their match
vicky who doesnt wan to loss his heroic image tries to cheat in the matchbut raj he had his full concertration makes him lose the match
raj and alekh was having their convo after the match when ritu who is raj's gf appears there
raj tries to win ritu 's heart with his song
wow
but me waiting for naina'a entry
plz cont soon and pm me
mama u have edited the part very good 👏
i love u 😊
Edited by ronojoy_ria - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
nice part
Alekh n Raj best friend really nice n new thought
Raj n Ritu... but i like the song part
waiting 4 next part n mystery girl😍

(naina ki entry kab hogi)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
hey aayushi nice part😊😊😊

its good that you edited ritu's part i was getting confused over her and raj's relationship 😊😕😉
now i am a bit relieved that raj has only crush on ritu not love which i was thinking before your editing😉😛😊

continue soon😉
thanks for the pm😊
shreya😊

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