PassionAggression Part 2 - A confession, challenge

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Marybarton

@Marybarton

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: Sivaranjani
Hey Mary!! This series is good as always like your other one "Poolside"!!!

Loved the way how she made him confess..
Hope this is not the last part!!

Please PM me next time!!

Thank you! You are so good to read both :) Poolside it about to end by the way.

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ArhiIPKKND

@ArhiIPKKND

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

That was nice but too short dear...pls continue...

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naina

@warriorprincess

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

absolutely loved it!!! fav bit:

Arnav: Fine. You want to hear it? I love you. I love you and I have never loved any other. I respect you and I would never take advantage of you. Happy now?

KKG: High time you admitted it.

please do write more :)

naina

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Honkytonk

@Honkytonk

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Beautifully written...totally loved it...so sweet how Arnav confessed after Khushi's playing hard to get!!!!!

Many thanks for PM.

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anjali

@rosette80

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

wat man..i was engorssed into t.hope these scenes will be there after the mariage soon..hayeee.ee...please continue/

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Marybarton

@Marybarton

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: rosette80
wat man..i was engorssed into t.hope these scenes will be there after the mariage soon..hayeee.ee...please continue/

Can't wait to see them put some hurt behind and be their Tom and Jerry selves again after marriage.

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-doe-eyes-

@-doe-eyes-

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

atta girl Khushi! show him what you're made of! Loved it:)

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molten_lava

@molten_lava

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Geez Girl! Do you really complain that u have few readers of your work.

I don't think even my one OS has received so many likes.

And you write fab Honey! Truly Fab.

U know during Arhi encounters I could feel my heart go All Dhak- Dhak😳. That was one hot OS. I mean I could completely feel the heat and tension between them.

I need fresh air.😆

P.S. I loved the first part too.😃 Thought I'd comment it here itself.

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Sumi

@mumz

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#59

What sould I say that people haven't told you already?

Again I'll say you caught the essence of the characters. It cud have been the script for them. Loved it immensely, especially the post dance session! 😉

Ideally the dance as portrayed on screen should have been followed by some more intense scenes...on screen it was a let-down. Yours gave us what we all wanted to see!

You shud carry on writing, no matter what..