SS Rajpreet: Tu Jaane Naa-Updt pt33 pg49 Do Read - Page 9

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Posted: 13 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: neha fan1

awww dat was lovely! I needed dat after all da fustration dat is portrayed in da show..why couldnt pankeeta roka happen lyk dis..update soon!

Thanku very much dear...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: sen_madhuban

haye sneha...only ur beautiful fantasies can help us survive in dis era of EA...

u still have positivity left 2 spin out so beautifully such a sugary sweet roka scene...wth song...dance...& kiss...👏 👏...

my OS yesterday prooved...dat i have lost all hope...

but love ur writing...please continue & give us some respite...😊

thanks dear...😃 and haa show mein sab kuch itna negative ho raha hai ki after watching one irritating eps i started writing this making sure atleast no rhona dhona in SS...😆😆
Fantasies can come true in the show also agar Cvs chahe toh...😉...hope they listen to we fans and bring back the charm in the show...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: Bobby1810

It is really awesome. I love the scenes between our Rajpreet. It is very romantic. This is what we need. Thank you so much.👍🏼👏

thanks a lot for loving it gurminder...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
Awesome Sneha !
I was at work and just opened to skim and read it later on when I am at home. But I have read it 3 to 4 times as I really loved it and tumhari vajah se mujhe der tak work karna pada 😊 to finish of my work in time which i spent on your FF 😃
Love the optimism in your FF and Roka ho tho aisa ho dhamaal ka.
Your FF made me blush😳 a lot
Absolutely Loved Rajpreet's moments yaar .Too cute ..
you made my day after watching all stupid EA CV's are showering on us forcibly
What's After ROKA ? Now Try writing Rajpreet's ROKA 😉
Good Job Babe !
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
Awww Sneha my Rajpreet ohhh too lovely and romantic 😍...superb dear lovely scenes for Rajpreet superb👏 👏 continue and again waiting for beautiful Rajpreet scenes
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: ankitaluv

Awesome Sneha !
I was at work and just opened to skim and read it later on when I am at home. But I have read it 3 to 4 times as I really loved it and tumhari vajah se mujhe der tak work karna pada 😊 to finish of my work in time which i spent on your FF 😃
Love the optimism in your FF and Roka ho tho aisa ho dhamaal ka.
Your FF made me blush😳 a lot
Absolutely Loved Rajpreet's moments yaar .Too cute ..
you made my day after watching all stupid EA CV's are showering on us forcibly
What's After ROKA ? Now Try writing Rajpreet's ROKA 😉
Good Job Babe !

😆😆 ur work got delayed...hehe...Rajpreet itna cute jodi hai so me making use of their superb chemistry in my SS...so i would say not me but Rajpreet made ur work got delayed...😃😆
and thanku for reading again and again dear...😃
bahut enjoy karli na rajpreet kal tak abh thoda story pe lekar aungi...😉 will post it today next part ...have to start writing now...and Pehle pankeeta ka marriage honi hai which will happen soon after that Rajpreet roka for sure...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: Raj_preet

Awww Sneha my Rajpreet ohhh too lovely and romantic 😍...superb dear lovely scenes for Rajpreet superb👏 👏 continue and again waiting for beautiful Rajpreet scenes

thanku very much Meenu...😃
and haa as the story moves there will be more cutee rajpreet scenes...😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
Hello All firstly thanku for all the appreciations...😃
those who didnt read Day6 yet below is the link...check pg10...😊

Here iam with Day7 hope u all will like it do read...😃...forgive if any mistakes...will wait for ur comments...if u liked it then do press like button...😉😊

Part7

Day7:

It's Friday morning...its been 7 but Preeto...Bani and Sonu still sleeping...
Ishu asks Dhruv of her staying for 2 more days...Dhruv agrees...Dhruv and Simi leave back to home...
Rajbeer also gets back to his Air office quarters...
Preeto gets up at 8...and she sees bani sonu still sleeping she wakes them up...gets ready and goes down...
Papaji: reading paper in hall...sees preeto and asks her...aaj boutique ja rahi hai na preeto puttar..
Preeto: haa papaji going at 11
she goes to beeji who says dhruv and simi left...she asks beeji abt Rajbeer...
Beeji: Rajbeer bhi chalagaya apne quarters...keh raha tha office bhi jana hai jaldi...kuch meeting hai aaj...
Preeto: acha beeji...she then thinks to herself chalegaye mujhe bina bataye...atleast phone toh karte mein uth jati...
at 11 Preeto goes to Boutique where simi has already come...they say gudmorning to each other...
Simi says that they have to go market to buy material...
Preeto: haa yaad hai simran aaj chalte hain at 4 boutique thoda jaldi close karke
Simi: says okkk
Simi and Preeto have lunch at the boutique...and then preeto thinks to call Rajbeer...
She calls him...
Rajbeer: he attends the call...ha preeto bolo...
Preeto: tum mujhe bina bataye kyun chale gaye aaj subah..
Rajbeer: Preeto tumhe disturb nahi karni thi...kahi tumhare khubsurat sapna na tuta jaye isliye...
Preeto: smiles...and says acha acha filmy dialogue bandh karo...
Rajbeer: acha preeto i have to attend a meeting now so will call u later...
at 3:30 itself Preeto and Simran close the boutique and start to the market they do get into some few shops but they didnt get any good quality material with preferable prices..
simran: kya preeto kahi bhi humare pasand ka material nahi mil raha hai...
Preeto: Simran tum bilkul chinta mat karo mai hoon na..chalo dusre gali mein try karte hain...
they go to the other row in the market which happens to be the same street where Rajbeer' s shop is there...she was about to get into one shop in the street she suddenly stops and notices from far Rajbeer' s shop...she thinks to herself yeh shop toh Rajbeer ka hai lekin khula kaise hai...
Simi: kya hua preeto chalo...
Preeto: simran tum jao mein abhi yeh samne wali dukan jake athi hun..
Simi: ok preeto jaldi ana...
preeto now goes to rajbeer' s shop which happens to be wholesale materials shop...she asks the shopkeeper yeh shop kabse khula hai...mera matlab naya shop hai kya...
Shopkeeper: ji madam ji 4 months hua hai...
Preeto: acha rent pe liya hai..business kaisa chal raha hai..
Shopkeeper: rent nahi ji own hai...owner kahi bahar gaye huye hain...aapko koi kaam tha unse...
Preeto: she gets doubt and says ji nahi unka naam kya bataya ji...
Shopkeeper: says some name...which is not rajbeer' s name...
Preeto: gets shocked...says thanku and leaves...
rajbeer ne shop bhejdiya lekin kyun...iske baare mein kabhi bataya bhi nahi baat bhi nahi huyi mujhe...unse puchna padega...
she thinks to call but then doesnt as he said he has some meeting and that he will be busy...
So She goes near simi who is selecting material...finally after preeto bargaining they both get the good material in the shop for purchasable price...

