PassionAggression Part 2 - A confession, challenge - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
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absolutely brilliant 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ooohhh ...

The end's smashing ... I swear I almost visualized it with sound effects ... glass breaking, everything shattering, down to pin drop silence ...

With Arnav's arms wide open, and Khushi staring at her proud lion bowing to only her ...

Lovely!

-S
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: lilmzsunshine

ooohhh ...


The end's smashing ... I swear I almost visualized it with sound effects ... glass breaking, everything shattering, down to pin drop silence ...

With Arnav's arms wide open, and Khushi staring at her proud lion bowing to only her ...

Lovely!

-S



You are my ideal reader! That's exactly what I was going for!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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that was brilliant enjoyed both parts 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
Great writing! Read almost all of it...had me glued :)
Keep writing! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow that was a good one Mary 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved the update... The second is not continuity of the first right... But it was good.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome x
Continue soon Mary :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79
uff the kitchen scene was hawt.

beautiful prose.. keep up the good work!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
that was awesome i like that he confessed first...update soon

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