In Dhillion' s Home evening:
Meeta di and Ishu in room talking about how yest function went well...
so while talking Ishu di thinks to tell about Preeto...
Meeta di says to ishu tujhse kuch zarruri baat karni thi..Ishu says mujhe bhi apse important baat karni thi Meeta di...
Meeta di acha toh tu pehle bol...woh Preeto ke baare mein...woh republic day ke din Rajbeer aur Preeto saath chale the car mein...aur mein dhruv
simi dusre car mein...
Meeta di: ha pata hai usdin rajbeer ne drop kiya tha
Ishu: Meeta di suniyo toh hum icecream shop gaye the bapas athe waqt aur waha dhruv aur maine Rajbeer aur Preeto ko dekha...aur dono bahut khush lag rahe the...usdin undono ko waise dekhke mujhe toh lagta hai dono ek dusre se pyaar karte hain..
Meeta di: acha yeh toh badi achi khabar hain Ishu...mujhe toh shuru se lag raha tha ki in dono ke beech kuch chal raha tha...ha jyada ladte the banti nahi thi dono ka lekin dekhte hi koi bhi keh dega ki pasand karte hain..
Ishu: ha Meeta di lekin humse chupa rahe hain dono...
Meeta di: dekhte hain kitna din chupate hain...meri shaadi ki baad na beeji se kehke preeto ki bhi shaadi karvani chahiye...
Both laugh and feel happy...and then ishu asks ha di aapne kaha kuch baat karni thi...
ha Ishu woh sunny ji hain na unke baare mein...
umbrella bol raha tha ki sunny ji preeto se pyaar karte hain...
Ishu: sunny ji preeto se lekin
Meeta: ha Ishu aur sun i knew frm before itself about Preeto i mean did had doubt that Preeto Rajbeer ko pasand karti hai woh KC ke din se hi pata chal gaya tha...isliye maine Pankaj se bol diya ki sunny ji ko roke aur bol de Rajbeer aur Preeto ke baare mein nahi toh tujhe pata hai na sunny ji ka toh band bajadegi preeto...
Preeto who jus came back from boutique comes in the room..heard the last sentence and asks mein kyun sunny ji ka band bajaungi...ha kya baate chal raha hai mere baare mein...
Ishu: Preeto tu agayi kaisa raha aaj ka din...
Preeto: bahut acha raha ishu di...waise bataya nahi kya baate kar rahe the abhi abhi...
Ishu: kuch nahi preeto
Meeta di : ishu boldete hai abh chupane se kya fayda...
Preeto: aisi kya chupane wali baat hai ha...
meeta di starts telling about sunny matter...
Preeto: kya sunny ji mujhse pyaar karte hain...unko toh mein abhi batata hun...she gets up angrily...
Meeta di: stops her ...preeto tu ruk jyada sherni maat ban waise bhi kehdiya hai sunny ji ko ki yeh sabh nahi hoga bechara dukh ke maare ro raha hoga...tu abhi ja mat...
Preeto: ha meeta di aapne sahi kaha...mein kisi aur din baat karke unhe batadungi ki mein unse pyaar nahi kar sakti...
she then changes topic asking where is bani...
Ishu says Bani shayad neeche beeji ki kamre mein hogi...

Dhillion Family have dinner...while having dinner papaji talks about Rajbeer...and how well he handled the work...Preeto smiles and blushes...both Meeta and Ishu see her blushing when Papaji and Beeji were talking about Rajbeer...
After dinner Preeto doesnt go to sleep and was waiting for rajbeer' s call...
Rajbeer was busy in office with more work as tommorow he has to go on a mission...he later after reaching his room calls her...
Rajbeer: says hiii preeto
Preeto: Rajbeer mein kabse intezaar kar raha tha apka call ke liye...
Rajbeer: aaj bahut kaam tha office mein Preeto busy hogaya tha isliye call nahi karpaya..he excitedly says preeto mein bahut important mission pe ja raha hun kal...wish karo mujhe...
Preeto: says all the besttt Rajbeer...and she thinks that its better to talk about the shop matter tommorow evening after he returns back frm mission...
after their phone talk they say goodnight to each other and end the call...
Edited by snehapatro - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sneha what can I say but Vah Vah. So beautifully written. We are blessed to have so many talented writers and you are one of them. I loved it. Thank you so much. Hats of to you.👍🏼👏🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: Bobby1810

Sneha what can I say but Vah Vah. So beautifully written. We are blessed to have so many talented writers and you are one of them. I loved it. Thank you so much. Hats of to you.👍🏼👏🤗

thanks a lot for loving my SS and for all the appreciation dear ...😃

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